pyromain
Sunday 24th June 2007 12:36 | Aurora |
| What a beautifull storry, I'm sorry it didn't get into the contest it could have won. |
| Monday 25th June 2007 09:48 | Aurora (Author Response) |
| I don't really mind not having been able to enter - I prefer getting great reviews like yours! |
Patches
Sunday 29th April 2007 21:47 | Aurora |
| A very good beginning. I was sure Harry was more aware than they gave him credit for. At least they were together for most of the time. And finally Voldemort is gone for good. I hope Harry went to see Ginny. That would be good. Thank you for writing. p |
| Monday 30th April 2007 01:44 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Oh, yes, I intended for Harry to go and see Ginny. I only hinted at it at the end, but it really was a just a tiny little hint.
Thanks for taking the time to review, I appreciate it! |
ginnysohma
Sunday 29th April 2007 10:09 | Aurora |
"There's one condition, though," Harry said. "I'm going to be the godfather."
that made me cry. it was a beautifully written story, i'e read it many times. =] |
| Sunday 29th April 2007 11:52 | Aurora (Author Response) |
| Really? Wow, thanks! |
Alena
Tuesday 12th December 2006 01:02 | Aurora |
| Oh, the end was just perfect. |
| Tuesday 12th December 2006 07:35 | Aurora (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! |
Lunar
Sunday 3rd September 2006 07:20 | Aurora |
I did enjoy it, but there was a lot of speech and not so much action. I don't know if you meant to do that - pushing everything except Ron and Hermione's relationship into the background - on purpose, or if you wanted to keep it short-ish.
Nice story, though. |
| Sunday 3rd September 2006 07:55 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Thanks for telling me! Writing only about Ron and Hermione's relationship was the plan for this story. I wanted to write about their personal drama, not their hunt for Horcruxes...
Glad you enjoyed it. |
itsme07863
Saturday 12th August 2006 11:13 | Aurora |
| loooved it. |
| Sunday 13th August 2006 07:59 | Aurora (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
Connor Landon
Friday 11th August 2006 21:51 | Aurora |
| Oh, lovely. Just lovely. I love this: A beautiful, precious moment in the midst of dark times that war can't seem to touch. And I love how Harry actually lives at the end. I've read so many typical H/G stories where Ginny is bawling her eyes over Harry's lifeless corpse. Not only is this a Ron/Hermione fic, Harry actually lives. This is a breath of fresh air. I feel badly about the competition, though. Congratulations on a well-written, sweet, entertaining story. |
| Sunday 13th August 2006 07:53 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Thank you! I could never write about Harry dying... Firstly because I don't want to think of it, secondly because I don't think he will die in the last book (and I'm holding on to that!).
And don't worry about the competition... Reviews like yours are much better than any vote. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 9th August 2006 16:46 | Aurora |
| This is a really good story, but all of them, you seem to end at the dot. Like it is the end of one story, but it doesn't continue to another. Hmm. |
| Wednesday 9th August 2006 17:47 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Hm. I suppose you mean that it's a series of scenes that need to be added together, not one fluid narration. But then, I wanted it to be just like that...
Thanks for the review. |
fairylights
Tuesday 8th August 2006 21:58 | Aurora |
| Fabulous! |
| Wednesday 9th August 2006 03:38 | Aurora (Author Response) |
| Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! |
critmo
Tuesday 8th August 2006 07:10 | Aurora |
| Brilliant story, even though I can't see Hermione not taking precautions. Otherwise it's very nicely developed. |
| Tuesday 8th August 2006 09:48 | Aurora (Author Response) |
I can't see Hermione not taking precautions : *whispers conspiratorially* I can't see her doing that either, normally. Must have been the stress.
Thanks so much for the review! |
Wooster
Monday 7th August 2006 11:35 | Aurora |
| Aw. Very sweet. Definitely worthy of story-of-the-week. I love how Harry knew that she was pregnant without being told. Why did they think he wouldn't find out??? Great story all-in-all. |
| Monday 7th August 2006 14:38 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Thank you!
Why did they think he wouldn't find out??? People don't always think logically when they're in a stressful situation... But they intended to tell Harry at some point. Just not then. I know, bad excuse for a brain like Hermione. |
HG4Ever
Monday 7th August 2006 10:34 | Aurora |
| was very cute....I wish there was more . Please have a sequel! |
| Monday 7th August 2006 14:35 | Aurora (Author Response) |
| Thank so much for the review! But sorry, there won't be a sequel. I will be writing other stories, maybe with some , though... I suppose you'd like that, considering you name. |
dancinginmagic
Saturday 22nd July 2006 06:29 | Aurora |
Lovely. Just lovely.
The idea of a sphinx! - I like that! It's such a marvellous idea - who knows what Harry could meet on the hunt? I wouldn't put it past Voldemort to use the mist to defend his Horcruxes. Disorientate the enemy... *dreams of the possibilities*
I like the trio-ish scene after they fought Nagini. Very sweet!
~Sarah |
| Saturday 22nd July 2006 08:06 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Aw, thanks! You just gave a big smile...
I'm glad you liked the background story with the hunt and the sphinx and all that... Could that be a plot bunny forming in your head? Go write it! |
AndyYankees9
Monday 17th July 2006 14:42 | Aurora |
| that was pretty good, but u shouuld make it longer. |
| Monday 17th July 2006 16:10 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Thanks you!
While I was writing it, I would have liked to make it longer, but there was a lenght limit for the contest (even if something went wrong with that in the end). But I'm not re-writing it now... |
Ladybug
Saturday 15th July 2006 09:17 | Aurora |
| Beautiful, Evelyn! A new dawn for a new age - that's lovely. Your story is beautifully structured - each little episode flowing easily into the next, and covering a whole Horcrux hunt in the background without detracting at all from the focus on Ron and Hermione. You manage to convey so much with just a few words. I loved the part when Harry wanted to talk to Ginny when he was injured, and I just adored how Ron kept "wondering how on earth a girl's mind worked"! Great stuff. |
| Saturday 15th July 2006 12:07 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Ah yes. There had to be some H/G in my fic if I can't write a complete story about them. Not that I've tried. Yet.
Thank you so much for your review. You know, if there was something a Best Reviewer Award, I'd give it to you... |
Novera
Friday 14th July 2006 20:57 | Aurora |
| cute |
| Saturday 15th July 2006 00:03 | Aurora (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
