Aimee Granger
Wednesday 31st August 2005 08:27 | The Reason |
this is really good! |
| Wednesday 31st August 2005 12:53 | The Reason (Author Response) |
Thanks so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it
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critmo
Monday 9th May 2005 02:06 | The Reason |
| Not unlikely, but a bit rough. I can see Harry being brutal, but his brutality is a bit more sophisticated. Also he should know from the year before that G had her share of pain. Considering the way G reacted in OotP, she's unusually defensive here. |
| Monday 9th May 2005 07:48 | The Reason (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I agree that Harry should
know better, but he had forgotten that Ginny had been possessed by
Voldemort. It seems that the more I write the more it seems like the
characters take over! Ha! Anyway, Ginny is more defensive in my story
because Harry and Ron treat her as the third wheel all the time. It
hurts Ginny to be forgotten about, and one of the them is her
brother! This story is an exploration of Ginny coming into her
own. It will all come together down the line. Thanks again!
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levotatingT
Friday 15th April 2005 16:49 | The Reason |
That was really good!!!!! I saw that you were going to wrwite more plez hurry! that was really good! thats all my mind can process right now. You did great, I really enjoyed it, write back!
levotatingT |
| Friday 15th April 2005 16:55 | The Reason (Author Response) |
| I am so glad you liked this chapter, your praise makes me !
My second chapter is in the hands of my oh so talented beta
ninkenate. She is a godess among mortals! She works
tirelessly on correcting my horrible grammer and some spelling
mistakes. So hopefully the chapter will be up soon. Thanks
so much for reviewing!
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sonicdale
Wednesday 13th April 2005 23:36 | The Reason |
ooo. This has started well. er, well, at least the angst is here in full force, and we've started the school year without Harry miraculously 'resolving' his problems. Good idea.
Waiting for more.... |
| Thursday 14th April 2005 21:33 | The Reason (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I appreciate your comments. Nothing gets solved
quickly, Harry needs to get past some things in the coming year.
Thanks for reviewing!
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mary-v
Monday 11th April 2005 06:46 | The Reason |
I don;t know what to say. I got so mad at Harry! How could he treat ginny like that? But I can tell he fewlt guilty- which sort of redeemed him- but still... he needs to apologize. On to other matters- I absolutely love your characterization of ginny. I imagine how hard it is for her to be treated like that, especially after the nightnmare she just experienced. Harry really is a selfish brat!
Ah well, I hope that you update really soon!
~Maria~
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| Monday 11th April 2005 13:10 | The Reason (Author Response) |
Thanks so much for your review! There will be more on the way
soon! Harry's going through a hard time, but he will be put in
his place, don't worry! Heh heh... Ginny seemed to be very easy to write, she's a fighter! Thanks again!
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p0tterfan
Sunday 10th April 2005 20:48 | The Reason |
| Well Harry really had an extreme case of foot in mouth disease here. Hopefully the story is not too angsty ....
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| Sunday 10th April 2005 21:50 | The Reason (Author Response) |
I agree with you! He really needs someone to knock some sense into him!
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Delylah
Sunday 10th April 2005 18:45 | The Reason |
| Oooh, angsty. My favorite kind of fic. I look forward to reading more :)
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| Sunday 10th April 2005 21:51 | The Reason (Author Response) |
| There will be plenty of angst! Maybe a bit of fluff too!
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Paige2310
Sunday 10th April 2005 17:40 | The Reason |
| I really like this story so far! Please add another chapter soon! |
| Sunday 10th April 2005 21:52 | The Reason (Author Response) |
| The next chapter is with my wonderful beta ninkenate, hopefully we will have it all ironed out soon!
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pepperdawg
Saturday 9th April 2005 14:03 | The Reason |
| buuuuuuuuuurrrnnnnnnnn lol.
Harry did seem a bit out of cannon character, he's a prat but not
a....um.... how do i say this without being blocked? he's not cruel.
and I know he's hurting and everything but it still seems a little out
of character. But i do like how you've got them all at each other. Moody!Harry probably will be all angry at the world and everything. Cant wait for more!
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| Saturday 9th April 2005 16:43 | The Reason (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reveiwing! I know Harry seems to be ooc, but there are
reasons for this. He needs to deal with his demons.
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Treck
Saturday 9th April 2005 13:35 | The Reason |
Man oh man... I see a redhead that needs to tie up a green eyed lion
and snog him into submission before he ends up as a bed mate to
Lockheart.
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| Saturday 9th April 2005 16:45 | The Reason (Author Response) |
| Ha ha! Thanks for reviewing. No snogging yet, though. Harry needs to do a lot of apologizing first!
