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Reviews For Stalking by hewithnoname

gymnastgal19
Wednesday 3rd October 2007 16:59
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lol. loved this story, was a little hard to follow at times though. I kinda figured that they might be harry's kids and somehow i just knew that they were searching for frogs lol
pyromain
Sunday 1st July 2007 06:43
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so funny got tears in my eyes, the kids of and must couse a the trouble the weasleys do and them some for sake.
lantis222
Tuesday 23rd January 2007 16:18
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That was incredibly cute! I loved it, I can just see Harry doing that. Great Job!
Evelyn
Monday 24th July 2006 09:45
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Hehe, all those numbers were confusing at first. Lovely little story, and very funny too.
Monday 24th July 2006 09:57Stalking (Author Response)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I went for the confussing edge, untill I got confussed myself. Once again I thank you.
I am also just writting another fic about this lot, I hope you enjoy that one as well.
Connor Landon
Wednesday 31st May 2006 20:39
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This is wicked awesome! Ok, I have to admit though, at first, I thought "this is stupid and confusing", but I started comprehending, and liked it! It's so sweet! Harry's a daddy and was stalking frogs with his children! It's really original and great. I love it!
Thursday 1st June 2006 03:54Stalking (Author Response)
Thank you for your review. I always try to go with the original. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I must admit I went for the confusing start, clearly trying to be clever, but their personality's burst forth bless them. Once again thank you. I hope you enjoy more of my fic's. If you do, I look forward to your input.
emmamoonpotter
Monday 29th May 2006 14:49
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What a great one shot.

At first I thought it was the Weasley boys when they were younger, and was pleasantly surprised to see it wasn't. Bravo.

I was completely entertained by this and I'm looking forward to reading it again.
Monday 29th May 2006 17:05Stalking (Author Response)
Thanks a lot, it means so much when readers say they enjoyed your work. I also hope you enjoyed my other fic's as well. I also have more coming in the future.
Once again thank you.
Ari
Saturday 27th May 2006 00:22
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*laughs*

Way to go HWNN, I almost fell of my chair. A game of commandos is that fun. But putting a frog in his mouth? Urgh.

*decides not to comment about the grammar* you know, I might have to talk to TKP ...
Saturday 27th May 2006 05:04Stalking (Author Response)
Fisrtly, thanks for the review.
Secondly, I checked with spell and grammer twice, TKP checked it twice, to my knowledge. I'm sure P.S checked it when they posted it. So I can't see what you are on about. Then again I'm the wrong person to talk to.
Thrirdly, Not so much a flame. more of a wee flicker, I still thank you.
jeanne
Friday 26th May 2006 21:24
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Absolutely a 100 on a scale of 1 to 10. Much better than a 10. Loved it, and we used to hunt snakes. Just couldn,t get enough of them. Mom didn,t like em though. Wonder why. That was about 60 years ago.
Saturday 27th May 2006 04:41Stalking (Author Response)
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. We never found snakes though. I'm sure if we did, we'd all run off screeming like a pack of girls. (The girls would screem slightly more, but thats the law honest.:thumbsup
thisgrlrox
Friday 26th May 2006 12:34
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You had me until about mid-story. Then I was able to figure out who the hunters were. What a fun read! Nice job!
Friday 26th May 2006 12:51Stalking (Author Response)
Thank you very much,I tried to keep it going longer, but their personality's just sort of burst forth. I hope you didn't figure who the group were though. Thanks for your review.
crimson74
Friday 26th May 2006 10:16
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Very nicely done! Love the way the kids follow the unspoken rules and all the hand signals. Not to mention the way Harry and Ginny talked to each other so like them. Keep on the writing.
Friday 26th May 2006 12:46Stalking (Author Response)
Thanks alot. It was fun to get into their world, so to speak. I used a lot of my own memories. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
juliet
Friday 26th May 2006 05:13
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Hence the sometime lively discussions at the dinner table, both Real Number one and Number three tried to out-think each other, and to get their point over. Number�s one, two and four would flee to a more quiet location and batten down the hatches.


For a moment I wondered if this was Hermione and her daughter. It could have fitted, but I was happy to see Harry at the end getting to play with his children. Excellent, had me in stitches laughing.

often to the fact that he was always in restraints. He was a danger to himself and others,


That is a classic. Immediately I pictured a rather fat laughing baby sitting in a highchair, attempting to escape.
Friday 26th May 2006 12:18Stalking (Author Response)
I tried to picture a little Ginny, so one big Ginny and one little Ginny equals thunderclouds. I also pictured Harry as having his childhood with his children, seems fitting really. I'm so glad you liked it.
Ladybug
Friday 26th May 2006 00:56
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“What was that?” Number one asked.
“I think it was Number four’s bottom,”
Oh, my. I am clutching my sides! Bog of eternal stench - Love it! Oh golly, how gorgeous is that! I am totally in love with this little scene and now feel the insane need to go and play in the mud. There I was trying to fit the Weasley kids into Numbers one, two, etc. – but no, it’s a new generation and Ginny is the REAL Number one – haha!!! That’s great! And the supreme Commander in Chief – hilarious. It’s good to see they all know their place. Kew muchly for that sweet muddy fun.
Friday 26th May 2006 12:15Stalking (Author Response)
Thanks alot. I had fun writing this down. The real No one, is how my kids describe their mum. Or rather, "Mom's the real boss isn't she dad."
I used my own childhood as a reference. I'm so glad you like it. Once agian thank you.