TangoCharlie
Wednesday 17th September 2008 20:08 | You're Still You |
I like the pace of the story so far, and I really like that while the focus is on Harry, most of the action is centred on Ginny, Ron and Hermione. The second two in particular I'm glad to see are still heavily involved - I'm always disappointed when they seem to disappear from the scene once Ginny is involved.
Can't wait to read more : ) |
| Wednesday 17th September 2008 23:17 | You're Still You (Author Response) |
I had a very smart beta when I started writing this story. The advice she gave me was that when there are multiple characters in a room, they all must interact. I tried to remember that when I wrote the scenes with Ginny, Ron and Hermione.
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thanks for your review. |
TangoCharlie
Wednesday 17th September 2008 20:07 | You're Still You |
I like the pace of the story so far, and I really like that while the focus is on Harry, most of the action is centred on Ginny, Ro and Hermione. The second two in particular I'm glad to see are still heavily involved - I'm always disappointed when they seem to disappear from the scene once Ginny is involved.
Can't wait to read more : ) |
| Wednesday 17th September 2008 23:19 | You're Still You (Author Response) |
Ron and Hermione are just as important to the development of the story and how Harry sees the world as Ginny, so they need their share of the limelight, so to speak.
I'm enjoying your reviews.
~Arnel |
The Boss
Sunday 1st July 2007 03:00 | You're Still You |
Tisk tisk, Ron and Ginny learning off Fred and George. Well good on Fred and George for 'teaching' them a few tricks of the trade.
The Boss |
| Sunday 1st July 2007 06:25 | You're Still You (Author Response) |
| Ron and Ginny have five older examples in their brothers and Fred and George are the most pestilential of the lot, so naturally Ron and Ginny will follow in their footsteps. Thanks for the review and the thumbs-up. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 27th November 2006 18:24 | You're Still You |
| The poor thing...Harry. And very good chapter. |
sonicdale
Tuesday 22nd March 2005 08:18 | You're Still You |
| Ahh Haa! Ginny's starting to take some initative. I hope she falls for Harry before Colin falls for her. |
p0tterfan
Wednesday 1st December 2004 00:19 | You're Still You |
| Really caring Ginny ... nice to see.
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| Thursday 2nd December 2004 16:00 | You're Still You (Author Response) |
| This is a side of Ginny I hope we get to see more of in canon. I'm glad you like how I'm writing her. |
