gymnastgal19
Thursday 27th March 2008 10:20 | A Father's View |
nice story!!! Although somehow i dont think that harry would go and play quidditch when his kid was just born... although i guess it was an important game and the baby and wife were fine... lol
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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 24th October 2007 22:11 | A Father's View |
lol I loved this! so cute! Its nice that harry is still affectionate to ginny
The ending was funny lol
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bookish327
Saturday 13th October 2007 21:09 | A Father's View |
| Great story! I love how Harry tries to deal with Ginny's mood swings. Sometimes you just can't win with a pregnant woman. Please write more funny fluff like this. You do a great job. |
pyromain
Wednesday 12th September 2007 09:09 | A Father's View |
| loved the story, Harry finaly seems to have figured out what to say and not to get in trouble. |
BasketKiwi
Saturday 30th December 2006 20:13 | A Father's View |
| Ha. Poor Harry and Ginny. I'm not sure who had it worse! Well, I am, but still. It was interesting to see it from Harry's point of view. He was so cute, with the hot chocolate and the foot massages. And the conversation between Harry and Ron was hilarious! Great job with characterization, as always. I loved Harry's "fetish" and the ending. Wonderful job with this one-shot, it's really great! |
| Sunday 31st December 2006 03:22 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
| I wrote the fic for my then beta who had never seen a pregnancy fic written from Harry's POV. When I wrote it I read it to my wife who recognised a lot of it. |
swngnblues
Monday 2nd October 2006 09:17 | A Father's View |
| Hehe - cute... Induce labor because of quidditch... now there's a doctor with their patients' best interests and health at heart! I loved the banter back and forth between the two- so sweet. |
lorgbb
Wednesday 14th June 2006 11:55 | A Father's View |
that was a good laugh, and pretty cute too
good work! make more like this |
Jenn_Lynn
Monday 13th March 2006 16:43 | A Father's View |
Great little short! I enjoy your writing style. I could picture everything vividly in my mind as I read.
You're quite talented- keep up the good work |
| Tuesday 14th March 2006 13:09 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
Only quite talented?
Thanks for the review. |
SillyGillie
Tuesday 7th February 2006 18:47 | A Father's View |
| Brilliant job! What a cute story. I really liked reading it from Harry's POV. Too funny. Everyone wanted Ginny to deliever before the quidditch game. Poor Gin. |
| Wednesday 8th February 2006 00:38 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing. |
juliet
Friday 3rd February 2006 01:24 | A Father's View |
"So you'd have been happier if there had been more details about the birth? "
Far from it (been there, done that and don't won't to relive it any time soon! I should have said that I would have liked to see Harry's reaction to the birth of his first child. |
| Friday 3rd February 2006 01:39 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
| Ah. Thanks for coming back to me on this. Your wish may be granted. |
sweetdreamer285
Thursday 2nd February 2006 14:19 | A Father's View |
Parenthood, what a blast!
Harry is especially funny (\"big knickers, my favourite\").
Is there a sequel?
Thanks for the sweet treat! |
| Friday 3rd February 2006 01:14 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
There is no sequel planned, but I wouldn't rule out more parenting fics. There are a few dotted around my Live Journal which may appear here in the fullness of time.
Thanks for the review.
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snowbear96
Thursday 2nd February 2006 11:09 | A Father's View |
| Congratulations! That was really funny, and I loved it. It's good to see a story from Harry's POV and I liked his conversation with Ron. |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 16:20 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
| Sarah did request one from Harry's POV because they are so few and far between. Glad you liked it. |
paladin
Thursday 2nd February 2006 05:47 | A Father's View |
This was great! I've missed your writings and this was a cute/funny bit of a young relationship preparing for the 'Total Family Package' deal. When comparing this to relationships of friends of mine over the years, you did a fantastic job of creating scenes and dialog that anyone can laugh at.
Great job! |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 16:17 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
| I'm glad that you found it both funny and true to life. Thanks for reviewing. |
MysterySilkRules_lol
Thursday 2nd February 2006 05:28 | A Father's View |
| aww... great! |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 16:16 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
juliet
Wednesday 1st February 2006 23:54 | A Father's View |
Yay! I believe that you got the irritable, insecure mother to be personality just right, and also the "what have I done and how will this change things" worries of a father to be. Great work on the different perspectives.
The conversation between Ron and Harry was brilliant, and I shudder to think the truth in that line that Ron said (oh, I really hope it isn't like that, and do men really say those things!?!?!?)
It seemed a little rushed at the end and I felt that it could have been continued a little longer. However, I always look forward to reading married Harry and Ginny stories and your writing always does this justice. |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 00:11 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
"Yay! I believe that you got the irritable, insecure mother to be personality just right, and also the "what have I done and how will this change things" worries of a father to be. Great work on the different perspectives."
Thank you ! I did let my wife read it and she enjoyed it.
"The conversation between Ron and Harry was brilliant, and I shudder to think the truth in that line that Ron said (oh, I really hope it isn't like that, and do men really say those things!?!?!?)"
Er... yes and yes
"It seemed a little rushed at the end and I felt that it could have been continued a little longer. "
So you'd have been happier if there had been more details about the birth?
"However, I always look forward to reading married Harry and Ginny stories and your writing always does this justice."
Thanks and thanks for reviewing.
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mary-v
Wednesday 1st February 2006 19:37 | A Father's View |
Aww. Loved it.
Great work!
~Maria~ |
| Wednesday 1st February 2006 23:28 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
| Thank you |
Antosha
Wednesday 1st February 2006 18:58 | A Father's View |
Can I tell you how many levels this satisfied on?
Um. Lots. Not least the beauty and grouchiness of a full-term mother-to-be!
I loved the banter between Harry and Ginny here--and the underlying sweetness. I loved the conversation between Harry and Ron. (Poor Ron!) And I loved that the healers wanted to induce in order to make sure that Harry would be at the match. Hee! |
| Wednesday 1st February 2006 23:28 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
| I'm pleased you liked it and thanks for reviewing. |
Enero
Wednesday 1st February 2006 15:38 | A Father's View |
| I enjoyed your story. Makes me want more chapters |
| Wednesday 1st February 2006 23:26 | A Father's View (Author Response) |
| There aren't any more chapters - sorry, but I'm glad you liked this. |
