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The first kiss by lioness729

reviews for The first kiss by lioness729


Wednesday 23rd June 2010 17:36
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I like Lily's hair style

Saturday 1st July 2006 12:57
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WHAT
i thought it was HG
but it is great

Tuesday 2nd May 2006 18:14
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Lily's pose is really well done, and the emotions in the picture are sweet and summery. Almost innocent. I like. James's anatomy could use a bit of work, but that's a hard angle! I always have trouble with shoulders from the side like that too, so I sympathize.

Saturday 1st April 2006 07:01
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Heh, nice and innocent this one is.

Good work.

Saturday 16th July 2005 07:56
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I LOVE it. *sigh* So romantic

Saturday 18th June 2005 08:19
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Its a pity it isn't Harry and Ginny bcause it would be the perfect illustration for my story The Oak Tree. Leaving aside my personal preferences, its a good illustration. One small thing - her eyebrow? Keep up the good work.

Thursday 16th June 2005 10:56
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It's very cute ;)

Wednesday 8th June 2005 10:33
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I thought Lily's hair was a dark red... Anyway wonderful piece of art! Congrats!

Thursday 12th May 2005 14:26
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This is wonderful! I especially love the soft tones ... what medium did you use?
Thursday 12th May 2005 14:26Author Response

Thank you!  I used Photoshop CS.


Thursday 12th May 2005 14:26
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This is wonderful! I especially love the soft tones ... what medium did you use?

Tuesday 10th May 2005 14:17
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This is soooo sweet!

Monday 9th May 2005 19:20
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Is this from a story or from your imagination?
Monday 9th May 2005 19:20Author Response
From my imagination.

Thursday 5th May 2005 17:25
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Awwwww This is adorable. I love the soft edges. They give an added sweetness. I also really like the shade of Lily's dress. This is def. going to inspire me to get the next poem in my L/J series out. Thanks~ Megs
Thursday 5th May 2005 17:25Author Response
Thank you!  Is your L/J series posted anywhere?  I'd love to check it out.

Thursday 5th May 2005 12:38
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Yay for Lily and James! You can kind of tell -- Ginny's supposed to be a lot shorter than Harry, right? Plus... I think that Harry is entirely too shy to make the move, like you have James doing in this picture. =)

Tuesday 3rd May 2005 19:46
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Well, they're two different characters, lol.  I think that Lily is a prettier pretty girl than Ginny...I feel like Ginny's supposed to be attractive, but in less of a delicate way.  And also, the freckles.

Ah the freckles. But as someone said, the eyebrow is a little misplaced, and generally the picture seems to be composed of simple strokes (sorry but I'm not good at art criticism jargon) so I didn't think you paid attention to these minor minor details while you have paid attention to other major minor details, like the general texture of her hair. And I think, ahem, that the swell of her chest should come a little further left.

Tuesday 3rd May 2005 13:39
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I'm going to review again...because people didn't know this way Lily...?  I got it because you made the dress green.  Did you do that on purpose since you didn't make Lily's eyes open (It's very rude to kiss someone with eyes open,.)?

Tuesday 3rd May 2005 13:39Author Response
I actually didn't do it on purpose--or maybe I did subconsciously?  Because I feel like there should be some amount of green associated with Lily, what with JKR constantly shouting at us that her eyes are a VERY IMPORTANT COLOR.  *wants to knowwww*

Tuesday 3rd May 2005 13:36
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Glasses totally get in the way!  My boyfriend wears the biggest black glasses ever and they got tangled in my hair. 

I love Lily and James and I must admit that I fell in love with you picture.  Can I post it on this RP site that I help run, with your name on it of course, it's just that....I have a thing for Lily/James. 

HINT:  I found if you make him take off the glasses he's almost blind...hehe....many ways to have fun with that one! 

Tuesday 3rd May 2005 13:36Author Response

Haha aww, your boyfriend has Harry Potter glasses.  That's so cute. :) 

Oh man, I have a thing for Lily/James too.  They're all I've been writing and drawing lately!  It's my favorite kind of HP het.

As for posting this on the RP site, sure, go right ahead!  Thanks for asking.  I'm glad you like it so much!! *squishes*


Tuesday 3rd May 2005 12:11
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Oooh, adorable.... Wowzah, I can't help but love it- even though I'm not a proud H/G supporter! lol Great work. ;) :D :)
Ahhh, of course! I did actually think that it might be them, but he just looked so much like Harry... 'Course, 'e's supposed to look like him!! lol Silly me.... Still, 'mazin work! ;) :)

Tuesday 3rd May 2005 07:19
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Erm, of course that's Lily.  I knew that.    

