bozokriki
Sunday 6th May 2012 12:13 | Tongue-Tied |
| Very cute bit of fluff. |
Delfino
Saturday 15th May 2010 17:38 | Tongue-Tied |
| Haha that was great! So adorable and very creative. I enjoyed this little piece of fluff quite a bit. Thanks for writing |
moralitas
Saturday 15th August 2009 21:52 | Tongue-Tied |
| aww, sweet. a good story! |
pyromain
Thursday 21st June 2007 11:53 | Tongue-Tied |
| I really liked the story and the short term damage inflicted by the WWW, loved the way the hex unlocks. |
Uzamaki-girl
Saturday 16th September 2006 22:37 | Tongue-Tied |
| This was so good.^^ |
lorgbb
Thursday 22nd June 2006 22:06 | Tongue-Tied |
| now thats a cool invention, though it could get to be annoying... |
daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 24th May 2006 16:36 | Tongue-Tied |
| thats cool. |
ridgeback77
Friday 23rd September 2005 18:20 | Tongue-Tied |
| That was great. Leave it to the twins to create such a biased
treat. I wonder if they would like to know that their baby sister
is using them.
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Magdalene Rose
Monday 11th July 2005 21:03 | Tongue-Tied |
| I love your story! I personaly think that it is the best one in this site. |
shortywithbrains
Tuesday 5th July 2005 20:04 | Tongue-Tied |
| Whoo! Go Fred and George! They're the best. Great fic. |
Daksian
Tuesday 5th July 2005 15:39 | Tongue-Tied |
That was so VERY well done! It was so clever and cute, and the ending was just perfect.
Gred and Forge--matchmakers. Who would have thunk it?
Obviously you did, and figured out how they'd do it in perfect style
(without a word from either of them, to boot!).
Excellent job. Good luck in the competition!
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peas and carrots
Tuesday 5th July 2005 13:23 | Tongue-Tied |
| I'm sorry I might already be too late for the contest, but I really liked this one the best. The others were all good too, but this one just happened to be my favorite. |
levotatingT
Tuesday 5th July 2005 13:05 | Tongue-Tied |
AWWWW I absolutley Loved it. Perfect story for the competetion
great job, keep writing, and plez write back
levotatingT |
Delani
Tuesday 5th July 2005 11:56 | Tongue-Tied |
"With a saucy grin, Ginny handed him the box."
Hah. Way to go, Fred and George!
Delani |
Katieay
Tuesday 5th July 2005 05:19 | Tongue-Tied |
| Bravo! That was... aahh, it was so good! Harry was painful, Ginny was a touch silly, and it was just perfect in all the right spots. And Fred and George, hehehe, their poem cracked me up. Great job! |
TigerLily8186
Monday 4th July 2005 23:01 | Tongue-Tied |
| How cute. It was very amusing how she couldn't speak, and Harry thought that she was ignoring him. The way you ended it was absolutely perfect. |
snowball
Monday 4th July 2005 17:57 | Tongue-Tied |
| A very nice twist in the story. I never suspected that the chocolates were jinxed. |
SassyBird
Monday 4th July 2005 14:31 | Tongue-Tied |
| What a brilliant idea--count on Fred and George. (Now they just need to do Ron and Hermione.) :-P You did a good job with Harry too, he practically radiated JEALOUS! at the beginning, which I found oddly endearing for Ginny's sake, and his reactions seemed in character. I really like the last line too. Lovely piece! |
Split Decision
Monday 4th July 2005 13:16 | Tongue-Tied |
| What an interesting idea! Both Harry and Ginny are very in character, particularly with respect to Harry's jealousy of Neville. Some bits are better written and flow nicer than others, but overall, this is a very good story |
XiaoXiao
Monday 4th July 2005 00:20 | Tongue-Tied |
| That was very, very cute. Great idea!
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Sunshine
Sunday 3rd July 2005 20:27 | Tongue-Tied |
| Leave it to Fred and George. That was a great story. Harry was so noble as he gallantly confused Ginny by telling her what a great guy Neville is. The scene at the dinner table was great. It very funny the way Harry kept moving the dishes out of Ginny's reach. Nice and sweet! |
ginandtonic
Sunday 3rd July 2005 13:48 | Tongue-Tied |
| I really enjoyed this story! The whole thing put a big sappy grin on my face. Well done! :) |
Sassenach
Sunday 3rd July 2005 08:24 | Tongue-Tied |
| Nice I love the twist and how you brought them together! It was a great read!
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TJM
Friday 1st July 2005 15:42 | Tongue-Tied |
Fun story! Just enough tart to balance out the sweet.
Now what happens when Molly, Hermione, and Ron catch Harry and Ginny ....um....eating chocolate? Are Fred and George pleased with the results their products caused in the H/G front or do they go all "big brother" when they see the reality of H/G together? What would happen if F&G make some minor modifications to the chocolates and send some to Voldemort? No more orders to the Death Eaters!! Hah!
Seriously, thanks for the fun story. You have my vote. |
Suky
Friday 1st July 2005 13:44 | Tongue-Tied |
| Very cute! I loved the setting and I though it was written out wonderfully. It really was 'Short and Sweet'. |
Bella
Friday 1st July 2005 11:52 | Tongue-Tied |
Hahahaha, that was very cute! Everyone was very in-character. You definitely have my vote in this contest!
Good luck!
Bella |
jeanne
Friday 1st July 2005 11:40 | Tongue-Tied |
| Really cute. Those twins!!!They,re something else again. |
sonicdale
Friday 1st July 2005 08:04 | Tongue-Tied |
A few things.
Love the chocolates.
The ending was cool.
They said a blessing on the meal? Wow! That's a fanfic first, if I'm right!!!
Love the whole premise. Those twins!!!
Good work. |
malko050987
Friday 1st July 2005 05:55 | Tongue-Tied |
This story is a bit confusing, but the ending is just right.
Keep up the good work! |
Arnel
Friday 1st July 2005 00:21 | Tongue-Tied |
This is an absolutely adorable story. Harry’s in perfect character; easily hurt when it comes to subjects he is uncertain about, especially girls. I really like how confident Neville seems to be now that he has the responsibility that comes with his job at the greenhouse. Leave it to Fred and George to tangle with their sister’s love life! Well done, well done! |
melray1228
Thursday 30th June 2005 19:52 | Tongue-Tied |
| Loved it!! |
Greta_Prewett
Thursday 30th June 2005 19:25 | Tongue-Tied |
| Really funny and sweet. I enjoyed it so much! |
Melindaleo
Thursday 30th June 2005 18:43 | Tongue-Tied |
| This was really cute. The dinner scene was priceless - gives new meaning to the term Food Fight, lol. Gotta love those twins. |
Trystym
Thursday 30th June 2005 17:52 | Tongue-Tied |
| Very good. I always love a good Wheeze.
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Megan SQ
Thursday 30th June 2005 16:48 | Tongue-Tied |
| Pretty cool idea.
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Tesgirl123
Thursday 30th June 2005 11:38 | Tongue-Tied |
| Really fun and cute! The concept was really original as well. Great Job!!! |
martita
Thursday 30th June 2005 10:34 | Tongue-Tied |
| Yes! Let them shut up and spend the rest of their happy lives kissing - only to pause to kill the Dark Tosser, of course. This was very cute... |
amulder
Thursday 30th June 2005 10:11 | Tongue-Tied |
Oohh, fiesty Ginny! Poor Harry, such a boy. (And I was one
as well, at one time, and I do remember how confusing it was at times!)
good job handling the awkward dialog.
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