DaniKay
Sunday 29th March 2009 18:34 | Lee Jordan: Tour Guide |
Haha nicely done! Double date with Percy and Penelope, perfect!
Loved the midnight match! Maybe Lee can do some announcing *grins*
I agree! Living in denial about the twins is much better than knowing half the fun is forever gone.
Molly-"How're you feeling Georgie?" George-"Holy. Holey, get it Fred?"
Or something like that is how it goes haha.
Just so you know, of all the stories I've ever reviewed, you're the only author who's taken the time to reply back. For which I'm extremely grateful. I like to know if what I'm saying makes any difference at all next to all the other reviews. So, thanks to you
And I really love the way you've written your stories. So (you have no idea how I'll desribe it...) amazing!!! ^_^
DaniKay
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| Monday 30th March 2009 10:32 | Lee Jordan: Tour Guide (Author Response) |
| I can't believe other authors don't respond to reviews! That's just rude. I love my reviewers. In this story I tried to include as many reviewer names as I could as I was writing it. I even stuck my own name in at the end. You'll see it when you get to it. |
Muggle Witch
Saturday 14th May 2005 14:29 | Lee Jordan: Tour Guide |
| I can just picture George and Percy So cute! Good to see Lee calling a match agian.
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Ima Quidditch Fan
Thursday 12th May 2005 09:20 | Lee Jordan: Tour Guide |
| I love Hero!Lee... and he was so humble about it. Very fitting. I just love his character. |
| Thursday 12th May 2005 13:53 | Lee Jordan: Tour Guide (Author Response) |
| Yes - I wanted to show a bit of the Gryffindor in Lee - but not make a big deal out of it. And I wanted it to be about his friendship with F&G as well. Since F&G are so self-sufficient in a lot of ways - this seemed like a logical scenario. Thanks for reading! I always appreciate it! |
Kelleypen
Thursday 12th May 2005 08:07 | Lee Jordan: Tour Guide |
| This is looking promising, for everyone concerned. Lee is getting happier. I hope a new job is in the works too. |
| Thursday 12th May 2005 12:14 | Lee Jordan: Tour Guide (Author Response) |
| Yes - it's a dirty job - but a challenge for Lee. Plus he found George a girl - what are friends for? LOL. |
sonicdale
Thursday 12th May 2005 06:56 | Lee Jordan: Tour Guide |
Baby clothes and shoes.
My wife wistfully gazes at those sections when we go to the store.
I keep reminding her that our daughter has outgrown most of the baby stuff. And we don't need any more shoes in the house.
Lee will get an earful and eyeful when he gets married. I'm lucky - I had two younger sisters and got to see the 'benefits' of womanhood early on - the shoes, the clothes, babies, dating, all that. I'm no expert, but at least you have Lee noticing things and saying most of the right things at the right time. And I agree with him - labor stories at the dinner table are best kept away from the table, especially if you aren't married to the woman talking about it. Blech. I watched 3 Csections, and I'm okay with most stories - but Lee's a single bloke, and that's funny that you've picked up on that attitude.
Good work all around. This story rocks. Good Job. |
| Thursday 12th May 2005 12:10 | Lee Jordan: Tour Guide (Author Response) |
I do love those Venus/Mars moments! Viva la difference! I'm glad that Lee's thoughts and reactions rang true. It's good to know when you're trying to write from a male point of view.
Ah - baby clothes - they are so much fun! It's hard to explain! Thanks for reading!
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wvchemteach
Thursday 12th May 2005 06:01 | Lee Jordan: Tour Guide |
Nice bit of action. It is nice that Harry's DA lessons paid off for Laura and George isn't it. I can see this as the connection that brings Amy back into Lee's life again. I'm curious as to what she'll make of our Mr. Jordan after his journey of self discovery?
I'm curious as to whether Holly is overworked, sick, or if Lee and Angelina are over-reacting? Nice way to work Percy and Penelope into the story. I just love how you've managed to drop bits and pieces of other characters' tales into this one.
I truly hope that you never abandon this Magic Within, Magic Without setting even once it becomes AU in July. And PS.net needs a Lee emoticon. |
| Thursday 12th May 2005 12:07 | Lee Jordan: Tour Guide (Author Response) |
Ha - a Lee emoticon - that's funny since there just aren't any Lee stories - not even at ff.net!
It's fun to think about how there is no way Fred and George could avoid their brother if they are all living in magical London. There are just too many places where their lives would overlap. I enjoyed dreaming up that scenario!
Holly is having her own moments of discovery about what kind of work she is suited for - but she's not one to let on . . . Thanks for reading! |
