dghh6
Wednesday 30th April 2014 11:24 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| I love your two stories! This one and the curse of the damned are basically the only reason I revisit this site! |
Hihavaniceda
Saturday 4th October 2008 03:52 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| GREAT START! I really really did love it ! |
ROGUE_LMW
Wednesday 1st October 2008 13:21 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| Absolutely enjoyed your story. I am currently reading the Cursed of the Damned. Keep up the good work. |
Hihavaniceda
Tuesday 30th September 2008 06:20 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
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majolie
Sunday 27th July 2008 19:48 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| I've been intending to read this for ages. I've heard fabulous things about it. So far, I am full of longing to go give Harry a big hug and protect him from everything. Great writing! |
ILikeToRead2
Wednesday 28th November 2007 08:55 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
Wow! I've read a few stories from this web site and I must admit, this is a very powerful story indeed. The emotions that it invoked were very intense and I found myself on the edge of my seat with a box of tissues in hand.
Thank you so much for putting so much energy and emotion into a truly fabulous story!
Sincerely,
Ral
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lupinspup
Monday 8th October 2007 11:48 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| I've had the title of this story written down with intentions to read it since forever and I've finally found a few moments (hours) to do so. And I must say.. Bravo! and SQUEE!!!! sorry. couldn\'t help it. Very well written and I'm off to read the 7th year one now. |
afpease
Thursday 4th October 2007 19:07 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
Very nice for your first fanfic!
You could have left off the first three paragraphs - it seems a little forced - but the whole "Oh poor Harry, he needs to push away all his friends to keep them safe" thing seems very authentic.
Thanks for your hard work and originality! |
afpease
Thursday 4th October 2007 19:06 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
Very nice for your first fanfic!
You could have left off the first three paragraphs - it seems a little forced - but the whole "Oh poor Harry, he needs to push away all his friends to keep them safe" thing seems very authentic.
Thanks for your hard work and originality! |
Bella_Black
Friday 14th September 2007 06:21 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
I really like all your stories but have one question- are you intending to write it in a 'British' style? I guess you are because you use terms such as snogging and decking, etc. But there are some American phrases in your work that seem really out of place, and disrupt the story. Things like- hamburger and crisps, in England crisps come in bags and are a snack, we would say hamburger and chips or hamburger and fries, this is an example of a phrase that really seems out of place in what is supposed to be a British story. Others that I have noticed in your work- jack 0'lanterns, saying that someone's stomach did a complete 180, and saying that someone had "written him every week"- in England you would never leave out the 'to', it makes no sense. These Americanisms can be understood by English people. obviously, but jar the story when it's about English kids in a Scottish school.
That is my only complaint, other than that I love the stories- I'm getting a bit obsessed actually and may have to print them out so I don't have to be on the computer to read them. Thank you for taking so much time to write them.
PS I never really liked Harry that much before, but after reading the power of emotion I love him! I think you write about him better than Rowling does. |
harry_ginnyfan
Thursday 23rd August 2007 19:24 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| I wanted to tell you I really liked this story. Well done! I hope you will write more soon! Cheers! |
harry_ginnyfan
Friday 17th August 2007 10:04 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| I really liked this story! Excellant job! Cheers! |
alli
Wednesday 15th August 2007 04:47 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
Hi, I'm new to this but I just wanted to drop you a line to tell you how much I am enjoying reading your work. I found The Seventh Horcrux through the Amazon forum, and I thought it was wonderful! Now i'm half way through The Power of Emotion, and I can't put it down (at least that's how I would feel if this were a book nd not my laptop!) You have a wonderful talent ...are you sure you're not JKR indisguise?
Once again, thankyou!
Alli (36 year old mum from England) |
Kenshin_x56
Sunday 3rd June 2007 22:30 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
Another great story.
As I said a couple weeks ago I started with seven horcrux which I gave ten out of ten to. This was an earlier story and while is very good I still think the seven horcrux was better, so only nine out of ten for this.
Mind you I did read both this and the curse non-stop as I was unable to put them down.
I greatly enjoyed your style and am wondering if you have ever published an works under your name; I would be interested in reading them.
