eaglesnest Sunday 11th February 2007 22:55 | The Shop Girl |
The nicest part of this opening chapter was how gently Harry treated Ginny when it was obvious to him that Ginny didn't recognize him. And Ginny's natural attraction to Harry just mad e the dinner so much more sweeter when he asked her id he could her who she was and that she could get her memories back. My gosh, 5+ years! |
lacyrachil Friday 22nd December 2006 11:30 | The Shop Girl |
Nice story. I'd like some more details and keep going with it |
stardust610 Wednesday 13th December 2006 13:34 | The Shop Girl |
Aww... what a cute story! The last line was so sweet... I'm glad Harry found Ginny!! |
CrumpleHornedKiwi Wednesday 13th December 2006 01:04 | The Shop Girl |
I loved this. It's the fist fic I've read where Ginny has disappeared after the 'big fight' - it's normally Harry.
I've 'favourited' you so if you do come up with some more of this I can read it!
Good job |
GryffindorDragon Monday 30th October 2006 14:22 | The Shop Girl |
Wow, nice story. How sad for Ginny to lose her memory, family, and friends . . . and, of course, Harry . But how wonderful that he kept searching till he found her. It looks like this was accidental. He had no idea she was in that supermarket; else he would have been in her queue from the start and wouldn't have had to go back for flowers .
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z26 Wednesday 11th October 2006 13:22 | The Shop Girl |
Very Cute!!
Thanks for writing! |
gypsy Thursday 5th October 2006 08:20 | The Shop Girl |
Oh, that was beautiful! I must admit, I suspected who she was when Harry bought her flowers. So sweet, so gentle and perfect, I loved the ending. Having said that though, I really want to see the birthday party, her meeting her family, and regaining her memories. Pretty please? Another few chapters? I'm sure the other twenty people here agree with me!
Gypsy |
Thursday 5th October 2006 11:03 | The Shop Girl (Author Response) |
Oh, that was beautiful! I must admit, I suspected who she was when Harry bought her flowers. So sweet, so gentle and perfect, I loved the ending. Having said that though, I really want to see the birthday party, her meeting her family, and regaining her memories. Pretty please? Another few chapters? I'm sure the other twenty people here agree with me!
Gypsy
I keep trying - give me a bit of time |
Neli P Wednesday 4th October 2006 20:27 | The Shop Girl |
Cute I loved the twist at the end and Harry's last words were ADORABLE. Good Job!! |
SillyGillie Sunday 1st October 2006 21:12 | The Shop Girl |
Adorable. |
Arnel Thursday 28th September 2006 08:38 | The Shop Girl |
I almost didn't read this story...and I'm really glad I did! I can see why, at dinner, Harry began getting all teary-eyed, knowing that he had, at last, found his beloved Ginny. Thanks for sharing this gem of a story with us. If there are more chapters to come I will definitely be a faithful reader, if not, I hope you'll have a sequel or two to follow. |
vilhelm123 Wednesday 27th September 2006 15:51 | The Shop Girl |
I loved it!
i really did cheer me up i thought Ginny was dead when harry said
'but I lost her a long time ago'
but then u got me at the end |
whitestag Wednesday 27th September 2006 13:13 | The Shop Girl |
Ohhhh, that was so wonderful! I didn't see the ending coming at all. Well done little one shot. |
Gioia Tuesday 26th September 2006 19:30 | The Shop Girl |
Oh, you had me crying! I had no idea. What a shocking and beautiful ending! |
Eressea Tuesday 26th September 2006 15:03 | The Shop Girl |
Short and sweet. Very nice. The only problem I found with it is the term "young man/lady." It doesn't seem like something someone in their twenties would use, but I don't know much about how they talk in Britain. |
Wednesday 27th September 2006 12:00 | The Shop Girl (Author Response) |
Short and sweet. Very nice. The only problem I found with it is the term "young man/lady." It doesn't seem like something someone in their twenties would use, but I don't know much about how they talk in Britain.
I didn't want to give the ending away, and that was the best 'device' I could come up with! |
Gallywise Monday 25th September 2006 17:39 | The Shop Girl |
I really loved this. It's one of the very few where I can't guess the ending. |
harryheartsbeeve Monday 25th September 2006 12:22 | The Shop Girl |
AWE!
that was amazing, very nicely done |
mary-v Monday 25th September 2006 11:48 | The Shop Girl |
Oh this was a great one-sjot, btu what wouild make it en times better would be to have a follow-up fic to this! No but seriously this was great, I really liked this, such a bittersweeet date... I would have totally lvoed to see her reaction to what Harry said, and to see how getting her memory back would have come about.... Anyways, great work! Just brilliant!
~Maria~ |
Wednesday 27th September 2006 12:01 | The Shop Girl (Author Response) |
Oh this was a great one-sjot, btu what wouild make it en times better would be to have a follow-up fic to this! No but seriously this was great, I really liked this, such a bittersweeet date... I would have totally lvoed to see her reaction to what Harry said, and to see how getting her memory back would have come about.... Anyways, great work! Just brilliant!
~Maria~
I keep trying at a follow up, but ot just isn't working yet! Maybe later. |
~delusion~ Monday 25th September 2006 00:09 | The Shop Girl |
that is soooooooooooooooo sweet.
He suddenly looked shy and nervous again, and squeezed her hand. "And if you want him back, you have a boyfriend who loves you very, very much."
& are the perfect couple!
LOVE the story, at first I thought it was going to be horrible having another girl in Harry's life, but the twist at the end was EXCELLENT! |
Wednesday 27th September 2006 12:03 | The Shop Girl (Author Response) |
that is soooooooooooooooo sweet.
He suddenly looked shy and nervous again, and squeezed her hand. "And if you want him back, you have a boyfriend who loves you very, very much."
& are the perfect couple!
LOVE the story, at first I thought it was going to be horrible having another girl in Harry's life, but the twist at the end was EXCELLENT!
Hee hee, how could Harry ever have another girl in his life? |
Mira Miracle Sunday 24th September 2006 23:39 | The Shop Girl |
How very, very beautiful! I expected everything but this ending - well done. It would really suit Harry to keep looking for Ginny for five years, seven months and two days. |
Astrid Sunday 24th September 2006 22:45 | The Shop Girl |
How cute! |
hp4-sauce Sunday 24th September 2006 22:00 | The Shop Girl |
That was cute. Nicely done. |
girl from ipanema Sunday 24th September 2006 19:53 | The Shop Girl |
Oh, that was very nicely done. I hope you expand a bit in this universe. |
Wednesday 27th September 2006 11:58 | The Shop Girl (Author Response) |
Oh, that was very nicely done. I hope you expand a bit in this universe.
I have tried several times to write the follow up (and back stiory) to this, but it just won't 'gel' yet. I'll keep trying. |
Connor Landon Sunday 24th September 2006 19:07 | The Shop Girl |
That was so sweet!! I love these stories! I can never seem to find very many, though. I really enjoyed your version, and I had no idea that "Vicky" would turn out to be Ginny. I was kinda wondering why Harry was being incredibly sweet with a random girl, and that nearly turned me away, but I kept reading. Good thing I did, eh? Well, thank you for sharing! |
Stormdelver Sunday 24th September 2006 17:18 | The Shop Girl |
Me Firts! This is a very nice story, short and sweet, but yet it coukd be more. I loved it, a tender moment, I could almost feel the tear slide down my cheek, and what a way to bring a life back. Well done, I love the moment you created, |