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Wednesday 2nd August 2006 20:17 | There and Back Again Lane | | Wow. Okay. Sounds good. Harry loses his memory and still gets Ginny and Hedwig. | PHsname
Tuesday 9th August 2005 23:38 | There and Back Again Lane | hmm...normally i absolutely despise first-person narrative stories, and get frustrated from reading them about 3 minutes in, but this one is actually pretty good, and im enjoying it. i hope u finish working on it soon, cause i think im gonna be through the rest of the story before i go to sleep tonite...:P
anyhow, it seems a bit odd, the way u introduced ginny into this...from your description, it sounded like he would be engaged to a muggle only to have ginny come back or something causing an awkward triangle...haha.
that's just me nitpicking. anyway, awesome first chapter!! | MrRobertsIII
Friday 27th May 2005 08:44 | There and Back Again Lane | | I really like the first half. I thought that you brought Ginny in a bit fast. I'd like to have learned more about his Muggle life. | | Monday 11th July 2005 01:23 | There and Back Again Lane (Author Response) | | My apologies for failing to respond until now. Thank you very much for your kind review, and I hope you have kept reading. |
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