marinka
Saturday 14th January 2017 18:51 | A Spanner in the Works |
| Haha , if only he took him to work earlier! Sexually satisfied Vernon=to much happie home environment for Harry, no doubt! |
| Sunday 15th January 2017 04:30 | A Spanner in the Works (Author Response) |
Haha , if only he took him to work earlier! Sexually satisfied Vernon=to much happie home environment for Harry, no doubt!
Sex and the Dursleys...moving on! |
1mperio
Sunday 4th December 2016 10:25 | A Spanner in the Works |
| Excellent snippet, I could see where you could begin a story with this or be an interlude in an ongoing story. |
| Sunday 4th December 2016 11:35 | A Spanner in the Works (Author Response) |
My, you have been busy today
I did try to write a Dursley POV story once, but I either made them completely despicable or too nice. This seemed like the right balance. |
DanAngelus
Friday 1st January 2016 00:46 | A Spanner in the Works |
| Nice happy little story with a rare look into the private lives of the Vernon and Petunia. Nicely done. |
Arnel
Sunday 6th December 2015 01:50 | A Spanner in the Works |
| If this is one of your house cleaning projects, I think it's a rather clever bit of writing. I love how the apparent romance between Vernon and Petunia can make home life a little easier for Harry. The attitudes of the employees at Grunnings because of Vernon's lies frosts me, but maybe the bit of good Harry did with the spanner will soften them. The big boss' comment about the health and safety guys made me smile as did the fact that Harry was able to spend his extra time with Ginny. Nice story. |
| Sunday 6th December 2015 02:05 | A Spanner in the Works (Author Response) |
| It was a fun piece to write so its good to know that you enjoyed it |
DukeBrymin
Saturday 5th December 2015 14:04 | A Spanner in the Works |
Nicely done. Although "loving Dursleys" is a little nauseating.
You might want to fix the "garbed" typo in the last sentence, though. |
| Saturday 5th December 2015 14:50 | A Spanner in the Works (Author Response) |
Nicely done. Although "loving Dursleys" is a little nauseating.
You might want to fix the "garbed" typo in the last sentence, though.
Yeah, lovely Dursleys is a bit hard to take. Thanks for the heads up on the typo. My error as I added it in at the last minute. All fixed now. |
