Sirius Lee Brilliant
Friday 22nd December 2006 19:07 | Pictures of You |
Poor Ron!!! That was very sad, especially when Ron was looking at the picture that was taken the night before 'Mione died.
Also, I've a question, I was browsing deviantart.com, and I came across a picture called Daddy's Girl, and the artist said it was based on a story called Daddy' Girl , written by you at phoenixsong.net, and, obviously, this is phoenixsong, but I don't see the story. ...( Wow, My english teacher wouldn't like that run-on ..) |
fairylights
Sunday 16th July 2006 21:56 | Pictures of You |
| That was so well written I was spellbound, and tearful. Thank you. |
Wooster
Friday 7th July 2006 17:58 | Pictures of You |
Oh. That's so sad. Very, very good...but so sad. I feel so awful for Ron...
There were some nice moments in there, though. Enough to not make this a total downer... This was very good! |
Jenn_Lynn
Thursday 6th July 2006 20:24 | Pictures of You |
| I think I need a tissue! That was a wonderful story - well worth the honour of story of the week! It was very touching and the emotions that came through made me tear up at times. I really thought the end was good - with Harry being there for Ron... not pretending with him and just taking charge and taking him home. Keep up the wonderful work - you are very talented! Jenn |
Novera
Thursday 6th July 2006 20:02 | Pictures of You |
i wonder why they have to make people die
it always make me cry like now
WHY+=love 4ever |
platypus621
Thursday 6th July 2006 07:06 | Pictures of You |
| what a beautiful story |
EmeraldPrincess
Thursday 6th July 2006 01:33 | Pictures of You |
This story... I love it
Specially since it was written on my birthday,
November 7th!!
The song is beautiful also. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 3rd July 2006 15:02 | Pictures of You |
| That was so good, but very sad. I am still crying. Poor Ron. I would have never thought of such an ending. Nobody in the trio, well, with Ginny, the quartet, should have to go through that. Even if they arn't in the quartet. But all the same, very good. |
Grandma Kate
Monday 3rd July 2006 12:01 | Pictures of You |
| So sad but also lovely. |
PHsname
Monday 28th November 2005 14:57 | Pictures of You |
very sad...very well done.
beautifully written. :thumbs up: |
EJH0904
Sunday 13th November 2005 08:45 | Pictures of You |
This made me tear-up it was so sad! Imagine if everyone mentioned made it through the war only to have Hermione die in such a painfully relentless way... Very moving. |
IHateSnakes
Thursday 10th November 2005 08:13 | Pictures of You |
| Great writing, Drie...but just a little too sad for my taste, but life's like that, isn't it? S. |
Neli P
Wednesday 9th November 2005 21:35 | Pictures of You |
Loved it, Loved it, Loved it, "Pictures-of-happy-memories-in-sad-moments" have always made me cry... and your story is simply wonderful! Good job! |
AvidHPReader
Wednesday 9th November 2005 00:29 | Pictures of You |
| **weeping** thank you
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Tinnidawg
Tuesday 8th November 2005 23:46 | Pictures of You |
I like the way you have written the story. Especially the way you have used the photo album to enable you to jump from anecdote to anecdote of Ron and Hermione's life together. I also liked the way you have blended the entire storyline together.
I'll write a more detailed review after I read through all the chapters.
Sorry. That last line wasn't meant for this story.
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Tinnidawg
Tuesday 8th November 2005 23:41 | Pictures of You |
I like the way you have written the story. Especially the way you have used the photo album to enable you to jump from anecdote to anecdote of Ron and Hermione's life together. I also liked the way you have blended the entire storyline together.
I'll write a more detailed review after I read through all the chapters.
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tonks442
Tuesday 8th November 2005 12:46 | Pictures of You |
Amazing. Off to find a tissue.
Keep writing!
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critmo
Tuesday 8th November 2005 07:56 | Pictures of You |
| My name got lost. The last comment was mine. Once again: Very well done. |
Cherry
Tuesday 8th November 2005 07:02 | Pictures of You |
Love it! love it! love it!
Cherry xxx |
| Tuesday 8th November 2005 10:29 | Pictures of You (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! |
cckeimig
Monday 7th November 2005 18:14 | Pictures of You |
| Major tear-jerker. Beautiful story. |
| Tuesday 8th November 2005 10:31 | Pictures of You (Author Response) |
| Thanks. My fear is that it is a little over-the-top, but people seem to really enjoy it. Thank you for reading and reviewing! |
EvieMarie
Monday 7th November 2005 18:06 | Pictures of You |
Oh my, this is so so so so sad.... I don't want Hermione to die ever!
Well done. You're brilliant. |
| Tuesday 8th November 2005 10:30 | Pictures of You (Author Response) |
| I don't know about brilliant, but thank you very much for the positive review. |
Stephanie
Monday 7th November 2005 14:10 | Pictures of You |
This is a very emotional story... even though it almost moved me to tears, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing :).
P.S. Just wondering: are you Dutch? Because 'drie' is Dutch and your beta's name is a Dutch one too :). |
| Monday 7th November 2005 16:04 | Pictures of You (Author Response) |
| Hi Stephanie. I've had that asked of me before. No, I'm not Dutch. I pull Drie out of my name, Adrienne. Glad you liked the story! |
hewithnoname
Monday 7th November 2005 13:17 | Pictures of You |
| Oh dear. Poor Ron. I liked this, sad but a wonderfull read. Nobody has of yet had the guts to do something like this and I salute you. Once again well done. |
| Monday 7th November 2005 16:07 | Pictures of You (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much. I adore R/H stories and just wanted to share an interpretation of that song. I appreciate your comments! |
dancinginmagic
Monday 7th November 2005 12:06 | Pictures of You |
I need a tissue. Give me a moment to cry...
OK. I'm better now.
That was truly beautiful. Poor, poor Ron. Believable - and wonderfully
unusual. She doesn't die in the war, which is rare in a story like this.
I wish I could stick around to write a review worthy of this, but I
have to go. It was a lovely read. Thank you so much for sharing.
Sarah
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| Monday 7th November 2005 16:09 | Pictures of You (Author Response) |
| Sarah, that was a lovely review in itself. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Thank you. |
