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Tuesday 13th April 2010 14:30 | Forget Me Not |
| Nice story! |
gymnastgal19
Friday 5th October 2007 14:05 | Forget Me Not |
wow! nice story! I'm thinking that you wanted us to think that ron was dead and then it turned out that his memory was just obliviated like lockharts lol
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Aqua Fountain*
Tuesday 24th April 2007 04:44 | Forget Me Not |
Brilliant. Really sweet. I think Ron's recovery was a bit too abrubt, but the story is really good.
Great job
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Uzamaki-girl
Sunday 17th September 2006 19:37 | Forget Me Not |
| This was sweet.^^ |
Hoss
Sunday 16th July 2006 21:32 | Forget Me Not |
| Well done. Thanks |
sas
Monday 17th January 2005 14:24 | Forget Me Not |
beautiful story!
almost had me crying a little at the start! |
bluejeanphoenix
Wednesday 1st December 2004 00:37 | Forget Me Not |
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I love this so much.
Into my favorites it goes! |
jabarber69
Wednesday 24th November 2004 00:54 | Forget Me Not |
| that was good, I was hoping in the end he would get his memory back. you handled that quite well. thank you.... |
HisGirl
Saturday 10th July 2004 13:44 | Forget Me Not |
| Hey! Look I'm sorry for not reading or reviewing it sooner. You know me...or at least I hope you do! It's okay that you didn't win but I got to hand it to you, you were the only person who did Ron/Hermione summer/angst. It's a little harder to compete when all the rest of the writers/readers prefer H/G. You know, I still believe you should of won, it was really really, I mean like really, brilliant. And sometimes I hate you because you have better writing/grammer skills than I do! (But I still love you don't worry ) Continue to write smashing good stories Mate and knock them all dead next time. I know you can! -HisGirl |
RdeHwyll
Wednesday 7th July 2004 13:24 | Forget Me Not |
| Excellent telling -- Very well done! |
Aibhinn
Monday 5th July 2004 18:19 | Forget Me Not |
Excellent story! Completely in-character, and truly angst--poor Ron, unable to remember things; and even worse for Hermione and Harry at the beginning, at least, when they knew what he should know, what he had been like...
Very, very nice job. |
Cera
Sunday 4th July 2004 13:03 | Forget Me Not |
This is such a great short. It's unique, angsty, and heartwarming all at once.
"Arguing isn't helping anyone," Harry interjected. "Just forget it guys, all right?"
"That won't be hard for me," Ron said. "At least I'm good at something."
That line broke my heart! Poor Ron. You wrote the beginning so well, hinting at what happened. Brilliant work. |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Friday 2nd July 2004 14:41 | Forget Me Not |
Wow, that was... I was actually holding my breath! Thank you for the happy ending.
Well written, and a very interesting idea.
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Mr. Intel
Thursday 1st July 2004 08:32 | Forget Me Not |
That was very touching. Awesome portrayal of Ron and Hermione. I loved how Ron came back slowly and how dilligent Harry and Hermione were in helping them. But most of all, I like how you didn't have them kiss. It wouldn't have been natural, but the hand holding was perfect.
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