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DukeBrymin
Thursday 14th October 2010 12:42 | Heal The Pain | | I'd be interested in knowing a little more of Ginny's reaction to Harry's taking this job. Although, I'd love it if she joined too, and became Onyx's partner. | GryffindorDragon
Sunday 26th November 2006 16:55 | Heal The Pain | Nice to see Malfoy get some of what he deserves
Nice chapter. I like their induction into the Department of Mysteries.
Poor family . . . and children, too.
I hope they get the Death Eaters.
| DanAngelus
Sunday 2nd July 2006 10:41 | Heal The Pain | | Ooo so they found out what the Death Eaters did after we saw them plan it in the interlude.. This is shaping up to be really good.. I must read on (hopefully wont get anymore distractions this time lol) | Wooster
Tuesday 17th January 2006 20:36 | Heal The Pain | | And the plot keeps thickening. Very chilling. Loved the altercation with Malfoy...(Death Snackers, hah! Go Hermione!) The Department of Mysteries was very neat too...very in character with the reading of the contracts...and I REALLY like Harry's code name. It suits him to a 'T'. | Sib
Wednesday 9th March 2005 10:31 | Heal The Pain | Another good chapter! You build up Harry's anger really well in the
treehouse, feeling his losses. Harry and Ron meeting in the room with
unslept beds was funny. Also loved the "Death Snackers" line.
I also liked how you showed Harry's loyalty to Ron, "And he's never needed it quite this much before. It's always been I
who needed watching, and he who did it. Time to return the favour."
Your description of the Department of Mysteries was particularly well done; a lot of good detail. It felt very realistic.
| SueP
Tuesday 7th September 2004 16:43 | Heal The Pain | | I just found this story after it was recommended on a H/G ship site. I have to say this is one of those times when the story is even better than the raves of the fan who recommended it! I'm looking forward to catching up. Could you please give the site address for the Hearthrug. I tried to find it and couldn't. Thank you very much. |
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