Friday 8th February 2008 14:08 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
Beautiful Use of Words and it's like you've been in that moment before or just read Ginny () like a book because it was great discription and kept to the story of JKR's work as you were kind of filling in a space......a bit JK missed out in the book.
You are a really good poet and have an amzing 'inner-eye' for feelings towards the characters.
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Novera
Sunday 16th July 2006 18:41 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
| NOt bad |
juliet
Friday 14th January 2005 21:26 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
| That was really sweet. Full of promise and dreams. Thanks
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Jner
Monday 20th December 2004 05:42 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
So cute! Well done! I love this Christmas fluff.
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DADAGinny
Thursday 16th December 2004 14:20 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
Yay! and you got it all to rhyme! You have a lot of talent!!
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| Friday 17th December 2004 23:29 | A Mistletoe Discovery (Author Response) |
| Making the all the rhymes is half the fun! Not to mention that a rhyming still lends itself well to fluff since it just makes sense. Thanks for the compliment as well. I find poetry quite fun. Though, some of my poems I think are quite rubbish are said to be good by others, but I suppose that is how writing works. |
Arnel
Thursday 16th December 2004 11:24 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
What a sweet poem and how perfectly Ginny! I'm glad she's not going to literally give up on Harry and that she has the patience of a saint. There's hope for Harry yet!
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| Friday 17th December 2004 23:26 | A Mistletoe Discovery (Author Response) |
| I always think of Ginny as being realistic but still keeping a small seed of hope that Harry will come around. Ginny is my fav. PoV to write from as well. |
thehopefulGinnyPotter
Wednesday 15th December 2004 20:28 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
| That was really ggood, I am impressed! |
| Wednesday 15th December 2004 23:24 | A Mistletoe Discovery (Author Response) |
| Glad you were impressed. I like to surprise people. It is fun. I hope you are impressed whenever next time comes. |
Jedione
Wednesday 15th December 2004 16:40 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
| Very Good! You gotta love fluff! |
| Wednesday 15th December 2004 23:17 | A Mistletoe Discovery (Author Response) |
| Yes, fluff is one of my fav. things. It makes any mood better. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
Pugpal
Wednesday 15th December 2004 15:57 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
| Impressive! Love it! |
| Wednesday 15th December 2004 23:18 | A Mistletoe Discovery (Author Response) |
| Glad to make a good first impression. Hopefully there will eventually be more to improve that impression. |
Cera
Wednesday 15th December 2004 01:44 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
Oh, this was so great! I'm so glad they put poetry up here, and that you were inspired to write something.
It's so charming and sweet, I love it!
The tug I felt
was of the magical sort,
but then I looked up
and heard someone snort.
The mixture of romance and humour here is great. Sounds like typical reaction at the Weasley house.
Great poem! I have a feeling I'll be back here reading this whenever I need a lift.
Sarah
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| Wednesday 15th December 2004 23:16 | A Mistletoe Discovery (Author Response) |
Well when you deal with the Weasleys, I figured that romance and humor would end up going hand in hand at times. Cutsy rhymes do tend to lend themselves to fluff, don't they. I'm glad that this is something that can lighten your mood. ~Megs |
TigerLily8186
Tuesday 14th December 2004 13:17 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
| Glad you like it!! I feel like jumping up and down after seening this up here (and with reviews!!), but I am in my school library, so I can't. |
OHGinnyfan
Tuesday 14th December 2004 09:32 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
nicely done! one little nit picky English teacher thing . . . it should be More than a friend, not more then.
Kelley...thanks for pointing that out -- I totally missed that when I went through it. I did correct it for TigerLily now. |
OHGinnyfan
Tuesday 14th December 2004 09:05 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
Yeah! It's up! This was fun for me to beta. (And I'll correct what Kelleypen pointed out...sorry about that ). This is a really cute Christmas poem, and I love how Ginny ended up under the mistletoe with Harry.
Susan |
Kelleypen
Tuesday 14th December 2004 08:50 | A Mistletoe Discovery |
| nicely done! one little nit picky English teacher thing . . . it should be More than a friend, not more then. |
