chiantiqueen
Thursday 27th December 2007 02:40 | If Only |
| I love reading stories from Ginny's POV, it's great to get a different perspective of events. Great job with this, it sounds very true to Ginny's character. |
TigerLily8186
Friday 17th December 2004 23:37 | If Only |
ahh the inner turmoil of Ginny's mind. I love to think about what she could be thinking about. Actually, the title of this reminded me of a poem I once wrote with the same title. It had a similar theme to it as well. Nice job. |
DADAGinny
Friday 17th December 2004 17:05 | If Only |
Sigh. Poor Ginny.
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Gridley
Friday 17th December 2004 07:54 | If Only |
"The lady doth protest too much, methinks..."
A very nice missing moment. |
trixiefirecracker
Thursday 16th December 2004 16:22 | If Only |
| Fantastic work! It seems so much like Ginny (or at least how I imagine Ginny!). Good job! Please write more. |
| Saturday 18th December 2004 23:42 | If Only (Author Response) |
Thanks! |
trixiefirecracker
Thursday 16th December 2004 16:21 | If Only |
| Fantastic work! It seems so much like Ginny (or at least how I imagine Ginny!). Good job! Please write more. |
Robert Owen
Thursday 16th December 2004 13:36 | If Only |
A very nice look at the inner Ginny form GoF. I really liked the give and take of her torn feelings, you really hit some good points there. Now, how about a look at Hermione's PoV on the same scene.
Robert
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| Saturday 18th December 2004 23:56 | If Only (Author Response) |
| Thanks. I probably won't write a Hermione one since there's already so many out there. Hmm, I just looked for one but couldn't find one. Well, it seems that way to me! Anyway, thanks for the review. |
Kelleypen
Thursday 16th December 2004 12:26 | If Only |
| Hey, it's nice this is finally up. Way to go Serena! Parts of it remind of I Stand Here Ironing--not in content, but in how you used the internal dialogue. Nice. |
| Saturday 18th December 2004 23:35 | If Only (Author Response) |
"I Stand Here Ironing" is probably what taught me how to use internal dialogue, even though I didn't especially like it. Thanks for the review. |
