The Boss
Monday 9th November 2009 16:22 | Out of the Darkness |
Welcome back to writing =] very much appreciated. Good beginning how ever it is sad. I am surpised however that Ginny did not return to Hogwarts like Molly always indicated that she would do.
You have a great style of writing. Keep the chapters rolling out!
The Boss |
DukeBrymin
Saturday 7th November 2009 10:28 | Out of the Darkness |
Hmm, I don't think I've ever read one where Ginny chose not to go back to school.
Looking forward to more! |
RIPHedwig
Saturday 10th October 2009 13:37 | Out of the Darkness |
Brill, just excellent.
Love snap-shot fic
B |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 21:05 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review RIPHedwig! Snap-shot fic? Is that what you call it? I guess that makes sense! Sadly, I have the job of telling you the first chapter is really the only one, so far that has been written that way. But perhaps it's a good transition style. Hmmmm.... |
Gaffer
Wednesday 7th October 2009 14:19 | Out of the Darkness |
OK you have set out the tidbits. Now bring on the feast.
Your writing style is good, too early to judge the story yet. But do keep writing. |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 21:03 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks for your review, Gaffer. I hope as the chapters are published, you will continue your candid reviews. I appreciate the constructive honesty. |
ngayonatkailanman
Monday 5th October 2009 04:16 | Out of the Darkness |
| You had me in floods of tears! Excellent chapter. Any more? |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 21:02 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Floods of tears? Wow! Thanks - you have no idea how much that means to me. I really was trying to elicit some serious emotion there. I really appreciate the review. The next 5 chapters are ready, and in edit phase. Hoping to have an update soon. |
Patches
Monday 5th October 2009 01:33 | Out of the Darkness |
| This is a really good overview of the year after Hogwarts. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks so much for filling in the gap that was left by canon. p |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 21:01 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reviewing Patches! I hope you won't be disappointed. I am envisioning a good chunk of time between the last chapter and the epilogue. |
PPL
Sunday 4th October 2009 05:24 | Out of the Darkness |
Nice start.
Looking forward to read more. |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 21:00 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review! |
bcollins
Thursday 1st October 2009 10:37 | Out of the Darkness |
| I enjoyed this very much, I even added you to the list of 3 authors I wanted emailed story updates. Can't wait to read the rest of it. |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 21:00 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reviewing and adding me to your update list! I hope you won't be disappointed! |
Wolf\\\'s Scream
Wednesday 30th September 2009 06:52 | Out of the Darkness |
| Excellent start. :-) |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 20:58 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review! |
Grandma Kate
Tuesday 29th September 2009 09:33 | Out of the Darkness |
| A splendid start to the story of the year after the Battle. |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 20:58 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Grandma Kate, thank you so much for your review! I feel like you are such a strong writer here that when I see you've read my story, I get chills! I appreciate the review! More to follow... |
koolsmg
Monday 28th September 2009 17:03 | Out of the Darkness |
nice beginning, i like the style and look forward to reading more
please update soon! |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 20:57 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thank you for the review! There will be an update soon! Editing phase going on now! |
Ocean Dream
Monday 28th September 2009 17:02 | Out of the Darkness |
Touching!
Well, I can't really see Ginny not finishing Hogwarts the usual way, but your choice be it...
Looking forward to next chapters |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 20:55 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks for your review! I appreciate your candor about Ginny. I am curious as to what aspects of Ginny's character give in to the idea that she would go back. I hope you don' t take that question as argumentative. Just trying to make my writing the best it can be! |
Arnel
Monday 28th September 2009 11:56 | Out of the Darkness |
| I'm looking forward to the rest of this story. I really like the glimpses of each set of characters and think it will be fun to follow along with everyone as they mature and find their life's work. I give this chapter for making me happy and sad simultaneously. Please update soon. |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 20:54 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much! The next 5 chapters are actually in edit phase right now. So they shouldn't be too far away. I hope that they satisfy! |
Avanelle
Monday 28th September 2009 11:45 | Out of the Darkness |
| Great start, can't wait to read more! |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 20:53 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Oh, it's coming, Avanelle! I have a bunch of chapters written, just going through the editing phase with my beta at the moment. We'll get there. Thanks for the review. |
Dad
Monday 28th September 2009 11:09 | Out of the Darkness |
| An excellent start. I like your writing style. |
| Saturday 10th October 2009 20:51 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks I appreciate that. I still feel so new to the whole fan-fic thing that I get very self-conscious about my writing. My confidence is getting better though. Reviews like yours, definitely help. THANK YOU! |
saulick
Monday 28th September 2009 08:27 | Out of the Darkness |
| I like the beginning. Hope more is coming quickly! |
| Monday 28th September 2009 09:22 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks. I do have a few chapters waiting in the wings, and working on others. |
wluer96
Monday 28th September 2009 07:33 | Out of the Darkness |
| Fantastic start. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Had to chuckle at Lucius reading Dickens! |
| Monday 28th September 2009 09:22 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review! It should take a nice turn from here - of course with stumbling blocks in the way. |
