majolie
Saturday 3rd January 2009 20:01 | Incurable Idiot |
| hee hee - just found this while rooting around for some fluff - this was fully satisfactory! |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 23rd September 2008 21:10 | Incurable Idiot |
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bookish327
Saturday 13th October 2007 20:46 | Incurable Idiot |
| What amazingly funny, sweet fluff! I was giggling and grinning while I read this, it was so cute and fun. I loved the line about a bed being named after Harry in the Hospital Wing. I also loved the line: "great and powerful Harry Potter, sitting on the Quidditch pitch, being as sappy as a Valentine's Day card in front of the whole Gryffindor team." I especially loved the last three lines of the story! So romantic and so funny! Please write more stories, even if they're one-shots. You obviously have a talent for funny, romantic one-shots, so please keep writing! |
Felix Felicis
Saturday 16th September 2006 19:12 | Incurable Idiot |
Now that was fluffy fluff. Not that that means I didn't absolutely love it! I think you had a really original idea here. This is my favorite line:
"Well," she began impatiently. "I’ve been waiting for this for 5 years. Would you kiss me already?"
That's just like Ginny. Harry's internal struggle at the beginning was very well done. Very convincing. I also liked the switching of places in the dream. Good job overall! |
Crookshanks
Saturday 3rd September 2005 14:17 | Incurable Idiot |
| he he cute |
levotatingT
Saturday 2nd July 2005 08:08 | Incurable Idiot |
That was amazing. I loved the whole ending when Harry fell off his broom.
Perfect amount of funny and fluff
great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
Laurel Carmer
Thursday 30th June 2005 10:42 | Incurable Idiot |
| I like H/G very much, but that gave even me a sacchrine overload. LOL In a good way, of course. |
sonicdale
Thursday 30th June 2005 06:08 | Incurable Idiot |
An idiot.
Sappy fluff. I needed a good dose of that today. Good work....
.... did Harry REALLY accidentally crash?????
Hm... |
weasleysrcool
Thursday 30th June 2005 01:00 | Incurable Idiot |
Yeah, you were right, lots of fluff. But you know what? Sometimes fluff is just what the doctor ordered. I love fluff. Keep writing from passion. Wonderful little fic. I loved every word of it. |
ninkenate
Wednesday 29th June 2005 18:42 | Incurable Idiot |
| I really liked this. It was a great blend of Fluff and Funny. The title was perfect with the ending. Good job.
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| Thursday 30th June 2005 14:43 | Incurable Idiot (Author Response) |
My Lit teacher is always talking about "bookend" essays, how things in the beginning relate to things in the end. Obviously, this was the result. Thanks for the review. |
Wolf's Scream
Wednesday 29th June 2005 15:40 | Incurable Idiot |
| Cute. All it took was a whack upside the head, then, eh? :-} Well-written.
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arios
Wednesday 29th June 2005 15:35 | Incurable Idiot |
| cute! really cute! |
batsnumbereleven
Wednesday 29th June 2005 14:35 | Incurable Idiot |
Very sweet.
I'm always amazed how other people can fit a whole story into 2500 words, when I seem to take about 10,000 to do the same thing. Excellent job.
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| Wednesday 29th June 2005 15:56 | Incurable Idiot (Author Response) |
Really? It's the exact opposite for me. I am amazed at the 10,000 word stories. Thanks for the review. |
Aaran St Vines
Wednesday 29th June 2005 13:26 | Incurable Idiot |
| I cannot imagine that this could possibly happen this way in canon, but I like the way you had it happen in this story. |
| Wednesday 29th June 2005 15:54 | Incurable Idiot (Author Response) |
| Thank you, and that's what I like about fan fiction: it doesn't have to be canon. |
