KateB Wednesday 28th May 2008 23:14 | The Swing |
Thanks for this little look at Ron and Hermione. Very enjoyable! Will there be more? |
gymnastgal19 Saturday 17th May 2008 13:42 | The Swing |
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gymnastgal19 Saturday 12th January 2008 18:36 | The Swing |
cute story.
i loved the ending
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LoonyMae Monday 17th December 2007 21:00 | The Swing |
SUPER CUTE!!! I really liked this one. Ron finaly realised what's good for him! Again loved it. |
lacyrachil Monday 11th December 2006 10:50 | The Swing |
Nice romance. I am an aspiring romance writer myself...nothing to date though. Very good writing. and are my favorite couple. |
iviolinist Tuesday 5th July 2005 10:49 | The Swing |
Ah, I just love a tale of good R/H fluff. This was a very cute story. I liked that they are both feeling the same helplessness when it comes to Harry, yet Ron is the one who firmly believes the best way to help is simply be there with Harry through it all. The image of the two of them having such a deep discussion while rocking on a swing just made me sigh with contentment. I love to swing when I take my students out for recess. It's so freeing - you can't help but let go of all your concerns when you soar through the air. No wonder Hermione was enjoying it so much. :) Very nicely done, thanks for sharing and good luck! |
Thursday 7th July 2005 21:48 | The Swing (Author Response) |
Yes, I always imagined Ron being very loyal and supportive (not that
Hermione isn't, she just would be feeling very helpless IMO). And
swinging is such a good release. So, I used the swing as the cutest
idea for putting Ron and Hermione together. And so I did it, and this
story is the outcome! Thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed
it!
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iviolinist Tuesday 5th July 2005 10:48 | The Swing |
Ah, I just love a tale of good R/H fluff. This was a very cute story. I liked that they are both feeling the same helplessness when it comes to Harry, yet Ron is the one who firmly believes the best way to help is simply be there with Harry through it all. The image of the two of them having such a deep discussion while rocking on a swing just made me sigh with contentment. I love to swing when I take my students out for recess. It's so freeing - you can't help but let go of all your concerns when you soar through the air. No wonder Hermione was enjoying it so much. :) Very nicely done, thanks for sharing and good luck! |
snowball Tuesday 5th July 2005 02:57 | The Swing |
*Sniff* It was so sad, you had me in tears. Your English teacher is right, share more of your work with others. |
Thursday 7th July 2005 21:50 | The Swing (Author Response) |
I'm glad to have gotten an emotional response from you! Thanks for your support, and for reviewing!
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Sassenach Sunday 3rd July 2005 09:08 | The Swing |
This was a great fic. I love the sincerity and Ron truly seems grown up
by his words. I found it hilarious that Molly and Ginny had been
watching!! The swing growing small was a nice touch and good way to get
them together, literally!
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Thursday 7th July 2005 21:51 | The Swing (Author Response) |
Thank you!
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jeanne Friday 1st July 2005 12:03 | The Swing |
I really liked this one ,also. A lovely combination of, some angst, seriousness, humor{swing charm running out,forcing Mione to sit on Rons lap, and them finally expressing their feelings over chocolate. Good fic.Not my favorite though. |
Thursday 7th July 2005 21:53 | The Swing (Author Response) |
I'm glad you enjoyed it, though it wasn't your favorite. Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot to me!
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happyhornblower Friday 1st July 2005 02:32 | The Swing |
Great story! It was so sweet! I loved how Ron finally came to his senses. It was also very well written!
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Thursday 7th July 2005 21:53 | The Swing (Author Response) |
Thank you! Yes, Ron certainly came to his senses! Thanks for reviewing!
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Arnel Friday 1st July 2005 01:08 | The Swing |
This is a cute story and a commendable first attempt at romance fan fiction. I really liked the humorous part about the swing shaking off Hermione’s charm to send her into Ron’s arms. It looks as if he has finally realized she is a girl and is acting on his instincts! By the way, I agree with Molly that the swing was left out there for an express purpose. I enjoyed reading this story a lot. |
Thursday 7th July 2005 21:55 | The Swing (Author Response) |
It looks as if he has finally realized she is a girl and is acting on his instincts!
Yes it certainly does! Thank you for reading and reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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whitestag Friday 1st July 2005 00:15 | The Swing |
Definitely my favorite of the lot! I love the tenderness and simplicity of the whole story, and how Ron's sensitivity finally comes out. It was all so vivid; I could see it all happening plain as day. Great job! |
Thursday 7th July 2005 21:56 | The Swing (Author Response) |
Thank you!
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Ebola_the_Virus Thursday 30th June 2005 18:11 | The Swing |
Sahar. This is the epidemy of great.
Bloody Brilliant. They need to put this in one of the movies...
I seriously got the chills reading it. lol
I LOVE YOU!
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Thursday 7th July 2005 21:56 | The Swing (Author Response) |
Har har, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
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tante Thursday 30th June 2005 17:55 | The Swing |
Excellent Moment!
Sweet, simple, full of emotion and true to character. My favorite so far! |
Thursday 7th July 2005 21:43 | The Swing (Author Response) |
Thank you! This was my first romance, so I wanted it to be, well,
exactly as you said: Sweet, simple, full of emotion and true to
character. Thanks for your comments!
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Trelawney2213 Thursday 30th June 2005 16:55 | The Swing |
It looks like Ron is finally moving beyond having the "emotional range of a teaspoon." Nicely done!
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Thursday 7th July 2005 21:43 | The Swing (Author Response) |
Thank you! And yes, it certainly seems he is!
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