Bookworm
Saturday 12th August 2006 18:35 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
I read throughall of the reviews, and I agree with WandWavingWannaBe! It would be great to read another part with the boys reading the magazine! Maybe Parv, Lav, and Hermione could've answered the quiz questions and left it in the common room or something of that sort...it's just a thought. Again great story!
Bookworm |
Bookworm
Saturday 12th August 2006 18:26 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
'They followed the instructions, looking as though they were squirming around rather than exercising.'
That was absolutely hilarious!!! I couldn't stop laughing! Good story... the part about giving the Midol advertisement to Hermione was great! |
sallyemily
Tuesday 7th February 2006 23:20 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
| heres your review!! well i dnt write fanfiction but ive just moved to new zealand from the uk and so i pretty much read it everyday!! ive found lately that ive read everything so i scan the authours list on evenings to look for interseting blurbs!! now im interested in the whole lav 'n' parv thing and thought that this story was very good!! it stood out form others!! well writtten aswell!! god dont we all wish hermione would just GET ON with it eh!!! thanx for my 10 mins of enjoyment, brill fic, emilyxx |
XXXmister-E werepony unit
Wednesday 1st February 2006 17:13 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
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wandwavingwannabe
Sunday 10th July 2005 00:46 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
I liked this story. It goes to show that Muggles can teach something to Witches and Wizzards alike. Maybe someone should give a copy of it to Ron or Harry so they can actually get a clue....LOL!!!!! (maybe you should write an outtake on one of them picking it up because Lav or Parv might have left it out by mistake then have a discussion with the other about it. You'd do great with it!!!)
WandWavingWannaBe |
levotatingT
Wednesday 15th June 2005 19:07 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
This is really cute. I love how you put Britney Spears in there. I think you should write more.
great job, keep writing ,and Plez write back
levotatingT |
| Thursday 16th June 2005 06:00 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
Lulabelle
Saturday 11th June 2005 16:58 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
| I definitely liked it. It was rather cute. I think you did an excellent job on getting some Lavender/Parvati insight into the drama that is Ron & Hermione. I saw in your author's note that you are writing another story. Where could I find it? Please let me know. I think I'd be interested in reading it! |
| Monday 14th August 2006 09:22 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! (Author Response) |
| Oh, I've just seen this! I'm so sorry to not have answered it sooner! My other stories can be found at: www.fanfiction.com/~MarielleAine . I haven't updated it in a long time and the story referenced in the author notes of this story is not yet finished. There is not a ton of Harry Potter work, but what there is of it isn't very good, I'm afraid. At least in my own self criticizing opinion. |
Kori24601
Wednesday 8th June 2005 21:07 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
| Hey, I liked this! It was really cute and it was nice seeing Lavender and Parvati's perspecitives. I love the thought that everyone BUT Hermione and Ron know that Hermione and Ron love each other. It cracks me up. My two friends are excatly like that. :-D Good story. Two thumbs way up! |
Astrid
Wednesday 8th June 2005 12:35 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
Seventeen is the sort of magazine those girls would read. Cute, fluffy, pointless- but a fun read.
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DADAGinny
Wednesday 8th June 2005 10:00 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
I liked that -- but I think it was too short. I'd like to see
another chapter that had Hermione stealing out of bed and reading that
last part in Seventeen to see what it had to say. Maybe taking
some of the advice. Hmm....
Good Job!!
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tonks442
Wednesday 8th June 2005 01:20 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
| Very cute! :)
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sonicdale
Tuesday 7th June 2005 11:54 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
Interesting - but you never said what the wizard equivalent to Midol was...
Good work.! |
critmo
Tuesday 7th June 2005 05:41 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
| Well, the interesting point, of course, is: what will come of Hermione's pondering? |
h2o
Tuesday 7th June 2005 01:45 | Oh, to Be Seventeen! |
Parvati cleared her throat. "It says, ‘Is there one guy at school you’ve been in love with forever—but you never had the nerve to tell him? This is one girl’s story.’"
Haha, ruddy brilliant! I do hope you continue with this one, maybe even to add some H/G after the R/Hr |
