ionik27
Monday 1st September 2008 08:07 | Once Upon a Time |
| Lovely story!! Thank you! |
gymnastgal19
Friday 28th March 2008 22:07 | Once Upon a Time |
nice story!!! this is a nice and quick telling of lily and james life
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gymnastgal19
Sunday 11th November 2007 00:04 | Once Upon a Time |
wow!!! that was lovely!!!
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DADAGinny
Monday 22nd November 2004 15:36 | Once Upon a Time |
Aw! I wish Harry could pull out this memory and put it in a pensieve!
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mary-v
Monday 11th October 2004 15:26 | Once Upon a Time |
Very nice. Bittersweet, it makes my heart ache since we know it doesn't last very long.
~Maria~ |
Waywren Truesong
Wednesday 6th October 2004 12:47 | Once Upon a Time |
| *wails with teary delight* So -pretty- ... and sad not because the story itself is sad, but because it isn't ... if you get me. Lovely, lovely work. |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Tuesday 5th October 2004 21:13 | Once Upon a Time |
| That was beautiful. Thanks! |
XiaoXiao
Tuesday 5th October 2004 21:10 | Once Upon a Time |
That was so sweet. I loved the way that James tells the story--admitting his ego problems, but still mentioning how handsome he is.
And what a lovely bittersweet ending! |
brios
Tuesday 5th October 2004 19:18 | Once Upon a Time |
what a sweet story! |
arios
Tuesday 5th October 2004 18:17 | Once Upon a Time |
| Really, really sweet story! |
Bring and Fly
Tuesday 5th October 2004 17:29 | Once Upon a Time |
I liked this a lot! The original opening got me straight away and it soon became apparent that it was James and Lily we were talking about. Some good descriptions and I have to admire your ability to be succinct! I just go on and on!
There were places where I smiled in amusement and places where I smiled fondly. I enjoyed the way you took us full circle back to where we started. Lovely! BaF |
