saulick
Friday 6th November 2009 13:01 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| This is a very fun, cute story. I liked the nervousness of everyone involved, especially Ron. good job! |
moralitas
Sunday 23rd August 2009 17:30 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| very heart warming. a fantastic story......it was a bit unclear in a few sections, but i caught on after a few sentences. |
DaniKay
Monday 16th February 2009 19:05 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
Brilliant!!
hahaha the Canons?? really?? awesome
DaniKay
|
mmuuaacch
Thursday 24th January 2008 05:46 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| Great,,, i like your title... |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 16th January 2008 06:55 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
hehe interesting story, i take it that harry caught the snitch but that wasnt enough points to win... so sad
|
pcclogger
Sunday 11th November 2007 13:35 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| Great Story!! |
respite
Sunday 4th November 2007 12:39 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
Amazing detail on Harry's stage-fright. I felt my own stomach twinge for him!
Great job. Would have liked to have seen more from Ginny, but maybe that's for later... |
itsme07863
Saturday 27th October 2007 20:59 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| very cool. a sweet h/g story lol |
everylittlething
Thursday 25th October 2007 07:44 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| this is a really fun story! thanks! |
aharkins
Monday 22nd October 2007 14:57 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| Nagini Boots and the Chudley Cannons - I love it. |
Patches
Sunday 21st October 2007 01:04 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| This is a good story. I love the way you set it up and then ending was perfect. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more like it! p |
Arnel
Friday 19th October 2007 07:28 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| First off, congratulations on having this story selected as Story of the Week. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this light bit of fluff that went straight to my "Awwww!" spot. You've done an excellent job of showing Harry's anxiety and anxious thoughts as he prepares for his first match. I also loved reading Ginny's point of view as well. The story definitely receives from me! |
fire_faerie
Wednesday 17th October 2007 15:26 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| That as really cute little story. Can you write more of these short stories? They're really good! |
Chatmandu
Tuesday 16th October 2007 07:16 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
Oh my! Thanks to your story, Ginny's with the Nagini boots, I now have this visual image of Neville mucking compost in snake skin boots and tending the more dangerous plants in snake skin gloves.
Nagini Boots! Sounds like an Italian fashion house.
Good job with the story. |
freshwater
Monday 15th October 2007 21:15 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| Oops, forgot to mention: I LOVED the part "she needed to be watched. Over. Watched over, by me....someone...." ROTFLOL Delightful! |
freshwater
Monday 15th October 2007 21:12 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| Very fun read! Great "voice" for Harry's inner thoughts, and an expected but nonetheless perfect ending. |
GryffindorGal87
Monday 15th October 2007 19:33 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| Awww! That was just to perfect, though I do have to say that I think the Cannons would win if Harr ever played for them! =] |
The Boss
Monday 15th October 2007 06:27 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
Well I never would have thought that Harry would be playing for the Chudley Cannons but now that I think of it, that does make sense.
Nice bit of work.
The Boss |
Gemmika
Sunday 19th August 2007 20:19 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| As always I loved it. Your writing just holds so much imagery! I love the fact that the Cannons still can't win. It's wonderful! I also love the watching Ginny in the pond part. Once again, just wanted to let you know how much I love your writing. |
DeborahSu
Tuesday 10th July 2007 17:09 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
Well done! Poor Harry--you described his feelings so well! and a happy ending, as well.
|
pyromain
Monday 9th July 2007 13:51 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| quite loved this story, I know Ron would love this story Harry playing for the Cannons he will be in heaven. |
Grandma Kate
Monday 9th July 2007 13:45 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| I can picture Ginny in Nangini boots. |
parakletos
Monday 9th July 2007 08:36 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| I'm confused: the Cannons were celebrating even though they lost? |
MandaEvelyn
Sunday 8th July 2007 13:16 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| This was wonderful. I love that even though Harry caught the snitch the Cannons still didn't win. I can totally imagine him catching the snitch in every single game, but the team never winning a single match! Ha. Well at least he got Ginny. |
lantis222
Sunday 8th July 2007 10:58 | Anxious Seeker Seeking the Snitch... and the Girl |
| Hi! Great story! I loved your description of Harry's pre-match jitters. I also really liked that Ginny calmed him. Oh, and Ginny's Nagini boots was priceless. Great job! |
