A nice one. I find myself admiring your talent. In spite of having a critical eye for fanfiction, I couldn't find anything wrong with the ficlet. It's humorous, warm and well-written. Harry and Ginny are in-character, in my opinion, and their feelings seem very natural.

As an afterthought, if one were trying to find fault with the story, one could point out that in the story Voldemort, who appears to be constantly on Harry's mind, is never mentioned. Someone other, in a mood less captious, would note that at the moment Harry was too preoccupied with love to worry about the Dark Lord, and that the fic is too short to cover all problems. (I've no idea why I added this bit, but it seems a shame to delete it now.)

Anyway, I wish your friend Tari a happy birthday (I know I'm a bit late...) and I wish you had a lot of friends with a lot of birthdays to present stories to.

~Sincerely,
LoonyPhoenix

Thanks so much for the review. It means a lot to me. And about Voldemort not being present: you nailed it. It was a short fic, not at all meant to be focused on anything but awkwardness and twitterpation (sp-?). All the same, I enjoyed writing it and thought that Harry needed a bit of a break.

Thanks again!

J

Thanks for the review!  It does wonders, let me tell you. I take all reviews to heart, so thanks for taking the time to tell me what you thought of it.

Yay!

J

Thanks for the review, and you may have read it before on siye. It's been posted there for a long time. Thanks again for your time. I'm glad you liked it!

J

Thanks for the review. So good to hear from you. I'm glad you liked it. You know, my birthday is coming up....

cheers,

J

Wonderful! Nervous Harry is just too cute.  I loved the down-to-earth feeling of this.  As much as I enjoy fluff, too much is just as painful as a cavity!  Your ending was entirely too original and clever, which, naturally, is fabulous!  This story left me happy and warm inside, so yay!  Great job!

Delani 

Oh, so sweet of you. Thanks for the review! It's made my day; seriously. I'm glad I could make you smile.

J

Hum. Reminiscent of Love Actually... excellently done. Harry's such a sweet, is he not?

I haven't seen the movie, I'll have to check it out. Thanks for the review!

J

Poor Ginny. :-)

Excellent ending.

Hmm...maybe. I'll certainly consider it. Harry being embarrassed...yes, that sounds like great fun.

Yay! I'm glad that you liked it! Fluff is always fun to read and to write.

What a brilliant birthday present! I hope she enjoyed it as much as we are doing.

What exquisite and toe-curling observations of 'dropping yourself in it' and getting caught. A well written Ginny and Harry help it along effortlessly. Did this piece come easily? It certainly gives that impression.

Thanks for sharing. I can see I'll read it again and again.

Thank so, so much for the review. This story did come pretty easily (I wrote it in an hour) but it had actually ended differently. I'm glad I took this route, though. Ginny is great. I'm just sorry that I tortured her so. Ok, so I'm not really sorry. I'll probably doing it again soon. Thanks again!

LOL!  This was wonderful!  What a great way to start my day.  Fluff in the morning, what more can I ask?

I loved Harry's nervousness asking her, and Ginny being the daft one for a change.  Nice work, I really enjoyed it.

So cute!  I loved your Harry, he was so sweet and shy. 

Great characterization of Ginny, too.  She really jumps off the page...err, screen for me.

Thanks! I LOVE writing Ginny. She pretty much just tells me where to go. And Harry, he'll always be a shy and uncertain boy in my mind.

  and  *sigh* 

I'm grinning from ear to ear and remembering how terrifying it was to be from an all-girls' school and having to ask a boy out for the very first time if I wanted a date for a dance.  I really feel for Harry and his nervousness.  I'm glad he finally found his courage to ask Ginny out, though.  You've captured his uncertainty brilliantly as well as his humble helpfulness, too.  As for Ginny, her thoughts and embarrassment are priceless.  This is one story I'm going to come back to over and over.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

  and   ... Woo Hoo!   

O goodness, how adorably cute. I loved it! Keep up the fluff and the excellent writing.

~thehopefulGinnyPotter

Thanks for the review...it was nice to write some fluff for a change. And thanks for the nice complement!

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. You've made my day. Thanks!

Ha! You've made me smile, for that I thank you. Thanks for taking the time to review. Yay!

Glad you liked it...can't say that there is going to be a sequel, but the more I think about, the more I'd like to start one. I had SO much fun writing this. Hmmm...we'll see.