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ChaoticK
Saturday 9th April 2005 10:54 | The Reason |
Excellent start. Will enjoy seeing where you go from here. It's nice
that it's not 'Eyes meeting across a crowded room - POW - They're in
love...' There's a real story developing here and both characters are
going to have to work towards... POW - They're in love! Grin.
One grammar critique. You need a comma to separate an interjection - in this case the person's name:
"What do you want[,] Ginny?" Harry ground out.
My Favorite Grammar Help Web site: http://webster.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
Looking forward to more! Karen (aka ChaoticK)
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| Saturday 9th April 2005 11:55 | The Reason (Author Response) |
| Thanks alot for your review. I agree with you. I don't
think that Harry and Ginny will automatically fall into each others
arms. Harry ignored her for too long and Ginny has realized that
he's not just the Boy Who Lived to her. I will have fun with
this!
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pppgr7
Saturday 9th April 2005 10:13 | The Reason |
Hello my darling sister!!!Once again I have to say you have the best story!!!Keep 'em coming.You know how much I love reading your story! |
| Saturday 9th April 2005 10:27 | The Reason (Author Response) |
| You make me Thanks sis!
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Melindaleo
Saturday 9th April 2005 07:37 | The Reason |
You know, I read this and decided not to review, but it stayed with me, so I came back. I really liked the start, and I like your Ginny very much. It was Harry where I had a problem. Canon!Harry was frustrated and did lash out during OotP, but it was never cruelly. He doesn't usually 'say' anything about what he's been through, although the thougths may be in his head.
I thought he was very OOC. He's hurting, and I think he will be...but I've never seen him intentionally try to hurt someone else, and I've never seen him even make a vague reference to Ginny's crush. So...I had a bit of a problem with this portrayal. |
| Saturday 9th April 2005 09:41 | The Reason (Author Response) |
You know, I read this and decided not to review, but it
stayed with me, so I came back. I really liked the start, and I
like your Ginny very much. It was Harry where I had a
problem. Canon!Harry was frustrated and did lash out during OotP,
but it was never cruelly. He doesn't usually 'say' anything about
what he's been through, although the thougths may be in his head. I
thought he was very OOC. He's hurting, and I think he will
be...but I've never seen him intentionally try to hurt someone else,
and I've never seen him even make a vague reference to Ginny's
crush. So...I had a bit of a problem with this portrayal.
I
appreciate your review. Harry has been through a lot and feels
that he is alone in everything that happens. His worries are
increasing thanks to the prophecy, and the impending war. I promise all
will be explained as the story progresses.
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juliet
Saturday 9th April 2005 03:57 | The Reason |
I wonder if a touch of Voldermort was coming through then, or was Harry
just being a typical prat. It seemed abit out of character for
him to be that nasty to Ginny, and also so honest. " You
want to know my thoughts and feelings? I don't even tell Ron and
Hermoine, my best friends."
If any romance is to be had in this story, I can't imagine it happening
any time soon - Harry is certainly in the dog's house now!
Look forward to the next chapter.
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| Saturday 9th April 2005 09:46 | The Reason (Author Response) |
I wonder if a touch of Voldermort was coming through then,
or was Harry just being a typical prat. It seemed abit out of
character for him to be that nasty to Ginny, and also so honest.
" You want to know my thoughts and feelings? I don't even
tell Ron and Hermoine, my best friends."
If any romance is to
be had in this story, I can't imagine it happening any time soon -
Harry is certainly in the dog's house now!
Look forward to the next chapter.
Thank you for reviewing! I promise that all will be explained in
the coming chapters! As for a bit of Voldie, well....who
knows. He may make an appearance later!
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x_Rose_x
Saturday 9th April 2005 03:26 | The Reason |
| please tell me that wasn't a one shot!! I love the story and it was
brilliant but please tell me you are not going to end the whole story
like that? it's so depressing! I was nearly crying!!!! keep up the
great work!
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| Saturday 9th April 2005 09:48 | The Reason (Author Response) |
please tell me that wasn't a one shot!! I love the story
and it was brilliant but please tell me you are not going to end the
whole story like that? it's so depressing! I was nearly crying!!!! keep
up the great work! I am happy to tell you that it will not be a one shot! There is lots more to come.
Ginny will not let Harry get off that easily. Our heroine was
shaken, but not down for the count. I really appreciate your
review!
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Polychrome
Friday 8th April 2005 23:38 | The Reason |
This chapter can be summed up in one word:
Ouch. |
| Saturday 9th April 2005 09:51 | The Reason (Author Response) |
| Hey! I figured how to finally reply! Sorry. Thanks
for reviewing! There's a bit more ouch in the future too.
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