gymnastgal19
Monday 24th March 2008 21:25 | Anymore |
aww ww ww!!! thats so cute!
i take that ginny was debating wether or not to go and see harry...
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pyromain
Sunday 2nd September 2007 15:05 | Anymore |
| I do wonder what was keeping her so long. |
Billie Bowtrunckle
Wednesday 29th March 2006 18:43 | Anymore |
| Awww, this one-shot is very heart-warming. I especially loved this line: "Instead of the intense, rushed, war-torn feeling, theirs would be intimate, one of slow calm." That is a really lovely description - one that I could easily see Harry, our reluctant hero, envisioning. Having them reunite in the paddock was also a very nice touch! |
| Thursday 30th March 2006 07:42 | Anymore (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reading, BD! This one was one of those spur of the minute, can't get it out fast enough ideas. I'm glad you liked it. You just made my day! |
Narumi
Tuesday 15th November 2005 16:19 | Anymore |
I really liked this, but the proof-reader in me insists I bring a few
points to mind: You made it sound like Harry was going into the
Shrieking Shack when he was in Hogsmeade, but then you had him coming
out of the statue of the one-eyed witch. However, the one-eyed
witch passage connects to the basement of Honeydukes, while the
Shrieking Shack passage connects to the Whomping Willow- bit of a
discontinuity, there. Also, you had Harry write that Ginny was to
take a portkey, but then she just walked to the Room of Requirement, so
I was a bit confused about that. I don't want you to feel
insulted as if I only noticed the errors; I really enjoyed this fic and
think you have a wonderful writing style. I just think maybe you
should spend a bit more time overviewing your stories before submitting
them. Keep up the great work!
PS- I can't remember what Ginny's first words to Harry were and now
IT'S KILLING ME!!!! I'm gonna have to go look it up right now!
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Ima Quidditch Fan
Saturday 1st October 2005 19:20 | Anymore |
I LOVE THIS! It is so very Harry. I cross my fingers that Jo thinks so too.
Erm, this really needs an encoure.
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| Thursday 30th March 2006 07:44 | Anymore (Author Response) |
| Sorry it took me so long to reply. I'm glad you liked it. I don't know about an encore. You know how slow ideas are at coming for me. |
aschowin
Saturday 1st October 2005 10:58 | Anymore |
I liked your story. Harry's letter in particular drew my attention. It wasn't overly sentimental, but it showed hard emotion; feelings and words that fit Harry. Good job. |
| Saturday 1st October 2005 11:23 | Anymore (Author Response) |
Thank you. I'm glad it didn't come across as too depressing or too gooey sentimental.
Thank you for reviewing.
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Muggle Witch
Friday 30th September 2005 18:13 | Anymore |
Oh that was wonderful. So full of emotion. I felt like crying with Harry, eventhough I knew she was coming. Write more soon!!!
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| Saturday 1st October 2005 11:20 | Anymore (Author Response) |
| I'll try. Thanks for the encouragement to keep writing. I'm glad you
liked it. I hope to write more soon. Thanks for being there. Also
thanks for reviewing.
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ridgeback77
Friday 30th September 2005 13:45 | Anymore |
| Wonderful, absolutely wonderful.
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| Saturday 1st October 2005 11:17 | Anymore (Author Response) |
| Thanks. Glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing.
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Videl
Friday 30th September 2005 10:26 | Anymore |
| This was fun to read. You just got your secret passages a bit muddled - the one from the shrieking shack leads to the whomping willow. Other than that though, it was good. |
| Saturday 1st October 2005 11:16 | Anymore (Author Response) |
I can't believe I did that.
I'm glad that you thought it was fun. I was afraid it would be a bit too depressing. Thanks for taking the time to review.
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Aaran St Vines
Friday 30th September 2005 04:40 | Anymore |
You have spoken the desire of all H/G fans around the world, and even those of other Harry/? shippers as well, in a larger sense. All Harry Potter fans want him to have hope, to have happiness, to find a reason to live and fight and be victorious.
You've nailed the way Harry thinks, and as a mirror, the way Ginny thinks as well.
Thanks for writing. |
| Saturday 1st October 2005 11:14 | Anymore (Author Response) |
Thanks for reading and reviewing. You know how significant your opinion
is to me. It always makes my day to hear your thoughts and ideas of
stories.
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amamama
Friday 30th September 2005 02:48 | Anymore |
Nice, but I wonder - why would she need a portkey when he was waiting
for her to enter the Room of Requirement? Wouldn't he then wait
for her to appear, instead of waiting for her to open the door?
Nevertheless, I loved the emotions here. Harry-deeply-in-love is
well written, and perhaps he has finally understood what the Power the
Dork Lard knows not is?
Thanks for sharing!
Berte
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| Saturday 1st October 2005 11:09 | Anymore (Author Response) |
The portkey was a safety precaution. No one was to know where Harry was
and where Ginny was going in case others saw her reading a note from
Harry. The portkey was to the door of the Room of Requirement.
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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SanityEscapesMe
Friday 30th September 2005 01:21 | Anymore |
| Simply, beautiful..great writing. |
| Saturday 1st October 2005 10:57 | Anymore (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it and took the time to review.
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juliet
Friday 30th September 2005 00:24 | Anymore |
I love a story that shows Harry coming to his sense, and you certainly did this with good effect. I didn't feel that the lack of dialogue was detrimental to the story, although I did feel the sentences get a little rushed towards the end. Harry's emotions came through really well. Well done.
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| Saturday 1st October 2005 10:56 | Anymore (Author Response) |
Sorry about the rushed feeling. I'm a slow typer and the bunny bit and I couldn't get it all down fast enough.
I'm so glad that you liked it even without the dialogue. Thank you for taking the time to review.
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emmamoonpotter
Thursday 29th September 2005 18:33 | Anymore |
This is such a wonderful one shot.
How neat to have the Room of Requirement become the paddock behind the Burrow, a perfect place for them to meet again.
Harry's emotion really came through with this story, especially when he wrote Ginny that letter. So good!
The lack of dialouge made a great impact. I felt that more was put across and we could really see what Harry was feeling.
Awesome job Michelle!
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| Saturday 1st October 2005 10:49 | Anymore (Author Response) |
Thanks Laree. I'm glad that the emotions I was trying to portray were coming through.
Thanks for reviewing. You know I really value your encouragement.
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BabyRuth
Thursday 29th September 2005 18:21 | Anymore |
| The secret tunnel from the Shrieking Shack exits at the Womping Willow, not the statue of the witch. That one comes out in Honeyduke's cellar. The overall plot was nice but it would have been better with more dialogue between Harry/Dobby and Harry/Ginny rather than just reporting what they did. |
| Saturday 1st October 2005 10:44 | Anymore (Author Response) |
I can't believe I mixed up those tunnels.
Dialogue would have been more fun but I was challenging myself to write
the emotions and story without characters to tell what was occurring.
Most of my stories tend to have more dialogue simply because I like to
talk. This was a special challenge for me.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it.
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