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Arnel
Friday 25th May 2018 00:23 | Some Cuts Leave Scars | I see Ginny has ticked another item off her list: confronting Moaning Myrtle's bathroom. It's a good way to end her Hogwarts career, especially with Hermione's support. Thanks for also letting us know that Willow will be joining Ginny at training camp after school ends.
You definitely know how to keep your readers in suspense. Harry's experiences with the giants will definitely make good stories someday, but for now, I think he's grateful to Ron for his constant need to keep a head count! I had to laugh at the end when all the Weasley brothers looked to Harry to put in the last little nudge to get Arthur to join the after party at the Leaky Cauldron. It's just another sign that Harry is already recognized as an honorary Weasley! Well done! | | Thursday 31st May 2018 09:03 | Some Cuts Leave Scars (Author Response) | | Thanks so much for all your encouragement through this story, Arnel! You know I love the Weasleys, and I think becoming one of them is a perfect reward for Harry! | Gioia
Thursday 24th May 2018 23:19 | Some Cuts Leave Scars | | Well, you sure managed to cram a wide variety of exciting and interesting scenes in this chapter! I love how well you handle more subtle or nuanced moments — such as in the opening scene with Ginny — and exciting, emotional powerhouse events — as in the giant battle. Harry's panicked search for Hagrid and Hagrid's emotional reaction afterwards were very striking. Kudos, and thank you! | | Thursday 31st May 2018 09:02 | Some Cuts Leave Scars (Author Response) | | Thanks! I think Hagrid's impact on Harry's life often gets overlooked, so I thought he deserved some attention! |
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