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Ladybug Monday 19th September 2005 20:31 | A Lost Generation | I really, really enjoy reading your stories.
I love the prologue (and you always have such great titles!) - I think it sets up Lily and James' characters beautifully, as well as the whole environment of the first rise of Voldemort. It's great seeing all the other people there, too - Malfoys, Blacks and Prewetts, etc.
This chapter is great, too. The dialogue is interesting and natural and the creepy bits a suitably creepy! I'll be interested to see how J & L's relationship progresses and it's always good to see how they demonstrate some of the characteristics and foibles we see in Harry.
Great story. Congratualtions. | takon65 Tuesday 13th September 2005 22:59 | A Lost Generation | What an awesome story! I haven't read too many MPPW era pieces, but this one is the most enjoyable of the few I have. Keep up the great work!
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