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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Flame of Life by Gridley

dalf
Thursday 23rd February 2006 00:30
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
Good start. I could do with less anthrpormorphizing of the birds (at least you did not have them outright talking in posh accents). But otherwise I like the start.
Monday 17th July 2006 06:26Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
I think we've seen in cannon that Hedwig is a bit more than your typical owl, and my take on phoenixes... but that would be telling.
EmeraldPrincess
Monday 20th February 2006 10:45
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
Intresting analogy, i like it!!
Tuesday 21st February 2006 06:05Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
Wands and swords? I'm fond of it on several levels - for one thing, one of my fencing instructors taught about the way Hogwarts classes seem to run - show us a cool move, and then spend hours with us trying to do it right even once.
dophingirl79
Tuesday 27th September 2005 15:36
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
Wow I hope Harry knows to duck! 4 wands on him. lol! keep up the great work! update asap!
Wednesday 28th September 2005 07:08Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
You'll find out soon. :-)
AvidHPReader
Saturday 24th September 2005 20:17
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
ahhh!!  i'm tingling with anticipation after what is clearly a wonderful start to an amazing story.  i'm a big fan of your other novel-length fics (having discovered them belatedly), so i was very excited to see you've started a post-HBP fic.  i can already see that i will like this one just as much as i enjoyed your other stories!  yay!  
Wednesday 28th September 2005 07:07Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
Glad you enjoyed the rest, and thanks for reviewing.
pablo
Friday 23rd September 2005 20:15
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
I liked it, especially Remus as a tutor. It does seem like Harry's going to need some help beyond R&H's, and this starts to solve that problem. Oh, and I loved the dream... indigestion, indeed! But shouldn't there be only five snitches left?
Wednesday 28th September 2005 07:06Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
If the dream were entirely present tense, yes, but it isn't. It is a mixture of what was, is, and 'has not yet come to pass.'
Antosha
Friday 23rd September 2005 13:00
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
Must be nice to have a wizard for your swordsmith. :-)

I'm enjoying this fic a great deal. Fawkes's appearance was a very pleasant surprise! (Though I do have my doubts about the whether the sword mightn't be a horcrux after all...)

I look forward to the rest of it!
Wednesday 28th September 2005 07:05Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)

You know, I never considered that the sword might be a horcrux? Hmm... well, it sat in Dumbledore's office for several years, so he probably would have noticed. Of course he... AAARRRGH! THE BUNNIES!

Well, in this story it is not a horcrux. But that really is a novel... BUNNIES!

sin3281
Friday 23rd September 2005 10:42
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life

Good chapter, perhaps some idea as to what exactly Harry is going to do between "now" and actively starting to search for the Horocruxes?

Excellent story anyway, you're not going to turn Hedwig into a phoenix are you?

Update soon!

Wednesday 28th September 2005 07:02Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)

Well, I figured Harry won't go searching for the Horcruxes until he's of age (allowing him to do magic, apparate, etc. without worrying about the Ministry - not that that would be a BIG worry, but still...).

No, Hedwig will remain an owl. It may be typecasting, but I like her that way.

millercommamatt
Friday 23rd September 2005 10:39
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
The rapier is nice, but I'm still one for the simple elegance of the MP5.

The beginnings of the story look good.  I like the directiona and tone thus far.  I'm interested to see how the foreshadowing of the dream plays out.  Write with skill, write with speed, and update often.  I'm looking forward to reading your newest story.

-millercommamatt
Wednesday 28th September 2005 07:01Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)

I already did my MP5 story - three of them, in fact. :-)

I will do my best to write with skill and speed.

Videl
Friday 23rd September 2005 10:33
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I loved the dream.. haha.. It had me laughing!

And the line from 'The mask of Zorro' was just as funny here... haha

Wednesday 28th September 2005 07:00Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
Yet another person who likes the scene I almost threw out - good thing I'm not an editor...
dreamwitheyeswideopen.
Thursday 22nd September 2005 21:10
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heh. i loved the dream sequence and harry's random little comments about the sword. it is still as wonderful as last chapter:}
Friday 23rd September 2005 07:09Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)

I'm surprised by how many people like the dream sequence, since it started life as filler, needed to be heavily controlled to keep it from getting as dark as it wanted to be, and almost got cut.

Maybe I need to post that deleted scene from Price of Freedom after all...

cckeimig
Thursday 22nd September 2005 20:35
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Brilliant! I'm another who thinks Fawkes needs to look to Harry now that Dumbledore's gone. Love where this is heading so far!!!

One glitch: "Hedwig’s cage was in his trunk. He grasped the cage in one hand and gently gripped one of Fawkes’ legs in the other." uh, I'm sure you see exactly the problem, now that I've pointed it out to you...

Friday 23rd September 2005 07:07Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)

On the glitch - you missed the word "except" earlier in the sentance. That being said, I did a last-minute revision changing what was in the trunk and what wasn't, so that sentance didn't get much polishing.

Since Fawkes has left Hogwarts, Harry does seem a logical choice to me, too. I don't see him sitting on a beach getting a tan while the rest of the war is fought out.

Wolf's Scream
Thursday 22nd September 2005 19:52
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Looking good!

