Patches
Saturday 11th August 2007 03:52 | Learning a Virtue |
| This is a cute story. Tonks is not patient. Remus is a marouder! Quite the combination! I love it! Thanks for writing. p |
GryffindorDragon
Sunday 29th July 2007 13:15 | Learning a Virtue |
Nice piece. I know Wolfsbane Potion tastes disgusting, but does Remus t show any hesitation in drinking it in canon (cf. PA 8)?
Interesting debate as to whether it is a disease. In OP22 a werewolf is in the same ward as Arthur, Creature-induced Injuries. Harry overhears the comment, 'No cure at all.' So is it an injury (which would be treated, not cured, wouldn't it?) or is it a disease (which would be cured, right?)?
I like the interplay between the two. But isn't Remus a bit off? Doesn't canon treat him as the more mature one among the Marauders? Isn't Sirius the one more likely to whine?
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narumi
Friday 27th July 2007 10:47 | Learning a Virtue |
| bit anti-climatic at the ending, not even telling us what it was! |
| Friday 27th July 2007 22:19 | Learning a Virtue (Author Response) |
| Eh, I suppose. But I do that a lot to my readers. I'm terrible about that, leaving people with cliff-hangers. Maybe this isn't completed, and is a WIP after all! |
aurora luminis
Wednesday 25th July 2007 23:12 | Learning a Virtue |
| I wanted to write sooner but it wasn't possible. Now you have all the pain of having your two characters among the fallen. That makes this piece all the more precious, since I suspect many will drop writing about Lupin and Tonks now that they have walked beyond the veil in the HP universe. But it would be nice if people like you would continue to investigate all the moments that happened before the battle of Hogwarts: the birth of their son, etc. Rowling has given us so much, and I urge you to grab the ball and run! thanks a million for the piece. |
| Friday 27th July 2007 22:18 | Learning a Virtue (Author Response) |
| I've always loved writing Remus/Tonks, and just because JKR killed them off, I don't intend to stop writing them. On the contrary, I'm tossing around a few plot bunnies regarding their engagement and wedding. Maybe a few regarding whether little Teddy Lupin was born a werewolf, or how he devlops skills in being a Metamorphagi. (I just know that can't be spelled right!) |
legobean
Monday 23rd July 2007 10:17 | Learning a Virtue |
Hey GinnyS,
I read this during the contest, but I don't leave any reviews during contests that I'm in, for obvious reasons. But I thought it was cute. I felt like you should have made it a tad bit longer, and explain what happened during the one week, perhaps build on their mutual sexual frustration. However the parts that were there were good.
So keep on writing!
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| Friday 27th July 2007 22:15 | Learning a Virtue (Author Response) |
| Thanks, Legobean! I wanted to elaborate a bit, but forgot how long the entries were allowed to be, and I was just too lazy to check again. |
Grandma Kate
Tuesday 10th July 2007 08:39 | Learning a Virtue |
| Your Remus is different from the way I think about him but Tonks seemed familiar. |
| Tuesday 17th July 2007 12:12 | Learning a Virtue (Author Response) |
| I did make him seem a bit whiney. My excuse is that it was before full moon so it made his emotions kinda messed up... Bad excuse I know. |
lantis222
Monday 9th July 2007 18:53 | Learning a Virtue |
| very cute. I really like Remus and Tonks, I think she's good for him. |
| Tuesday 17th July 2007 12:15 | Learning a Virtue (Author Response) |
| I think she is too. Sorta brings in the spice of life. |
pyromain
Sunday 8th July 2007 16:13 | Learning a Virtue |
| lovelly little story, i quite enjoyed it. |
| Tuesday 17th July 2007 12:14 | Learning a Virtue (Author Response) |
| Oh thank you! |
ibelieveintruelove
Sunday 8th July 2007 02:24 | Learning a Virtue |
| Oh what's Tonks's gift? A ring? lol Very cute story |
| Tuesday 17th July 2007 12:13 | Learning a Virtue (Author Response) |
| Yes, Remus was going to propose to her. Tonks finally made him see he should live life as best he can. |
