Aurorofthelight
Tuesday 12th June 2018 22:05 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| So overjoyed to see this marvelous story finished! I have been following it from the start and I thank you finishing this brilliant masterpiece! ! |
Dun8y
Monday 5th March 2018 11:23 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| What can I say? Except thank you for finishing this unusual take on Harry and Ginny. It has been a long time coming, but well worth the wait. Sorry I haven't reviewed much, I think I did early on, but when I came across this again I just wanted to finish as quickly as possible x |
Jacynthe
Tuesday 28th February 2017 09:32 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| So, I wandered by and see that you have finished this. Well done ! I shall now, of course, have to go back and read it again properly, from beginning to end, and am very much looking forward to it. Thanks ! |
| Tuesday 28th February 2017 17:39 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
So, I wandered by and see that you have finished this. Well done ! I shall now, of course, have to go back and read it again properly, from beginning to end, and am very much looking forward to it. Thanks !
I hope you enjoy rereading it.
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Dad
Tuesday 14th February 2017 09:17 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Nicely different. Not just the same characters and some very original dialogue. Well written. Well done. |
| Tuesday 14th February 2017 09:59 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Nicely different. Not just the same characters and some very original dialogue. Well written. Well done.
Thanks! |
aimless`
Wednesday 1st February 2017 12:09 | The Sins of the Fathers |
I started to read this story almost 9 years ago and I'm glad to see it finished. Very well written, I enjoyed reading it. You managed to keep the intrigue till the very last words of last chapter. I loved your explanation about Edith, it totally makes sense (not much people would guess it tho).
As my reading of this story was rather fragmentary, I might have missed some points. So for me still some questions remains:
Edith seems to be powerful and she uses stuff instead of wand? She manages to hit Lestrange, she brings in some mysterious magical crystal.
That magical crystal, yes Kreacher knows better, but I only know that it is some kind of MacGuffin. It;s magic? )
Where did Dumbledore disappear to at the final acts of the drama?
What happened to Tonks? Is she down means dead, or injured and incapable of fighting?
Thanks for writing, nice ending. Love seems to be indeed, the greatest power in the end ). |
| Wednesday 1st February 2017 13:25 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
As my reading of this story was rather fragmentary, I might have missed some points. So for me still some questions remains:
Edith seems to be powerful and she uses stuff instead of wand? She manages to hit Lestrange, she brings in some mysterious magical crystal.
That magical crystal, yes Kreacher knows better, but I only know that it is some kind of MacGuffin. It;s magic? )
Where did Dumbledore disappear to at the final acts of the drama?
What happened to Tonks? Is she down means dead, or injured and incapable of fighting?
Thanks for writing, nice ending. Love seems to be indeed, the greatest power in the end ).
So Edith, well she came prepared. Wizards do the obvious thing, she chose to be inventive and it paid off. I used Kreacher to bring gear to Harry in a fight so it seemed to be appropriate to do the same here. There is more to Edith than meets the eye, but that's another story,
Dumbledore took Ron to safety.
Tonks lives to stumble another day
I always leave a few lose ends and it infuriates some people but thats me.
Thanks for sticking with it, we all got there in the end. |
embates
Thursday 19th January 2017 20:53 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Very, very well done. Thank you for writing it. |
| Monday 23rd January 2017 10:02 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
| And thank you for reading and reviewing |
1mperio
Monday 16th January 2017 21:53 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| The final act of an outstanding tale. Thank you for sticking with it, I appreciate everything IRL you had to battle through to finish this and I greatly appreciate it. Your characters were well developed and true to themselves, the plot was baroque, but that was by a central character's design so it all fits. The Edith solution is brilliant, a gordian knot solved logically and well. Finally, it's gratifying to see a Ginny character that isn't a: 1. soul bond 2. fan girl/stalker 3. absolute b**ch 4. destined to fall in love (I think I hit all the tropes), but rather an independent person. Your Harry character should win heart, but not easily and only if she allows it. Once again, thanks for an incredible story. |
| Tuesday 17th January 2017 06:36 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
| And thank you for sticking with it. This was due to be my final act on the fanfic stage, but the ideas keep coming so I may be back. |
justina
Saturday 14th January 2017 23:10 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| I've followed this story from the start but am a hopeless reviewer. Forgive me. I have always loved your stories even when they didn't end how I would have liked! So thank you and I hope to read more of your stories in the future. |
| Sunday 15th January 2017 04:29 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
I've followed this story from the start but am a hopeless reviewer. Forgive me. I have always loved your stories even when they didn't end how I would have liked! So thank you and I hope to read more of your stories in the future.
Thank you for being one of those who stuck with it after all these years. I'm not sure what the next project is, but if its H&G it will be posted here |
nesciamema
Saturday 14th January 2017 20:08 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Would love a future take on this one, probably one of my fav fanfics that I've followed for years! |
| Sunday 15th January 2017 04:27 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Would love a future take on this one, probably one of my fav fanfics that I've followed for years!
I don't tend to revisit the universes I've created, but never say never. Thanks for sticking with it. |
marinka
Saturday 14th January 2017 18:17 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Huge thanks for finishing the story, i love all your works in HP fandom! Are you going write more, but just in the different universe? |
| Saturday 14th January 2017 18:22 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Huge thanks for finishing the story, i love all your works in HP fandom! Are you going write more, but just in the different universe?
Thanks for sticking with it. I have a lot of ideas for new stories, but can't decide which one to go with. Fandom has changed since I started this story and the better, edgier H&G stuff has become harder to find.
Whatever I write, it will be H&G and it will be posted here. |
