J-TGriffy
Wednesday 22nd February 2012 08:00 | Give It Time |
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HeadTaylor
Monday 14th November 2011 17:43 | Give It Time |
| I received 1 st business loans when I was a teenager and that aided me very much. Nevertheless, I require the short term loan over again. |
ibelieveintruelove
Friday 12th February 2010 15:19 | Give It Time |
| Perfect! It makes so much more sense to see them slowly work back to where they were then to just have them immediately start dating again. Nice job! |
| Monday 29th August 2011 05:04 | Give It Time (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Sorry it's taken me so long to respond, I didn't receive a review notification. |
RIPHedwig
Saturday 10th October 2009 13:32 | Give It Time |
Really, really lovely. Got the characters spot on and the plot line was totally believable
This was my fav:
'The train pulled in, and Ron grinned at Harry, bouncing on his heels. 'You ready for a lot of squealing, mate?'
'Don't squeal too much, we're getting stared at enough as it is,' Harry said, watching as the doors opened and people spilled out onto the platform, dragging trunks and owl cages behind them.'
I could just see that!
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| Sunday 18th October 2009 04:27 | Give It Time (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much - I love to hear that people think I've got the characters right! |
ngayonatkailanman
Sunday 4th October 2009 19:26 | Give It Time |
| Excellent. |
| Monday 5th October 2009 03:42 | Give It Time (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
brios
Tuesday 29th September 2009 10:25 | Give It Time |
| Lovely! |
| Saturday 3rd October 2009 12:33 | Give It Time (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! |
Grandma Kate
Friday 25th September 2009 15:34 | Give It Time |
Oh Fumph, you got it just right! This is so much like it feels for each of us when it happens-
She kissed him then, and it was familiar yet new, strange yet comforting, the Ginny he'd left behind finally clicking into being with the Ginny he'd come home to, and it felt right. He felt whole with her in his arms, and he suddenly realised that Ginny wasn't just a girl he liked, she was the girl he loved.
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| Friday 25th September 2009 16:04 | Give It Time (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm rather fond of that paragraph, so I'm happy you picked it out. |
Dad
Friday 25th September 2009 08:59 | Give It Time |
| That was a story that has been done many times before. but often not as well as that. Well done. |
| Friday 25th September 2009 12:53 | Give It Time (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! I've enjoyed most of the Harry and Ginny reuniting stories, but in most of them, they get back together almost immediately, and I wanted to explore a different avenue. |
The Boss
Friday 25th September 2009 07:23 | Give It Time |
Yay! Great story! Loving every bit of it. I like how yo umanaged to get a few perspectives in this story
A job well done
The Boss |
| Friday 25th September 2009 12:54 | Give It Time (Author Response) |
| Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the story, I appreciate it! |
turtlegirl
Friday 25th September 2009 06:02 | Give It Time |
| This is very well done! It's hard to find the right details to fill in the reunion of Harry and Ginny, but you have captured my ideas of how it must have been perfectly! |
| Friday 25th September 2009 12:55 | Give It Time (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking the time to let me know that you enjoyed it. |
Patches
Friday 25th September 2009 03:41 | Give It Time |
| This is really good. It is hard for people to come together after a long time apart. They know what they want but there is so much time and distance between them that they have to over come. This is very well done. Thank you for writing. pms |
| Friday 25th September 2009 12:56 | Give It Time (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much! |
TangoCharlie
Friday 25th September 2009 00:46 | Give It Time |
| I love this, not just coz the writing is so beautiful and fluid, but because the handling of Harry and Ginny's immediate post-war relationship is so much like the way I've always imagined it would be. So real and genuine. Perfect. Great work, I really enjoyed this : ) |
| Friday 25th September 2009 12:56 | Give It Time (Author Response) |
| Thank you for such a lovely review! |
