gymnastgal19
Tuesday 15th January 2008 16:42 | Chocolate Weakness |
cute story I loved the ending. and that game that they were playing is a fun game. lol I love playing that with my friends you can learn so much about a person
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pyromain
Friday 24th August 2007 14:41 | Chocolate Weakness |
| A twist writen like a pro. |
Uzamaki-girl
Thursday 14th September 2006 16:32 | Chocolate Weakness |
This was great. I listened to "For you I will (confidence)" by Teddy Geiger.
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passionflower89
Friday 8th July 2005 06:25 | Chocolate Weakness |
| awww, chocolate kisses, thats so cute... |
Delani
Thursday 7th July 2005 18:38 | Chocolate Weakness |
"...chocolate had always been Harry’s weakness." Perhaps cholcolate, but I'm thinking along the lines of a fiesty redhead. Well done there! I'm sorry I missed the deadline for reviewing, but I enjoyed this, contest-entry or not!
Delani |
Lina
Tuesday 5th July 2005 21:46 | Chocolate Weakness |
Sweet, with some angst... just the way I like it!
-Lina |
shortywithbrains
Tuesday 5th July 2005 19:44 | Chocolate Weakness |
Aww, that was adorable. I love chocolate Kisses, but I think the Hugs are better. You know, it took me about 2 years after I had Hugs to realize that the it was 'Hugs and Kisses..." Haha, one of my moments. I just thought the name Hugs referred to the 2 chocolates 'hugging' and being mixed. Anyways, great story! |
SassyBird
Monday 4th July 2005 15:21 | Chocolate Weakness |
Hmm. Swimming, chocolate and H/G--doesn't get much better than that! The end bit was my favorite. Harry had the perfect blend of shyness and enthusiasm. |
Split Decision
Monday 4th July 2005 14:52 | Chocolate Weakness |
| And so Ginny works her magic. |
XiaoXiao
Monday 4th July 2005 01:10 | Chocolate Weakness |
| Oooh, very sweet, and very nice plot! I really liked the way that
Ginny had a very definite (working!) plan to get Harry to enjoy himself.
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Astrid
Sunday 3rd July 2005 19:31 | Chocolate Weakness |
| This is one of my favorites so far. Good luck with the contest! |
J62442
Saturday 2nd July 2005 14:06 | Chocolate Weakness |
Awwwwwww. That was very sweet and fluffy! I greately enjoyed it and your use of the chocolate connection between Harry and Ginny from OoTP.
Well done!! |
Stephanie
Saturday 2nd July 2005 11:56 | Chocolate Weakness |
| Nice fic :). It's realistic, sweet and funny. You had me laughing out loud at some of the lines :). |
malko050987
Saturday 2nd July 2005 08:50 | Chocolate Weakness |
| okay, best one yet. I'm voting for this one! Yaaaay! |
x_Rose_x
Saturday 2nd July 2005 04:41 | Chocolate Weakness |
| I loved this, it made me smile, it was very well written and I love the
idea and would be more than happy to find that, that was what happened
in HBP I hope it's just as fluffy but I doubt it will be... never mind!
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MrRobertsIII
Saturday 2nd July 2005 02:57 | Chocolate Weakness |
| Cute! I liked the question and secret swapping setup. Good idea. |
SunflowerLynx
Saturday 2nd July 2005 00:24 | Chocolate Weakness |
| Very lovely. I love the chocolate confession idea. I will be trying
that in the future, just so you know. I act as a counselor for people
and everyone dumps their issues on me and I think I'll be using
chocolates on the less-than-willing ones I've been having so far as
patients. I loved your story. It was sweet but it was fulfilling as
well rather than just senseless fluff. I think you deserve major kudos
for this.
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thehopefulGinnyPotter
Friday 1st July 2005 21:32 | Chocolate Weakness |
| Oh this is so sweet, I love it! |
melray1228
Friday 1st July 2005 19:03 | Chocolate Weakness |
| You gotta love those chocolate kisses! Loved it! |
jeanne
Friday 1st July 2005 10:44 | Chocolate Weakness |
| This was fabulous. Just flowed gently to a lovely end. Ginny said just enough to open Harrys eyesre. his behaviour,and the rest came naturally and believably.Best for me so far.My favorite. |
batsnumbereleven
Friday 1st July 2005 05:35 | Chocolate Weakness |
| Awww. Beautiful. Now that's what I call short and sweet. |
Arnel
Friday 1st July 2005 00:53 | Chocolate Weakness |
OOOOHHH! What a lovely variation on Remus Lupin’s remedy this turned out to be. I love stories where Ginny takes charge and doesn’t allow Harry to wallow in self-pity or self-loathing. Your Ginny seems to be very good for Harry, just what the professor ordered: a good, sudden wake-up splash and a friendly talk leading where every reader of JKR’s books wants this pair to end up...snogging each other and enjoying themselves. |
lizaloo3812
Thursday 30th June 2005 22:19 | Chocolate Weakness |
Aw! This was so sweet! I loved it! Just the right amount of fluff and just a touch of angst . Awesome!! |
Adeline Avin
Thursday 30th June 2005 21:29 | Chocolate Weakness |
| This story made me smile. My boyfriend and I have a weakness for those
little Hershey's chocolate kisses as well. They're very addictive. I
enjoyed reading this and will no doubt share it with him, as I'm sure
he will love it too.
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Bella
Thursday 30th June 2005 19:50 | Chocolate Weakness |
Favorite quote:
<<Ginny sniggered, ignoring her stomach flipping at his touch, and pushed her wet hair from her face, “You’re smiling, Harry.”
Harry laughed and shook his head, water flying everywhere, “Yeah, I know.”>>
Excellent. You really managed to capture these two. Great job! Good luck!
Bella |
Greta_Prewett
Thursday 30th June 2005 19:38 | Chocolate Weakness |
| Really nice story! The kiss scene made me smile! Especially when Harry says 'I might be bad at this!' LOL! |
Cambryn
Thursday 30th June 2005 18:30 | Chocolate Weakness |
| very sweet. H/G fluff all the way |
Kelleypen
Thursday 30th June 2005 18:08 | Chocolate Weakness |
| Chocolate, Harry, Ginny, confidences and kisses. Wonderful formula for the nicest of summer fluff. |
tante
Thursday 30th June 2005 17:51 | Chocolate Weakness |
It still amazed Ginny how she could covey a whole paragraph of explanation and ranting in one look.
I love that about Hermione! |
jainasanri
Thursday 30th June 2005 13:26 | Chocolate Weakness |
wonderful story. you've got my vote!
-JS-
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rdprice29
Thursday 30th June 2005 11:11 | Chocolate Weakness |
This was really sweet! Hah! Pun not intended, but fits well, doesn't it?
Great job! |
DDragon
Thursday 30th June 2005 11:00 | Chocolate Weakness |
| A really good ficlet. I like the part where Harry dragged Ginny in. =) |
martita
Thursday 30th June 2005 10:39 | Chocolate Weakness |
| I pleased that Ginny can put Harry in his place, and I think you captured them both very well... |
