gymnastgal19
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 20:31 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| nice story! |
cckeimig
Saturday 10th June 2006 16:27 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| Wow. This was a brilliant tear-jerker. I like the nobility of your Molly. |
Mullvaney
Wednesday 7th June 2006 20:16 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
Very good, touching story. To me, it seemed to echo the sacrifice his own mother made when he was an infant, I felt like he was addressing Lily, too, when he called Molly 'mum'. You did an excellent job of showing the sense of loss Harry feels every time he loses a loved one
Good job! |
thisgrlrox
Monday 5th June 2006 22:45 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| :Sniff: That was a wonderful story. I teared up and my heart goes out to Mrs. Weasley. I think you captured her character. I have no doubt she is a strong woman and fierce mum. Nice story. |
| Monday 5th June 2006 23:06 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Thank you |
Connor Landon
Monday 5th June 2006 18:44 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| This was beautiful. A tiny bit OOC, but truly beautiful and I really enjoyed it. The story was so sweet and deep it brough tears to my eyes. I could feel Harry's pain and Molly's determination. It was wonderful. You're a great writer and I can't wait to read more from you. |
| Monday 5th June 2006 23:05 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Thank you for the kind words.. I'll see what else I can post up here. |
harry_ginnyphile
Monday 5th June 2006 17:37 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| Ye gods, this story ripped me to shreds! Hearing Harry call Molly Weasley "Mum" was just heartwrenching, especially knowing that it was the bittersweet end of it all. A beautifully written, heartfelt little ficlet ... kudos! |
| Monday 5th June 2006 23:04 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Thank you.. im glad you liked it |
Curren
Monday 5th June 2006 12:55 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| eh, not bad, but harry calling mrs weasley 'mum' the whole time feels so weird the whole time. it just doesn't ring true |
| Monday 5th June 2006 13:13 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Oh well.. sorry about that... Somehow it seemed to work for me... calling her Mrs Weasley at the time sounded a bit off. |
Melindaleo
Monday 5th June 2006 05:43 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| Sniff. I still love this story, Ham. I love the bond between Harry and Molly, and I could so see her doing something like that for her family. Harry's words at the graveside after it's all over where particularly heartwrenching. I'm delighted to see you here at Phoenix Song. |
| Monday 5th June 2006 06:05 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Hee! I still maintaion that it only came out good because I dedicated it to you. You are magical |
br0wneyedbeauty
Sunday 4th June 2006 22:37 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| wow. this story is really heart warming and sad at the same time. how you managed to do that is amazing. this story is VERY well written! |
| Monday 5th June 2006 06:03 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Thank you.. sometimes I do manage to get what I want to say across |
Gioia
Sunday 4th June 2006 22:13 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| Fantastic job! I love the epitaph on the tombstone especially - that was perfect! Did you see that somewhere and get inspired to incorporate it so well here, or did you come up with that one yourself? I swear I may request it in my will! ;-) |
| Monday 5th June 2006 06:02 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Erm.. glad you liked the epitaph... believe it or not but I actually made that up. I haven't visited all that many graveyards :p |
