DaniKay
Tuesday 28th April 2009 20:28 | Our Obligations |
Wow, Scorpius kind of sounds like Harry, when he first arrived at Hogwarts I mean- but Harry was nice. Lol, excellent start!
James seems like a git, almost like Ron actually, but Al is soo Harry's son lol, and wow, Rose totally seems like Hermione. Great work!
I cannot wait to see what you have planed for this story!
DaniKay
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KateB
Saturday 25th April 2009 13:51 | Our Obligations |
| I'm so looking forward to reading more! I feel bad for Scorpius and can't wait to see which house he gets sorted into--please say we will get to see the conversation between the Sorting Hat and Scorpio! I've enjoyed your other stories, and am excited you are posting a new one: thank you! |
| Saturday 25th April 2009 21:01 | Our Obligations (Author Response) |
| The third chapter is entitled "The Sorting of Scorpius Malfoy". So, yes, you will see the conversation between the Sorting Hat and Scorpius. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. |
RIPHedwig
Saturday 25th April 2009 12:51 | Our Obligations |
Yay, I'm hoping this is going to be multi-chaptered...? I was feeling in the modd for some HP last night, so read the epilogue which, as always, made me want more material on the new generations of Weasleys and Potters and Malfoys... And here it is!
Really good, well-written but my heart did break a bit for poor Scorpius!
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crumplehornedkiwi
Saturday 25th April 2009 01:07 | Our Obligations |
| Oh yes, I imagine going to Hogwarts would have been VERY intimidating for Scorpius Malfoy |
mollyw4
Friday 24th April 2009 22:48 | Our Obligations |
| Great start on the story. Can't wait to see where you are going. Poor Scorpius! |
honourary_weasley
Friday 24th April 2009 19:42 | Our Obligations |
| Oooh... I like it a lot! More please! |
Ocean Dream
Friday 24th April 2009 17:37 | Our Obligations |
Uhm, seems promising! I´ve enjoyed your young characters quite a lot!
(And you even managed to get Sirius in there, an extra bonus for me) |
Jacynthe
Friday 24th April 2009 12:51 | Our Obligations |
Nice start, good topic. A tiny quibble -- Albus seems awfully good at standing up to a brother who is considerably older (at least it seems that way when you're 11), which doesn't quite match the little glimpse of them all we get on the platform in JKR's epilogue. But, hey, he's yours now, do as you will.
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saulick
Friday 24th April 2009 08:58 | Our Obligations |
| I like the beginning. I have always like stories about Scorpius and your writing as well so this should be a really good ride for me! |
Dad
Friday 24th April 2009 08:55 | Our Obligations |
| Interesting start. I hope you can develope this in a novel storyline. |
ngayonatkailanman
Friday 24th April 2009 05:35 | Our Obligations |
An excellent start.
I would have thought James would be with his cousin Fred Weasley, other Weasleys or 2nd/3rd year friends rather than be with first years even if they are his brother and cousin.
Very good characterisation. |
