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Reviews For Lady's Choice by Zelthian

harry'sgurl
Wednesday 15th June 2005 11:45
Lady's Choice
This is really good.
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Sunday 5th June 2005 19:29
Lady's Choice

A dance, Ron and Hermione getting together and love-tension between Harry and Ginny!! What's not to like?!

Great start!! Please update soon!!!

Lulabelle
Sunday 5th June 2005 16:05
Lady's Choice
This is pretty cute.  I'd like to see how Ginny is going to do this.  Update soon please!  (And YAY for Ron & Hermione getting together!)
p0tterfan
Friday 3rd June 2005 23:26
Lady's Choice
Good beginning. Now that and are setup, focusing the next one on and ?

Looking forward to the next chapter.


sonicdale
Friday 3rd June 2005 22:32
Lady's Choice
Well.
Ron and Hermione finally kissed.
Is this going to be a Dense!Harry Fic?
Feels like it. Keep up the good work.

BTW - if you put Harry in green for the dance, I'll snicker. But not laugh.

Wolf's Scream
Friday 3rd June 2005 16:31
Lady's Choice
Hmmm.... interesting....

Should "they would wonder off into their own
conversations" read "they would wander off into
their own conversations?"

(For that matter, I suspect that the title should
be either "Ladies' Choice" or "Lady's Choice.")

Should "So what are going to do" read "So what are
you going to do?"

Wasn't Vicky cheating -- invitations were to start
after breakfast....
Friday 3rd June 2005 16:39Lady's Choice (Author Response)

Technically, Vicky wasn't cheating. She asked Ron "what he would say", she wasn't ACTUALLY asking him.

Good catch on the other stuff. I'll have my beta change it. :)

flyawayflowergurl
Friday 3rd June 2005 15:52
Lady's Choice
yea yea yea write more!
Friday 3rd June 2005 16:40Lady's Choice (Author Response)
The entire story is in the hands of my beta. He will post it as quickly as we can work through the chapters.
Majick
Friday 3rd June 2005 15:50
Lady's Choice
Wonderful! I've always liked the idea of Sadie Hawknis dances, and it makes for a nice twist on poor Harry (and Ron) having to do all the work.

The way you've tied Ron to Hermione was very cute - logical, brave, and very sweet.

Now, who's going to clue who in? Or will Harry and Ginny work things out themselves? I look forward to finding out
Lady Ginny Potter
Friday 3rd June 2005 14:39
Lady's Choice
Brilliant, truely it is!