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Reviews For Never Give Up by Gabriella Du Sult

ionik27
Wednesday 19th November 2008 16:34
Never Give Up
just a quick, short review... You're killing me here... It's almost 2 am and i'm supposed to get up at 6, but I just can't stop reading... But i must, as hard as it may be! But i leave you with the promise of coming back soon to read it all and to review every chapter!


P.S. And I hope you would't dare leave this unfinished, right? Pleease!
misslara
Wednesday 13th July 2005 02:17
Never Give Up

Your story needs a warning label: May cause the uncntrollable urge to laugh. Do not read at work when you're supposed to be reading boring progress reports. People are really looking at me funny right now. Needless to say I thought Ron's reaction to 16 days was hilarious.

Oay I'm skipping ahead here a little but I wanted to tell you that. Beside the humorous note, which had me bursting a giggle (and I don't giggle) there rest of the chapter had an underlying tension, hwich came through loud and clear without being overbearing. My guess is that's partly what made the humour so good, it broke the tension a little. The meeting and then the argument between Harry and Ginny, I was on the edge of my seat there. And then Ron saying they were just like him and Hermione when I was thinking the same thing as I was reading it.

Ofcoarse you built the tension right back up again in the talk between Remus and Bill. A life bond ey, poor Remus and lucky Beatrice. There's no way she's married with the way you introduced her. It's a little cliche I'll give you but since it's the only cliche, it doesn't really count.

I'm waiting with reading on, even though I'm itching to do so, till I get home before I betray myself again.

Wolf's Scream
Saturday 2nd July 2005 19:38
Never Give Up
Brilliant -- I thought that the conversation between Harry & Ginny (with some Ron involvement) was especially good:  what a great way for Harry to get "smacked upside the head (or heart)"!

I look forward to an explanation of how Moony got himself in the Werewolf Bond.
Ainsley
Saturday 2nd July 2005 14:02
Never Give Up
You're killing me! I love this story! More!!!
Snoopym27
Monday 27th June 2005 08:17
Never Give Up
That was really good . Looking forward to the next chapter.