The_Critic Thursday 31st January 2008 14:40 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
Nice. That is NOT sacrcastic. Great story! |
gymnastgal19 Sunday 20th January 2008 09:35 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
huh interesting... so dumbledore already knew that he was dying so sad.
too bad hermonie and ron didnt get there snog
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lantis222 Tuesday 15th January 2008 09:50 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
Oh, poor Dumbledore...it still makes me sad to know he's not around anymore. Ah, well, great story, I really liked it! |
aimless` Monday 14th January 2008 18:05 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
Hermione gave her a sad look. “Ginny, we’re friends. Nothing less, but nothing more. He’ll never see me… that way, I know it.”
Was obvious that he already did ^^ |
Astrid Monday 14th January 2008 17:05 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
Wow, way to take a cute fluffy story and add a morbid ending line.
But I liked it, all of it. Good work. |
pyromain Monday 14th January 2008 10:14 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
How thick can you get? Ron is the thickest person I have ever read about. But than again it fits his character. Great story. |
hg4eva13 Monday 14th January 2008 06:29 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
I LOVED IT!!!!!!! Not only because it shows that Harry and Ginny love each other (and I'm a HUGE H/G supporter), but it also shows that Neville and Luna love each other. I'm just sorry that Hermione was left out, oh well. I mean this has gone on for years, we all know that Ron and Hermione are hopelessly in love with each other. They'll come around, I'm sure of it. |
Patches Monday 14th January 2008 05:33 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
This is very well done. It is disappointing that Hermione and Ron didn't get together. I was really hoping for them. Luna and Neville are great together. I am so happy for Harry and Ginny. They have both been through so much they deserve to be happy. I look forward to more stories of this calilber. Thanks again. p |
chiantiqueen Monday 14th January 2008 03:08 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
Great story, fluffy but not too much. Poor Hermione! Sort it out Ron!! But what's this aboiut Mr Filch and Madam Pince?? Not sure I needed to hear about that one but I suppose if they're happy.... Anyway fab story, really enjoyable read |
ibelieveintruelove Sunday 13th January 2008 23:59 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
What a good story! I'm a little disappointed that Hermione and Ron didn't get together yet but we all know that they will soon! And I loved all of the couple action going on too, so cute. The ending was really clever though, with Dumbledore commenting on what he thought of the couples in Hogwarts. The last line was so sad though! =*(
Anyways great story! |
veghindu101 Sunday 13th January 2008 23:49 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
Favorite line:
how could he not like a girl so attached to vegetation?
Hated line:
Dumbledore was just sorry that he wouldn�t be around to see it.
So light and fluffly until you SLAM down the sledgehammer on us! Very unexpected. Waah!
Good writing, though |
bookish327 Sunday 13th January 2008 20:55 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
Great story! I liked how you showed so many couples' relationships, as well as each person's thoughts and feelings. All of them seemed very in character from the books. I also liked your premise and plot points.
Good job! |
majolie Sunday 13th January 2008 20:36 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
Very cute story. Definitely made me laugh a couple times. The ending was a little bit of a downer for me, but lines like, "how could he not like a girl so attached to vegetation?" were just too great! |
blue artemis Sunday 13th January 2008 18:43 | Once Upon a Broomcupboard |
That was really sweet. I enjoyed it. |