majolie
Sunday 9th November 2008 19:08 | The Promise |
| I just love the detail of your stories and the perfect level of sweetness, not too much, but enough to fill me up. |
Patches
Wednesday 24th October 2007 06:49 | The Promise |
| This was very well done. Thanks for writing. This is the ending of the war I was looking for. Thanks for putting it all down. p |
pyromain
Sunday 24th June 2007 13:22 | The Promise |
| I really loved to read it, thanks. |
pottyluvsgin
Thursday 23rd November 2006 20:33 | The Promise |
| What a beautiful story. |
Wooster
Sunday 26th March 2006 20:12 | The Promise |
| Huzzah! Sweet and kind of sad, exactly what I've grown to expect from you! Very much in character and believable though. |
XXXmister-E werepony unit
Sunday 4th September 2005 19:13 | The Promise |
| not bad. not bad at all.i rather liked it.
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levotatingT
Tuesday 31st May 2005 15:52 | The Promise |
OMD, that was so touching. That is amazing how you captured me in the story. I'm completley lost for words. The whole story was equally amazing!!!!
GREAT JOB, keep writing, and Plez write back.
levotatingT |
tante
Monday 24th January 2005 20:32 | The Promise |
Very romantic. Good emotional depth. Great use of that song!
:) Thanks
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SillyGillie
Saturday 16th October 2004 20:55 | The Promise |
Fantastic! I loved this story! It was so good and so original! I loved it!!+ |
pixiellie
Wednesday 25th August 2004 21:14 | The Promise |
Dear Aibhinn,
I just finished your short story The Promise. (Tim recommended your work.) To begin, a very nicely written piece. Excellent grammar and spelling. I also found the style interesting. The way you divided the point of view between both Harry and Ginny was clever, as was the plot device of dual letters. Who hasn’t kept and reread a note that was written by a loved one?
I haven’t read many stories, but the premise felt both unique and realistic. Harry, fighting without his friends was a new idea for me. You made him feel adult to me, this is the first story I have read where that happens. Your imagery of his haunted eyes painted a clear picture for me. Nice. I like that you used Ron as a sympathetic character for Ginny to confide in, as well as Ginny standing her ground; not letting Harry back away from her in his pain.
I would have liked to see their reunion described in a little more detail, such as the scene where Harry proposes at the end. That said, I am glad that you gave your readers a romantic, “fluffy” payoff. There’s almost nothing better than some angst and pain with a sweet, if not happy ending, (because there is a great deal for these two to still discuss) than a satisfying one.
Thank you for taking the time to share your imagination with your readers. It’s very brave of you. I have now explored the site and learned proper review etiquette. (I think.) If you feel I should change my style let me know, or if you could suggest any other Harry/ Ginny fictions to read, I would appreciate it.
Please continue writing and sharing your work. I look forward to reading and reviewing.
Best Regards,
pix’ellie
ellie
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| Wednesday 25th August 2004 21:14 | The Promise (Author Response) |
Thank you for the lovely review, Ellie! Your review etiquette is marvelous--I've nothing to complain about!
As for other fictions to read--BasilM, Musings, Sherylyn, Tarkas, Kokopelli, and of course my own "Heal the Pain" are good places to start. But I think you'll be pleased with just about everything we archive here--we're quite picky about the quality of work we accept, so we've got what I think is the best group of Harry/Ginny stories on the net.
Welcome! |
