DaFalcon Tuesday 12th June 2012 11:20 | Left Behind |
Very beautiful! |
GiHeLu Sunday 8th February 2009 13:18 | Left Behind |
great fic! |
drummersgirl Wednesday 22nd October 2008 08:33 | Left Behind |
Loved it! |
Hermione Granger-Weasley Wednesday 30th July 2008 23:27 | Left Behind |
So sweet!!! |
gymnastgal19 Monday 21st July 2008 15:20 | Left Behind |
aww! nice story! |
hmrpotter Saturday 17th May 2008 23:22 | Left Behind |
This is the first story I've read on this site and it was very good. H/G is my favorite ship and I think you captured them brilliantly. |
xoiownharrysface Friday 9th May 2008 08:20 | Left Behind |
FABULOUS!!! |
pepsi3015 Tuesday 25th March 2008 18:28 | Left Behind |
Excellent writing. I love it! |
gymnastgal19 Saturday 12th January 2008 19:17 | Left Behind |
nice story... although i thought that ginny would say or do something different at the end... same with harry
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majolie Thursday 20th December 2007 09:49 | Left Behind |
Lovely. |
Felicity_P Saturday 10th November 2007 13:41 | Left Behind |
Beauiful. Really and truly. |
JustAFan Tuesday 3rd July 2007 20:47 | Left Behind |
Just right. |
pretty_ginny_girl Monday 2nd April 2007 00:47 | Left Behind |
ok that was the sweetest thing i've ever read!!!!!!!
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MercuryBlue Thursday 31st August 2006 08:30 | Left Behind |
For some reason, there is no link pointing to your story from anywhere on the site. This ought to be fixed, preferably soon, as I would very much like to read a story this highly recommended. |
BasketKiwi Thursday 16th June 2005 19:26 | Left Behind |
YEAH! My computer's working again! That was brilliant! I agree with all the billions of other reviewers: MUST WRITE MORE!! You should add more chapters or something! It had a lot of potential for a one-shot-sequal even, if you don't want to write a whole long story! Very well written. I imagine it close to something JKR would write, though she'd probably drag it out longer, but that only makes me more anxious! And yeah, while she might not have had them , you did. And I liked it better that way! |
BasketKiwi Thursday 16th June 2005 18:54 | Left Behind |
I've read all these reviews and the summary and the story sounds really good, but I think there must be something wrong with my story because there's nothing there for me to click on to read it! UGGH! Now I want to know what happened! Anyway, I've read your other stories and they were brilliant, so if this stupid computer ever starts working again I'll be sure to read it and write a better review! |
tante Tuesday 8th February 2005 01:03 | Left Behind |
Excellent emotion. Wow!
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SanityEscapesMe Tuesday 2nd November 2004 20:18 | Left Behind |
I loved it...I wonder how JK Rowling will have them get close. This was great though. |
mary-v Tuesday 12th October 2004 19:07 | Left Behind |
This was so *sigh* beautiful. A bittersweet story. This is honestly how they could get together in the books(if they do, but I hope with all my heart that they do!) Well, please write more!
~Maria~ |
obsidiana Wednesday 6th October 2004 10:20 | Left Behind |
OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! that just gave me the warm fuzzies...I would love to see more of this universe.
I hope you write more to it.
Obsidiana |
TigerLily8186 Monday 6th September 2004 16:05 | Left Behind |
Ohhh my I can just imagine the look of Tonks' face. Almost priceless. Just the right amount of angst and sweetness. Good writings. |
z26 Friday 30th July 2004 14:26 | Left Behind |
Cute Fic!!! I enjoyed reading this story very much. I liked this part
Tonks' awed voice rumbled in his ears, but he still said nothing, only holding onto Ginny more tightly. He felt her squeeze him briefly before speaking to Tonks.
Thanks for writing! |
RdeHwyll Wednesday 7th July 2004 13:12 | Left Behind |
Just one word -- "Wow!" |
AianaWeasley Saturday 3rd July 2004 02:58 | Left Behind |
Very, very sweet.
Her face flushed abruptly, but her voice stayed strong. "I just wanted… I just thought… Well, I wanted to spare you from any things he might say to you about me, that's all," she replied, back straightening.
He crossed his arms, not mollified in the least. "Maybe I didn't want to be spared," he muttered. How dare she assume about his feelings!