Hmmm... looks as if Fawkes has learned to not be especially subtle when trying to communicate with Harry.  :-}

The thought of how the Dursleys might behave if Harry were wandering in their house while wielding that sword got a snort from this reader....

The interchange between Fawkes & Hedwig is fascinating.  :-)

I see that Harry has acquired a very keen sense of swordsmanship....  :-}
Slightly more seriously, judging by your terminal note (for the chapter), I gather that swordsmanship is likely to play a highly non-trivial role in the story.

Friday 23rd September 2005 07:04Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)

I'm a student of the sword, and "write what you know" is a common bit of advice.

Fawkes might try being subtle if: a. he could speak, or b. he wasn't dealing with Harry.

The Fawkes/Hedwig interaction is one of the earliest bits of this story I envisioned. A plot bunny about a Fawkes/Hedwig ship is currently chasing me, but I'm well ahead.

Melindaleo
Thursday 22nd September 2005 19:36
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
I enjoyed this chapter, and I was so glad to see Fawkes again.  I do have hopes that he'll eventually join Harry's quest.  I loved the note to Ron about missing Ginny.  I also liked how the Dursleys reamined in character and didn't become suddenly soppy.  I'm eager for more.
Friday 23rd September 2005 07:00Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
I'm a fan of gray characters, but I tend to write them as good guys, not bad guys. If bad guys are bad, they're easier to kill off in appropriate ways.
snuffles007
Thursday 22nd September 2005 18:51
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
Great chapter! I can't wait to see whose wands he's looking down. Could there be some action this early in the adventure??
Friday 23rd September 2005 06:59Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)

What, the dream sequence wasn't enough action for you?

No, its the Weasleys, as others have guessed.

Which, of course, doesn't rule out action given the state of things...

Gioia
Thursday 22nd September 2005 18:37
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I'm very much enjoying this!  I'm so glad you're sticking to the idea of Harry not returning to Hogwarts.  I've enjoyed all your stories and will be closely watching this.  Your creative solutions tend to feel so logical and obvious; as if there's no other way for canon to go!   Can't wait to see what you have in store for us here.
Friday 23rd September 2005 06:58Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
I plot based on a very wise piece of advice: "Ask 'what if' and then 'what next?'" Start from a few fairly logical premises and you tend to get a logical story (which, since this is fantasy, is a long way from it being a true story, but hey...).
uni1mom
Thursday 22nd September 2005 15:46
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
This story line has GREAT possibilities.  I like having the battle played out as a Quiditch match and Fawlks coming to Harry makes sence.
Friday 23rd September 2005 06:56Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
It certainly makes sense given the assumptions I'm making about Fawkes. How accurate those assumptions are in Jo's world... who knows?
kaiserzacc
Thursday 22nd September 2005 15:05
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
excellent start...i imagine that the sword of gryffindor will play some part in book 7...keep up the good work
Friday 23rd September 2005 06:54Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
Jo's mentioned the sword at least twice since CoS, so you may well be right.
martita
Thursday 22nd September 2005 14:35
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life

Brilliant writing, of course, it always is. So far, I like this story, and I will follow your updates eagerly. I won't pretend to know where you are taking this, but I'm sure I'll enjoy it no matter what. You do realize, I am sure, that the cliff hanger is irritating, but not heart stopping...

Carry on, then!

Friday 23rd September 2005 06:52Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
I can't remember if I joined the Society for Cliffhanger-writers Anonymous during my second or third fic, but I'm still only part way through the program. Yeah, everyone knows its the Weasleys. OTOH, quite a few people thought I'd killed Ginny off once...
Jake
Thursday 22nd September 2005 13:34
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
Great start! Keep up the good work!

-Jake
Friday 23rd September 2005 06:51Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
Thanks!
fienx
Thursday 22nd September 2005 13:18
Harry Potter and the Flame of Life
Great start. Update!
Friday 23rd September 2005 06:51Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)
Thanks! I will soon. :-)
MercuryBlue
Thursday 22nd September 2005 11:47
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Excellent interpretation of magical portraits, good idea about Fawkes and the Sword. Ron and Hermione were supposed to be at Privet Drive with Harry, remember? And Harry won't have time for tutoring, I don't think, but there's enough fudge factor there for you to do as you please. I'd complain about the cliffhanger, but I know perfectly well it's four of the Weasleys. The movies are not 'somewhat cannon-y', there's too many n's. (Nitpicky, I know, but I HATE it when people either omit spellcheck or don't double-check it. And yes, the movies are only somewhat canon-y, they can't fit all the detail in the books into two hours of movie, and they change a lot of the details to make the movies look better. Ugh.)

Friday 23rd September 2005 06:50Harry Potter and the Flame of Life (Author Response)

As I implied with Harry's comment about McGonagall wanting things to be normal, Ron and Hermione's plans were changed. As Harry hasn't left Hogwarts at the end of HBP, there's time for plans to change.

As for spelling, I write each chapter. Then I read it. Then OHGinnyfan betas it. Then I read it over again, and she goes over it again. In most things, one error in over 2500 words is considered an acceptable job for amateurs. Thank you for noticing the error, it will be logged for my records.