Dad
Monday 27th July 2009 12:10 | Enough |
| Well written. Nice little story. |
Aqua Fountain*
Monday 23rd April 2007 22:54 | Enough |
This is really sweet. Smart, to make ROn put his feelings in a letter he thought no-one would read. Stupid of him really, to leave it lying about like that.
Great little story
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Lily Flower
Wednesday 21st February 2007 14:24 | Enough |
I love this story...really I do...
Wow, such a surprise from Ron. I really love the way you portray him. And with Hermione and Ginny being so thoughtful. Wow...I love this story! Great Job!!!
Lilys
P.S. Sorry for the last review on the other story...for some reason my brain and my hands were not working together. lol Great job again! |
ReachfulHP88
Thursday 1st December 2005 18:37 | Enough |
Really excellent! You write so well, it's awesome! I love it when people get Ron "right" in my mind...because he's so often ignored or portrayed as just some chess-playing food-a-holic. Keep writing, I'll keep reading!
-Petey |
paladin
Thursday 1st December 2005 06:36 | Enough |
so,...
of course because I enjoyed OUaD so much, I had/have to check out all
of your other works. I really enjoyed this piece because it was
more related to R/H; I haven't found too many stories that give them
the nervousness and misunderstaning from unspoken feeling that this did.
Yeah, I know... took me a while to find this but then, there are a lot of fics out there. One of these days, I'll get mine up.
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| Friday 2nd December 2005 08:24 | Enough (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm glad I was able to convey the misunderstandings and nervousness. It's exactly what I was going for. Thank you for taking the time to review! |
hewithnoname
Thursday 14th April 2005 16:25 | Enough |
hello there if your other fic's are half as good as this, then you have to submit them. It would be a crime not to.
He-man
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| Friday 15th April 2005 13:30 | Enough (Author Response) |
Thank you so much He-Man! That's very sweet of you. Thanks for the review!! |
tante
Tuesday 15th March 2005 20:46 | Enough |
Oh, (sigh). This is truly beautiful. Where to begin...
First that you made Ron a real, living, breathing, feeling boy. Of course he felt strongly about the events of the ministry. Of course he'd be horribly upset by distance (physical and emotional) from his friends, and Hermione in particular. I think the ministry occasion would have made him just as bold as you portrayed him - to actually put his feelings to paper. The angst is delicious. And I love how you let us imagine what Hermine whispered in his ears instead of making up the dialog. It's romantic and sincerely precious. I'm printing this out. |
| Wednesday 16th March 2005 08:00 | Enough (Author Response) |
| Thank you! So much. I'm glad that you agree with my portrayal of Ron, he's extremely important to me. This was such a great review Tante! You seriously made my day thanks again! |
the toaster
Sunday 23rd January 2005 05:01 | Enough |
*blinks* Wow... you write grief so well. People always seem to overlook Ron and Hermione's grief over Sirius but... oh, you wrote all the stuff other people miss out! Ron was beautifully in character, they all were. *dances* Fantastic! |
| Wednesday 16th March 2005 07:55 | Enough (Author Response) |
| Wow back. Thank you for such a fabulous review! *dances* too. I'm so glad you like it, and that my Ron was in character Thanks again! |
DADAGinny
Wednesday 5th January 2005 13:16 | Enough |
Everything's "fine". Taking a page out of Harry's book, eh?
Dang it. I wanted Ginny to kick Ron's butt for how he treated her in his room.
Nice to see someone besides Harry break down for a change. The others have quite a bit on their plates as well.
Angsty, but good.
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| Wednesday 5th January 2005 13:35 | Enough (Author Response) |
I wanted her to as well, but she did it slowly and painfully and this became three chapters (not really).
I'm glad you thought it was good, thanks! Tis supposed to be angsty, it was written for the summer lovin' teenage angst contest
Thank you so much for reviewing! |
bluejeanphoenix
Wednesday 1st December 2004 01:03 | Enough |
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lovely!! Great story.
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| Sunday 5th December 2004 11:17 | Enough (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm glad you like it |
Maximaleeni
Friday 26th November 2004 16:09 | Enough |
| Oh God Katie. You're as bad as Hev, you keep making me cry!!! That was sooo sweet!!!! |
| Sunday 5th December 2004 11:16 | Enough (Author Response) |
| Thank you Max! |
PenelopeBlack
Friday 2nd July 2004 17:33 | Enough |
| Wow. Very good story. I don't often read Ron/Hermione but this was great. It showed a side of Ron that we all know is there somewhere but we haven't actually seen much of. I also think the dialogue between Ron and Ginny was excellent and very realistic. Spot-on characterizations. The only bad thing - I was left wanting to read the actual letter really badly! |
Pooca
Wednesday 30th June 2004 17:09 | Enough |
| This took my breath away. This was very well written, the emotions were very true. I love the ending, the descriptions and actions are magnificant. This was wonderful. |
| Monday 13th December 2004 14:50 | Enough (Author Response) |
I know, I'm so extremely late in replying... I have no excuse!
Thank you so much for your review Pooca... It floored me when I first read it and keeps flooring me every time I read it Thanks again! |
Lady Chi
Saturday 26th June 2004 22:17 | Enough |
Aw. This piece really stands out in my mind because you made it Ron/Hermione centric. A very good tactic on a primarily H/G website.
Your Ron and Hermione characterization was brilliant, and there's nothing I like more than good characterization. Good luck with the contest!
~Chi |
| Saturday 26th June 2004 22:17 | Enough (Author Response) |
Thank you so much! Characterisations are really important to me, as a reader, so it's something I stress over when I write something. Thanks again.
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Cera
Saturday 26th June 2004 15:01 | Enough |
Loved it!
"If you don't know then I'm not going to tell you!"
I loved Ron's childish attitude there. I also like how you expressed what was going through his mind so well. Unrequited love can be horrible. |
| Saturday 26th June 2004 15:01 | Enough (Author Response) |
| Oh boy can it! Thanks for the review Chica! |
Kelleypen
Saturday 26th June 2004 01:01 | Enough |
| This was very good. It gave me butterflies at all the right places. My only suggestion is that you include the text of the letter from Ron and the letter from Hermione that ticked him off. |
| Saturday 26th June 2004 01:01 | Enough (Author Response) |
| Thank you Kelleypen. I hadn't thought about writing the letters, but now that you mention it... hmmmm. |
WandlessOne
Friday 25th June 2004 17:54 | Enough |
| Nice nice nice Ron POV. Gotta love him. Glad you gave it a happy twist at the end. |
| Friday 25th June 2004 17:54 | Enough (Author Response) |
| Thank you! And I'm glad you liked the happy twist at the end |