Very well-written, showing how mixed-up Harry is feeling at the time, not absolutely sure about his feelings for Ginny.
I also, loved the last few lines, and I thought it was great of you to insert Tonks and the R/Hr moments to add a little humor in there.
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Aibhinn Tuesday 29th June 2004 22:35 | Left Behind |
Very, very nice job. Completely in-character, and with a depth of emotion that kept the angst from being too overwhelming. It wasn't a sob-fest; it was a young man dealing with guilt. I thoroughly enjoyed this. |
DailyProphetReporting Monday 28th June 2004 05:14 | Left Behind |
I'm very impressed with this. You did an excellent job compressing a plot that could have justifiably been stretched out into a 100,000-word story to fit the requirements here. This did seem a bit rushed at the beginning -- I think seeing a bit more of the exchange of letters would have helped set up the conclusion -- but that's definitely understandable in a contest fic.
The actual dialogue between Harry and Ginny is brilliantly done. You cover so much of Harry's painful past very quickly, but it all flows naturally from one point topic to the next and even the fluffy conclusion fits in really well.
"Because you did the same for me."
That's the key line. In a few words you neatly explain the shared past and understanding that makes the whole storyline work.
I also thought Tonks was a great addition, too. Her reaction both to Harry's initial letter and to seeing Harry and Ginny together nicely livened the story.
All in all, very well done!
-KC |
wren Tuesday 15th June 2004 16:51 | Left Behind |
Excellent. |
Bistyboo1974 Monday 14th June 2004 15:13 | Left Behind |
Ahhh, angsty summer lovin'...gotta love that. This story makes me want to follow Harry and Ginny to the Burrow for more.
Well done!
Bisty |
Mr. Intel Monday 14th June 2004 11:24 | Left Behind |
Hmm. Overall, it was a very well written and wonderfully crafted story. However, I don't like the constraints that challenges usually place on length and your story suffered because of it. The beginning needed to be more fully explored. Ginny and Harry's moment needed to come much later than it did, after they had a chance to be with each other more as friends.
That being said, considering what you had to work with, I think both Ginny's and Harry's reactions were perfect. Angsty, heart-wrending and full of emotion. Excellent job. |
Jenadamson Monday 14th June 2004 10:39 | Left Behind |
That was lovely. Harry's pain was so intense. I like that he iniciated the friendship, and Ginny was a wonderful receptor. Great job. |
RdeHwyll Monday 14th June 2004 10:15 | Left Behind |
Heya, well done! Wish you luck in the competition, and I'm wondering if perhaps there might be more to what you've written -- if not, WHY NOT? (Grin!) Make it longer, fill in more details, write more, write more, write more ... |
Gaineewop Monday 14th June 2004 03:59 | Left Behind |
Wow. That was awesome! I tend to dislike Harry crying on her shoulder, but I thought you pulled it off really well. Fantastic! Truly a great read! |
Lady Chi Sunday 13th June 2004 22:59 | Left Behind |
Hmmm... Interesting idea with this one. Definitely something to consider... I'm not quite sure about the beginning, though. It's hard to write angst without being melodramatic.
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Cera Sunday 13th June 2004 21:39 | Left Behind |
This was really great. I like that it started with simple letters and grew to be more. Ginny's character was done very well, I hope to see more of this.
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Alcarcalime Sunday 13th June 2004 21:15 | Left Behind |
Wow. This is brilliant. It's been a while since I've read an angsty fic and I'm glad I did. |
hairy_hen Sunday 13th June 2004 21:06 | Left Behind |
Wow, this story is really good. I'm impressed by the strength of the interaction between Ginny and Harry. It's a bit unlikely he would come to have feelings for her so quickly, but it's all good. Excellent! |
WandlessOne Sunday 13th June 2004 20:25 | Left Behind |
First Summer Challenge story I've read. Hope you have more in your story bank! |
p0tterfan Sunday 13th June 2004 20:02 | Left Behind |
Good one, but somehow I don't think Harry will come into realizations about Ginny so fast Good for a one-shot FanFic though |
Ima Quidditch Fan Sunday 13th June 2004 18:38 | Left Behind |
This was really wonderful. Ginny seems very in character. I like their interaction, and Tonks is great! |
Pooca Sunday 13th June 2004 18:27 | Left Behind |
Very very sweet. I love how they wrote first, and how Ginny puts him at ease. Great. |