TangoCharlie
Monday 29th September 2008 23:01 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| A really fantastic opening to your story. I loved the detailed descriptions and the images and atmosphere they conjure. You've created such a strong feeling of nostalgia here... I look forward to reading more! |
dougalpotter
Sunday 20th July 2008 05:42 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| Good well written first chapter. |
DukeBrymin
Friday 20th June 2008 21:42 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| Hmmm. Well, I'll give it a try, but the prologue is missing a hook to really suck me in. Nevertheless, I think it has potential, although I'm afraid, since Ginny hasn't shown up yet. |
| Saturday 21st June 2008 18:00 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| Ginny will show up, I promise! |
Arnel
Wednesday 18th June 2008 21:11 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| A very nice start. for all the mystery these paragraphs illicit. I hope your next chapter gets posted soon. |
GinnySavesHarry1998
Wednesday 18th June 2008 16:37 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| Please tell me this won't end sad, and I'll keep reading. But if the memories involve Ginny dying or them separating permanently, then it'll be too sad for me to read and not good for my mental health, so please let us know in an author note or at least let me know somehow please. You don't have to tell me what happens... just that it's not a tragedy. :-) |
| Wednesday 18th June 2008 19:26 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| Okay, how to answer this... perhaps take a quick look at some of my other stories and see how they end. That should answer your question. Thanks for reviewing! Lots to come! |
RIPHedwig
Wednesday 18th June 2008 09:06 | Unbreakable Bonds |
Intrieging... (I can never spell that word!)
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| Wednesday 18th June 2008 19:24 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| I hope you continue to be intrigued. This was just a taste, there's a LOT more to come. |
Grandma Kate
Wednesday 18th June 2008 06:04 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| You've created a mood that promises many surprises and much emotion. It's nice to see you back again. |
| Wednesday 18th June 2008 19:23 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| Hi! It's good to see you here, too! As the A/N will explain very soon, this one's been in the works since early 2005. And guess who's posting it for me?!? Iviolinist!!! |
Patches
Wednesday 18th June 2008 03:20 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| A melancoly return! Memories can hurt and heal. I look foward to where you are going with this. A well developed picture in my mind. Thank you. p |
| Wednesday 18th June 2008 19:21 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| Yes, sometimes Harry gets a little carried away with himself. Don't worry, all will be revealed in good course. Thirteen chapters to come. Thanks for the review! |
