Ocean Dream
Sunday 22nd February 2009 16:58 | Love's Long Day |
| Perfect! |
gymnastgal19
Monday 1st September 2008 17:09 | Love's Long Day |
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chiantiqueen
Saturday 29th December 2007 07:10 | Love's Long Day |
| Well done for finally working it out James! I loved this story, I think secretly, deep down Lily always enjoyed the attention it's just she's so stubborn that she didn't want to admit it!! You write James and Lily so well, I can totally see this happening! |
everylittlething
Monday 12th November 2007 04:04 | Love's Long Day |
| lovely! thanks for these awesome stories! |
| Friday 16th November 2007 19:47 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
| You're welcome. Thanks for reading and reviewing them. |
SpellBound
Saturday 20th October 2007 06:00 | Love's Long Day |
aww, I love this story, the other one's great as well. I'm glad you decided to do it from both POV's.
Sherellyn
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| Saturday 20th October 2007 07:15 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
| Thanks. It was fun to think about how James was feeling too. I think that, from the Lily piece, a few readers got the wrong end of the stick, so I was glad to show that he was just as nervous and uncertain as she was. |
SpellBound
Saturday 20th October 2007 05:59 | Love's Long Day |
aww, I love this story, the other one's great as well. I'm glad you decided to do it from both POV's.
Sherellyn
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Evelyn
Tuesday 6th March 2007 01:02 | Love's Long Day |
Yes, that was brilliant. Lily Evans jealous. Lily annoyed because he hadn’t given her anything.
And if she wasn’t, well then he wouldn’t have to give her the card at all.
Your James is ... I don't know. Terrible, funny, and I suppose he's cute, too.
He hoped it was a jealous back but really, it was hard to say.
Funny and cute, again.
I LOVE your writing. |
| Tuesday 6th March 2007 05:50 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
| You're so sweet - thank you! I wanted to write this so that people didn't think too badly of James in the other side of the story - funny and cute is exactly what I was going for. |
ibelieveintruelove
Monday 5th March 2007 11:19 | Love's Long Day |
| Oh that was so adorable! I loved the one from Lily\'s POV too, but I think I like this one better because I get to see what happens after Lily gets the card. Very sweet story, keep up the good work! |
Starbuck_23
Thursday 1st March 2007 16:44 | Love's Long Day |
| Ahh, poor clueless James. Just like poor clueless Harry . No really though, this was really sweet. I especially liked Peter's suggestion of a singing valentine. History really does repeat itself I guess. Great job! |
| Thursday 1st March 2007 16:51 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
| Thank you! It's funny that when I write Lily, people tell me she's like Harry and when I write James, people say the same. All in the eye of the beholder, I'd say! I'm glad you enjoyed it though. |
Erin
Thursday 1st March 2007 15:34 | Love's Long Day |
Aw, JP has finally worked out what girls really want. Good for him, I say!
Erin |
| Thursday 1st March 2007 16:40 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
| If only all guys were so quick (comparatively) to catch on! |
DaFalcon
Monday 26th February 2007 18:58 | Love's Long Day |
I know I've told you once before how much I love your James and Lily and nothing has changed. I truly adore the way you write them. I loved seeing more of the Maruaders pov in this piece. I could even appreciate Pete in this one. Most of the time I just can't stand when he's in the mix with them, even tho I know he was their friend.
Great job. I look forward to reading more stories from you.
-Dee |
| Monday 26th February 2007 19:25 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked this one too. It was really fun to think about it all from a different perspective - and give James a chance to show his more vulnerable side.
Right now I'm not supposed to be writing any new stories until I've worked out my big plot problem with my WIP. Once that's underway again, maybe I'll dabble a bit more with Lily/James.
Thanks for reading. |
pokie4389
Monday 26th February 2007 14:28 | Love's Long Day |
| So cute! |
| Monday 26th February 2007 15:39 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
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Lily Flower
Monday 26th February 2007 13:58 | Love's Long Day |
Very nicely done. I like that this was done in James POV to match Lily's. I like it. Very sweet.
Lils |
| Monday 26th February 2007 15:39 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
critmo
Monday 26th February 2007 07:10 | Love's Long Day |
| Well done. Even though I still don't understand why he had to be so rude about the quill incident. An apology wouldn't have ruined his plan. - Maybe, I don't understand girls either. |
| Monday 26th February 2007 07:30 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
Nerves? Fear? I don't think he meant his first comment to be rude, but then when she had a go at him he was kind of angry too and not thinking entirely straight.
I don't know - anyone would think men are from Mars and women are from Venus!!
Thanks, anyway. |
Trelawney2213
Sunday 25th February 2007 17:18 | Love's Long Day |
He gripped her hand hard and hoped with all his heart that he would never have to let it go again.
What a sweet line. Very nice parallel piece. |
| Sunday 25th February 2007 17:41 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
| Thanks, Gerry. You're so sweet to leave proper reviews. |
Grandma Kate
Sunday 25th February 2007 14:44 | Love's Long Day |
| So romantic! Having this one be from the point of view of James made it very special. What nice parents Harry is going to have! |
| Sunday 25th February 2007 15:30 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
| Ah, thank you! |
Frenchy
Sunday 25th February 2007 14:38 | Love's Long Day |
| Aww... so sweet! It was great to read from Jame\'s perspective, and I loved the new part at the end. Thank you for bringing I smile to my face! |
| Sunday 25th February 2007 15:31 | Love's Long Day (Author Response) |
| Glad you liked it, It's just one tiny step, but at least it's progress for these two. |