 Enlighten me, why is it "of course" Lily?

Do you mean why did I draw Lily?  Um, because I wanted to?

No no, Delani said "of course that's Lily" (and James), as if it could not be Ginny (and Harry). I see no difference. Even if you originally intended drawing Lily. What definitively differentiates Lily and Ginny?

Tuesday 3rd May 2005 07:19Author Response

Well, they're two different characters, lol.  I think that Lily is a prettier pretty girl than Ginny...I feel like Ginny's supposed to be attractive, but in less of a delicate way.  And also, the freckles.  I have no idea if that made any sense, but... lol


Monday 2nd May 2005 19:53
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Oh my oh my oh my this is beauuuutiful! Wonderful work. Is there a bigger version somewhere? Send me one at jamadagni at gmail dot com. [Without zipping, please.] Thanks.
Wow, thank you!  I'll email you straight away
I am waiting... :) BTW I still like to think of it as Harry/Ginny, not Lily/James.

Monday 2nd May 2005 19:53
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Erm, of course that's Lily.  I knew that.    

 Enlighten me, why is it "of course" Lily?


Monday 2nd May 2005 19:53Author Response

Do you mean why did I draw Lily?  Um, because I wanted to?


Monday 2nd May 2005 18:58
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Erm, of course that's Lily.  I knew that.    

 


Monday 2nd May 2005 09:01
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Nice emotion.
where are Harry's glasses?
Monday 2nd May 2005 09:01Author Response
On his face, I'd imagine, as this is Lily/James.  James took them off before kissing her, though, as it is v. difficult to kiss someone while wearing glasses.  They get in the way. 

Monday 2nd May 2005 00:59
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Oooh, adorable.... Wowzah, I can't help but love it- even though I'm not a proud H/G supporter! lol Great work. ;) :D :)
Monday 2nd May 2005 00:59Author Response
Thankyou!  Neither am I, really...it's Lily/James. 

Sunday 1st May 2005 18:39
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 Perfect. Exactly as I imagined it. Did Ginny take off Harry's glasses? He, He, He. Good job!
Sunday 1st May 2005 18:39Author Response
Haha...well, it's Lily/James, not Ginny/Harry.  But yes.

Sunday 1st May 2005 09:30
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WOW!!! Great work
Sunday 1st May 2005 09:30Author Response
Thankyou!

Sunday 1st May 2005 08:47
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Thats Really good! I really like that image! Did you do it from a favorite story?
Sunday 1st May 2005 08:47Author Response
Actually, I didn't!  Although drawing from a story has actually been something I've wanted to do...

Sunday 1st May 2005 02:33
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Wow, I can't believe you only have three reviews for this. This is wonderful! Only, what happened to his glasses?
Hoy, it was removed of course. Don't bespectacled people necessarily do that before kissing? Otherwise their lens will get smudged and also they will be afraid whether the glasses will fall off and break. (No offence.)
Sunday 1st May 2005 02:33Author Response

Hee, you got it.  Thanks so much; I'm happy this has been getting such a nice response. :)


Sunday 1st May 2005 02:30
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Oh my oh my oh my this is beauuuutiful! Wonderful work. Is there a bigger version somewhere? Send me one at jamadagni at gmail dot com. [Without zipping, please.] Thanks.
Sunday 1st May 2005 02:30Author Response
Wow, thank you!  I'll email you straight away.

Saturday 30th April 2005 22:02
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Wow, I can't believe you only have three reviews for this. This is wonderful! Only, what happened to his glasses?
Saturday 30th April 2005 22:02Author Response
He took them off--it's very hard to kiss someone while they still have their glasses on.

Saturday 30th April 2005 20:06
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I adore this!!  It's really great  ^_^

 

Saturday 30th April 2005 20:06Author Response
Thanks so much! <3

Saturday 30th April 2005 19:39
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Very nice picture. Ginny's eyebrow seems to be off, though. And Harry's forearm is about half as long as Ginny's is. Other than those minor flaws, its great! I'd love to see more of your work.

Saturday 30th April 2005 19:39Author Response
Ooh, thanks for pointing that out.  I was attempting to foreshorten, but that's never been my strong suit. :p  By the way, it's Lily/James, not Harry/Ginny.

Saturday 30th April 2005 11:56
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Aw, this really is darling. Though it seems Ginny wouldn't always be in a dress, I do love the outfit. And he's got his glasses off. Cute.

 

Saturday 30th April 2005 11:56Author Response
Thank you!  It's not Ginny, though, it's Lily.