gymnastgal19
Monday 1st September 2008 17:22 | Not Done Yet |
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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 16:13 | Not Done Yet |
that was so sweet with ginny coming and finding harry, although if i were harry, then i would be thinking that if Ginny could find them, imagine how easy it would be for voldemort to find them... lol
great story though |
Delani
Saturday 12th November 2005 09:47 | Not Done Yet |
"His pulse quickened, and he wouldn’t dare look at her. She had said it. The one thing she shouldn’t have, the one thing that would probably seal her fate. The one thing, he realized, that he had wanted and feared more than anything to hear her say."
Right at this point, this piece clicked for me. That line was so perfect and had the drama I craved yet the the style it needed to be true. Well done on this piece... |
paladin
Monday 7th November 2005 20:13 | Not Done Yet |
Your story is great! You did a great job of
capturing Harry's angst toward his feeling for her and her
determination that JKR has clearly set for her. I really liked
the ending, when he kisses the palm of her hand. Tender and
sensual. It sets this story apart from the usual "their lips met
in a passionate kiss" line.
I hope to see more soon.
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BasketKiwi
Monday 7th November 2005 19:52 | Not Done Yet |
| Aww!! That was so sweet! I loved it, very well done! Though he should have said it back to her! Ah well... No, really though, it was fabulous! Wonderful job! |
cckeimig
Monday 7th November 2005 18:06 | Not Done Yet |
| Unfair attack. Poor Harry never had a chance. Loved it. |
critmo
Monday 7th November 2005 14:05 | Not Done Yet |
| Very nicely done! I agree with you, why the other two and not Ginny, is a fundamental question. |
Stormdelver
Monday 7th November 2005 06:51 | Not Done Yet |
| Great story- I could only pray that this would be the way JKR goes- our pair need each other- and maybe that is the point she will make and what will make Harry win in the end- of course equally would be the anger unleased if anything happens to her...but I can only trust in this,JKR is said to be a fan of "Start Wars" (i am not) and perhaps she will look there as if Luke used his anger to kill Vader he would have then easilly have become the next dark lord, however her other favorites do not paint such a happy ending (Lord of the Rings and Narnia) but if I had a choice, your way would be among my top picks- Bravo. |
Cherry
Sunday 6th November 2005 23:55 | Not Done Yet |
Thats good enought for me.
Cherry xxx |
Rensselair
Sunday 6th November 2005 22:00 | Not Done Yet |
Awesome story
I could really feel the emotions -- they were realistic and palpable
I could totally see this happening in book 7 |
Rutzy
Sunday 6th November 2005 21:48 | Not Done Yet |
amazing read! so in canon characters: hopefully JKR thinks along the same plot line in Book 7 -- so what's the real encore, can't wait :> |
EJH0904
Sunday 6th November 2005 19:38 | Not Done Yet |
| Wonderful - it's so good that I'm disappointed that it's a one-shot! Brilliantly written! |
EvieMarie
Sunday 6th November 2005 18:20 | Not Done Yet |
wonderful, wonderful, wonderful....
::sigh::
You've got brilliant dialog skills.
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ridgeback77
Sunday 6th November 2005 17:39 | Not Done Yet |
| Nice job. I think you captured both Harry and Ginny quite well.
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