kopfsalat2000
Saturday 3rd November 2012 11:22 | The Shattered Glass |
| Poor Dean |
webster
Monday 21st June 2010 10:13 | The Shattered Glass |
| Poor Dean, but still funny! |
KateB
Monday 26th May 2008 22:31 | The Shattered Glass |
| I just read this for the first time, and it is delightful! Poor Dean!! I laughed out loud a couple of times. Thanks! |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 20th January 2008 16:19 | The Shattered Glass |
huh interesting story. never thought about what dean was thinking...
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majolie
Thursday 27th December 2007 18:56 | The Shattered Glass |
| Very amusing. Poor Dean. |
pyromain
Saturday 13th October 2007 11:43 | The Shattered Glass |
| Dean the tool to get harry set on true love. I really like that idea, loved the story for it. |
pottyluvsgin
Sunday 19th November 2006 12:24 | The Shattered Glass |
| Quite funny from Dean's POV. I really enjoyed it. |
Wooster
Thursday 22nd June 2006 14:06 | The Shattered Glass |
| Well...that's interesting. Wow. Very intriguing and cool! |
AKissInACrisis
Sunday 8th January 2006 14:51 | The Shattered Glass |
| This made me laugh out loud - well done! |
Astrid
Sunday 11th December 2005 23:44 | The Shattered Glass |
| Poor Dean! I like the characterization of Romilda and him, though. Oh, and I love Luna! |
Ladybug
Thursday 8th December 2005 18:35 | The Shattered Glass |
I really, really enjoyed this story - I feel so much for Dean (but not enough to stop Harry and Ginny!) - and I love Lavendar at the end: Friends. Please..." That's just wonderful! Beautifully written and immensely enjoyable, every part. Well done! |
Bella
Thursday 8th September 2005 15:56 | The Shattered Glass |
That was THE funniest fic I have read in a long time. Your sense of humor is so JK-Rowlingish that I am still stunned and amazed by it. Excellent, excellent job. Three thumbs up!
I had tons of favorite lines, and this is just one of them:
<<Oh, Merlin... Dean eyed her warily. She didn't...fancy him, did she? Luna was a nice enough girl and all, but she was a bit, well...>>
Everyone was very in-character and the scene played out exactly as I envisioned it would. I loved the bit at the end when Dean sees Harry and Ginny out the window. *sigh* so romantic. Also, the ending part with Lavender was perfect.
Great job. Please write more soon!
Bella |
SillyGillie
Tuesday 6th September 2005 22:37 | The Shattered Glass |
"Bloody brilliant..."
Seriously, awesome job. I loved seeing my favorite scene from someone elses point of view. You should write one in Ginny's. I was always curious to see if it was meant to be just a hug or...? Brilliant job once more! |
Lulabelle
Friday 2nd September 2005 20:05 | The Shattered Glass |
I loved Dean's inner monologue. I even laughed til I snorted! Good Job! |
| Sunday 4th September 2005 20:33 | The Shattered Glass (Author Response) |
| Lol, that happens to me all the time on PhoenixSong! Usually when there're other people around! Thank you! |
TigerLily8186
Friday 2nd September 2005 18:47 | The Shattered Glass |
| oooh when you tell it this way, it makes me feel so sorry for Dean. Luna was quite amusing. I love her bit about a predetermined plot... This is very emotional. |
| Sunday 4th September 2005 20:31 | The Shattered Glass (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reviewing! And reading! I have to admit that I felt a bit sorry for Dean, too. He didn't come across as a completely bad character - just unfortunate enough to get between Harry and Ginny! |
DaFalcon
Friday 2nd September 2005 15:24 | The Shattered Glass |
Hahaha! This was great!! Absolutely, wonderfully, GREAT! I loved it. One shots are my favorite reads now adays. Especially post HBP fics. I am glad to read something from Dean's POV, and especially glad to read what was happening in the common room after H/G left it.
Nice touch having Luna there. She always seem to bring a sort of comedy relief in a corky kind of way. I love her character. You wrote her perfectly.
Two Thumbs Up! |
| Sunday 4th September 2005 20:30 | The Shattered Glass (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Your review totally made my day. I agree - I know the HP books aren't romance novels but I so wish she'd extended that scene a bit! And I'm glad if Luna came across ok - I love her! You're right; bizarre as she is, she's the perfect relief from all the angst and drama! |
Faelaern
Thursday 1st September 2005 16:36 | The Shattered Glass |
| Nicely done! Your Dean seems right on and Luna is nicely in character, which is no easy feat.
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| Sunday 4th September 2005 20:22 | The Shattered Glass (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Coming from you, that means a lot. I love your stories. And tell me about it, lol. I never know what to make of her. I actually really like Luna, but she veers between kooky-smart and just plain bizarre! |
Megan SQ
Thursday 1st September 2005 12:16 | The Shattered Glass |
| Very nice alternate point of view. I think you have everyone's character pinpointed quite right, and I loved Luna's cameo.
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| Sunday 4th September 2005 20:21 | The Shattered Glass (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm really glad if everyone seemed in character at all; I always worry about that. And I'm really glad you liked the Luna bit! Not everyone did, but it was a kind of spur-of-the-moment guest appearance! |
SiblingCreature
Thursday 1st September 2005 11:41 | The Shattered Glass |
*snickers* Don't think I've ever read anything written
from Dean's POV before... Very cool, I like it a lot. I
especially liked his reaction to Luna being in the Gryffindor common
room...
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| Sunday 4th September 2005 20:19 | The Shattered Glass (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reviewing! I'm really glad you liked it - I wasn't sure about trying to write something from Dean's POV. Yeah, I think he's the overlooked character, lol. He's basically in the way! But I have to admit that I don't dislike him the way I did Cho's character. At the very least, he inspired some fabulous canon jealous!Harry! |
Hank
Thursday 1st September 2005 10:51 | The Shattered Glass |
Totally funny! Poor Dean, he really didn't deserve that did he? I loved Luna's comment about everything being pre-ordained! I hope no H/Hr shippers encounter this story!
Well done! |
| Sunday 4th September 2005 20:17 | The Shattered Glass (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Yeah, even being a die-hard H/G shipper, I have to admit that I feel a teeny bit sorry for Dean! I think it's because JKR didn't really show him doing anything hideously wrong. But the whole canon-world's gone H/G and everyone hates 'the other man', lol. |
