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Reviews For Pumpkins by Ajarntham

SnorkackCatcher
Monday 8th January 2007 17:42
Pumpkins
Great fun, and a nice companion piece to the long F&B story.
Pineapple Queen
Monday 27th June 2005 21:22
Pumpkins
*giggle* I couldn't stop laughing at this. =) My family was looking at me like I was nuts. Very, very amusing.
Delani
Thursday 23rd June 2005 19:19
Pumpkins

"it simply never occurs to him how out of character it would be for his mother to expend so many tears of pity on his being made, literally, to eat his vegetables. "

 

Ahh, and then the legume bit.  Learned some new facts there, actually!  Oh my, how sitcom-worthy this is!  I could never imagine one being able to create the "unspoken misunderstood understanding" in writing, but, by Jove, I think you've done it!        I abso-ruddy-lutely LOVE this series, and would pay by the millions (of of course) to have it continue!  Well done, Old Bean!

 

Delani

Sunday 26th June 2005 21:42Pumpkins (Author Response)
Thank you, thank you! As for the legumes, I think the interviewer may have been taking advantage of Anthony's pedantic Ravenclaw reflexes and winding him up a bit, what do you think? :-)
SillyGillie
Wednesday 22nd June 2005 21:15
Pumpkins
Loved all your stories, hilariously funny and yet amazingly vivid at some points. Awesome job! Loved it!
LisaQT3
Wednesday 22nd June 2005 14:30
Pumpkins

Nice little add-on to your finished series. I greatly enjoyed this and am a little jealous of your ability to come up with genius Weasley exploits. I certainly am not that creative! Very funny.

hjdevnull
Wednesday 22nd June 2005 08:29
Pumpkins
Oh, this is awesome. Please, please -- are we getting more Anthony interviews? This is awesome, even the argument about the fruit vs. vegetable.
ravenclawchaser66
Tuesday 21st June 2005 16:08
Pumpkins
Great job with this, and the Flourish and Blotts Hour. They're both funny and well written. However, they're also both making me insanely curious about the whole siege. It sounds like you've got the outlines for a great story. Are we actually going to get to read it? Please?
Sunday 26th June 2005 21:23Pumpkins (Author Response)
Thanks very much! Yes, there's a seventh-year story awaiting, after we've all had time to digest HBP. Glad you enjoyed these pieces!
MrRobertsIII
Tuesday 21st June 2005 07:56
Pumpkins

Technically, are they vegetables? Aren’t they legumes?
-I loved how they'd get sidetracked.

Ron isn’t at all certain that Molly’s going to be held back by that sort of niggling literalism
-Made me laugh.  I can just see Molly reading through the plagues, trying to determine which would be most appropriate.

this Manischewitz of pumpkins
-I can feel my teeth rotting just thinking about it.  Nice touch.

Hope you continue on with these F&B interviews.

Sunday 26th June 2005 20:40Pumpkins (Author Response)
Thanks very much! The 'interview' was originally an epilogue to a standard third-person fic, but it's a fun format and the response has been so generous I do think I'll play with it some more.
Waywren Truesong
Tuesday 21st June 2005 07:16
Pumpkins
*dies laughing*

At the breakfast table, no less, which is gonna take some explaining....
critmo
Tuesday 21st June 2005 01:44
Pumpkins
Hilarious! Excellent!
arios
Monday 20th June 2005 23:26
Pumpkins
LOL, that was a fun story!
p0tterfan
Monday 20th June 2005 21:14
Pumpkins
Good one :)

The conversation was quite well done.
Lorelei Lynn
Monday 20th June 2005 17:24
Pumpkins

That was hysterical!  Poor Ron!

Megan SQ
Monday 20th June 2005 16:18
Pumpkins
Umm, this felt too much like a recycling of the humor in the last chapter of the Transcript story. The set-up was the same - miscommunication between Molly and Ron. Except the first story was short, to the point and, well, first. :-) And this one felt contrived all along, especially Anthony's talk of probability theory at the end. Honestly, weighing two bad situations against each other is too much of an everyday occurence to warrant such pompous language. Anthony may be a bit of a show-off, but you have to know when to show off, or else you appear stupid. And you had us convinced that on the contrary, he's smart.

I don't know whether my review would still be negative, had I been unaware of your other story. But in this context, I think this story is forced and over-written. I also think that you have exceptional potential (as illustrated by the first story), and just need to come up with some fresh ideas.
Monday 20th June 2005 18:22Pumpkins (Author Response)

Fair points, thanks for the feedback!  I do see what you're saying about Anthony.  Please think of this story, if you will, as taking place in an alternate universe where schtick is the only law, while the 'real' Anthony resides in the first story.

x_Rose_x
Monday 20th June 2005 15:42
Pumpkins
lol I loved it! your story is really inventive and I love that you used the anthony talking to F n B idea again! keep it up if you are planning to do anymore of these type stories I can't wait to read them. they really are a refreshing change from the usual fan fics! 10/10 I love it!
Great work,
Rose
DADAGinny
Monday 20th June 2005 15:33
Pumpkins
This was great!  Not one to read at work!  Very funny!


Elsha
Monday 20th June 2005 14:50
Pumpkins
*spits tea all over the keyboard* You know, I really need to stop drinking while reading your stories. Pure genius. And major props for the use of the word lacunae, which is both perfect for what was being described and an incredibly Ravenclaw-ish word. How long did you envision this seige being, anyway? In the last story I got the impression it was only a few weeks, but this makes it sound longer.
Sunday 26th June 2005 20:42Pumpkins (Author Response)
Thank you so much! The siege is supposed to last most of the school year. I haven't decided yet whether it ends in time for the N.E.W.T.s. (Hermione will be so disappointed if she can't sit for them.)
Hank
Monday 20th June 2005 14:36
Pumpkins
Too funny.  Sounds like the twins were telling the truth...