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Thursday 11th May 2006 10:23 | The Favour | Did it have to be Harrods?
Kinda cliched.
Liked the interplay between the two. And I loved the last chapter and how you made the scene change work very well. Harry couldn't breathe ... heh.
Loved the "changing" in the middle of the store. I just wish Ron wasn't THIS stupid, but ... hey, he can be, right?
Loved that last line. Famous last words. Reminds me of "Forget Paris"
Good work. | Wooster
Thursday 27th April 2006 06:22 | The Favour | | Excellent last line there. Ok, must say this: Ron is adorable when he's bumbling. So cute! Very clever idea about the transfiguration of wizard clothes. | critmo
Monday 7th November 2005 07:42 | The Favour | | Ok, still interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter. | Cherry
Wednesday 2nd November 2005 11:58 | The Favour | Very good.
Cherry | Shadow Hider
Tuesday 1st November 2005 14:09 | The Favour | | hehehe |
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