gymnastgal19
Saturday 30th August 2008 22:15 | Under Your Spell |
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pyromain
Friday 29th June 2007 15:35 | Under Your Spell |
| I do hope Harry gets a change with ginny. |
Hoss
Friday 12th January 2007 11:33 | Under Your Spell |
| I have very much enjoyed your story and I'm looking forward to more come. thanks |
neomatrixj2
Friday 27th October 2006 18:25 | Under Your Spell |
| it would be nice if these were all linked in one story but then I wouldnt have noticed it till it was done, its very nice and i cant wait for the next chapter. |
Astrid
Thursday 17th August 2006 21:50 | Under Your Spell |
| I've read all your series in one sitting. I like this universe you have going on. Wouldn't it be easier if all the stories were chapters to a longer fic, though? Just a thought. Good work! |
Rachaol
Monday 3rd July 2006 12:45 | Under Your Spell |
So maybe PS made your's a Story of the Week in hopes of encouraging you to continue? I know I would love to see more.
I agree your characterization of Harry and Ginny is particularly good. Not overblown or angsty but true to canon. I also think you did a pretty good job of bridging from OOTP to a possible Final Battle. It was a bit sketchy, but as it wasn't the focus of this story, well done nevertheless.
I am interested to see how Deborah's memories tie into the story and make a change for Harry. I'd love to a respite for the long-suffering Remus. Thanks for taking Ron and Hermione in fulfilling directions. You've laid a nice foundation, I really hope you get to take it forward.
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GryffindorDragon
Thursday 29th June 2006 09:52 | Under Your Spell |
| Well, this is the last one, huh? A bit disappointing to see Ginny with someone else, though I suppose you plan on getting them together eventually. Nice story, though moving a bit slow. A good read |
critmo
Thursday 29th June 2006 00:25 | Under Your Spell |
| You're taking things along at a leisurely pace, and I'd be interested to know how they continue. However, you haven't updated in two years, which is a bit too leisurely. Any chance that you will take this up again? |
IHateSnakes
Wednesday 28th June 2006 14:06 | Under Your Spell |
| Nice story... why don't you put it together instead of a bunch of individual stories? S. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 27th June 2006 14:47 | Under Your Spell |
| Well then. I wonder what is going to happen between Ginny and Jason. And, why didn't Ginny tell him about the Harry thing? But, it does sound like Patunia was trying to know a little about the wizarding world. |
Wooster
Thursday 25th May 2006 13:09 | Under Your Spell |
| Ah, good. We have a reason her and Jason won't work out. Well done! That job at the Ministry sounds absolutely PERFECT for Harry. I can imagine him enjoying that a lot. |
Gioia
Saturday 24th September 2005 21:46 | Under Your Spell |
I had fun tonight reading through your series. I'm very much
loving the in-character behavior you portray. In particular, I
find Harry's restlessness to be exactly how I'd imagine him to feel
post-war. I'm also particularly struck by how true to canon Ginny
is, too. We didn't see a lot of her in the first five books, so
portraying her as clearly as you have pre-HBP is quite the
accomplishment!
This particular story is listed as a WIP, with an upcoming chapter
"100%" complete but unposted. Is that still the case? Will
there be more to this series?
Regardless, I do thank you for all you've invested in these stories. They're wonderful!
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J.R. Lewis
Sunday 21st August 2005 03:10 | Under Your Spell |
| Just gotta tell you that this is a really nice story. Please keep
writing. I'm curious as to how this whole series of stories moves from
here.
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YelloWitchGrl
Tuesday 31st May 2005 17:21 | Under Your Spell |
Oh the angst... can I just hate her boyfriend and get it over
with? All right, well I'm being silly. Great chapter and I
will be interested to read more.
BUT this chapter had a ton of ????? floating around where they didn't belong. It was a little distracting.
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Laurel Carmer
Monday 30th May 2005 14:34 | Under Your Spell |
All this stories seem more like chapters of one big story. This last one is almost a cliffhanger. <g> I hope you update soon.
I'm really enjoying them.
Laurel |
Kjpzak
Sunday 29th May 2005 20:22 | Under Your Spell |
Oh no! This is not good - you can't leave it like that! Poor Harry - just as he realizes what he needs, Ginny ends up with someone else. But I'm hoping that Jason is a passing fancy - or not a long lived one, especially if Ginny finds out Harry's feelings for her. Judging by her reaction to his letter, I'm thinking she would reciprocate. Looking forward to more... |
wvchemteach
Thursday 4th November 2004 00:10 | Under Your Spell |
Well it looks like both of them are figuring out there own feelings and are blind to the others.
This scenario is always my worst nightmare when reading a Harry/Ginny fic. When one of them is with someone else while the other is in agony.
Personally, I would think that Ginny once she figured out her feelings would try to remove any complications that could distract (example: Jason Warren at this point he good be the greatest person in the world and my opinion of him is somewhere between Malfoy and bubortuber pus; you figure out which is lower) her or potentially come between them.
I also think Harry needs to just risk it all and get it out in the open. Could having her choose Jason over him be any worse than silently suffering from afar. At least then he would know and could start ordering his life accordingly.
I'm going to stick with you for the simple fact that I know that since the story is posted here it has to eventually turn Harry/Ginny. At this point though I'm suffering hopefully for a happier day to come. |