Thanks again for a great read |
Narumi
Thursday 19th April 2007 18:29 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| Such a solemn, harsh picture! Very realistic though, you make Harry's grieving real, instead of glossing over it like many authors tend to do. |
Patches
Tuesday 27th February 2007 04:59 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| This is a very sad, depressed Harry. Someone better do something or he will snap! Thanks for writing. p |
DaFalcon
Saturday 5th August 2006 19:53 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
Melinda, I decided to finally give your other stories a go. I'm already a huge fan of TSH, and so I thought I would read PoE while I wait on the updates to your other chapters.
Great start to Harry's sixth year. I can't believe this was your first try at fanfiction. You have to be pulling our legs. Harry's so sad here. I hope he soon come out of his misery and move on with what needs to be done. Poor dear. |
ImmortalPhoenix
Sunday 9th July 2006 15:31 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
AWW so sad! I really liked this chapter. I hope I will continue to like the story and GREAT job especilly since it was your first attempt at a fanfiction.
Kortnee |
DanAngelus
Wednesday 5th July 2006 11:16 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
Ok so now finally starting on this one.. I like it so far. This is one of the first full length pre-HBP, post OotP fics I've read and It's good so far. You've really captured Harrys misery and guilt in the way he's doing things and acting.. for a first fan fic this is very good so far..
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daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 13th June 2006 14:15 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| Poor Harry. You make him soud like when Sirius broke out of prison. Skiny, and gaunt looking, with the clothes he wears looking 5 sizes to big. He needs something or someone to chear him up! |
00mina00
Friday 20th May 2005 15:09 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| Just one word: Wow!!!! It's really amazing! Good job!!!! |
Ham
Wednesday 9th March 2005 08:13 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
Great first chapter. Your fic is on the favourites list of Joe so i knew that it had to be good. Can't wait to read more
Hamza
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Mariposa
Saturday 1st January 2005 14:38 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
Your descriptions of everything going through Harry's mind are just riviting!
I cried at the end of this chapter this is exactly how I think Harry would react after the end of OotP. And how everyone else reacts also.
I don't know about the Dursleys though, I guess we'll find out soon how that goes. |
Malfidus
Friday 24th December 2004 08:31 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
Wow, what a start to a story . . . I can feel Harry's pain. Wonderfully
written and I will DEFINITELY be sticking this story through to the
end, especially if the quality is anywhere NEAR that of this chapter. :D
Well done!
Malfidus
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wvchemteach
Friday 22nd October 2004 22:31 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| Good start to the story but I'm not entirely sure that Harry is going to be so devastated over the summer by Sirius death. I think he will be grieving, but I also think he was starting to heal before the end of OOTP. I do think, however, that he will either be dwelling upon the prophecy or he will be acting in denial concerning it and this will be torturing him. All in all however a most excellent begining. |
parakletos
Tuesday 3rd August 2004 08:54 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| Great to see you on Phoenix song. If anyones reading this for the first time you're going to love it. |
| Tuesday 3rd August 2004 08:54 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the vote of confidence but I'm not sure if there are any newbies here, lol. |
Rosina Ferguson
Monday 2nd August 2004 13:58 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
Congrats on getting accepted as a writer on Phoenix Song. Your story is superb and I look forward to re-reading it on this excellent site.
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| Monday 2nd August 2004 13:58 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion (Author Response) |
| Thank you! You guys are so awesome, all my old faithfuls back for a second run! Let me know if you notice the differences! |
Bart
Monday 2nd August 2004 08:00 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
| You're posting here at last? About time! Could be about time to re-read this one |
| Monday 2nd August 2004 08:00 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the push! Yep, here we go. Let me know if you notice the changes. I've added quite a bit to the next chapter. |
Katieay
Monday 2nd August 2004 04:13 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion |
YAY!! You posted here! I think you should get hundreds of reviews... this is by far one of my favourite stories, but you knew that already
Katie |
| Monday 2nd August 2004 04:13 | Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion (Author Response) |
| Thanks Katieay, yep, finally listened to you! Gulp! |
