snowflake93
Wednesday 29th January 2014 17:32 | Dudders and the Twins |
| I like the story. I wish there was more to it. |
hermione&ginny
Wednesday 17th August 2011 18:49 | Dudders and the Twins |
| Great Short Story! |
captburke
Wednesday 11th November 2009 14:39 | Dudders and the Twins |
| Funny and fun |
unicorngirl1988
Monday 6th April 2009 00:34 | Dudders and the Twins |
| WoW! |
Hollu
Wednesday 29th October 2008 10:32 | Dudders and the Twins |
| I really enjoyed this story. Especially the sling shot part at the end. I go to school for Music and one of the Music Therapy teachers at my University was asking what he's supposed to do on Halloween (he's from England and apparently they don't really celebrate Halloween over there, or at least he didn't). He would say 'so I just give them sweeties then?' It was just funny how he kept saying 'sweeties' over and over, lol. We told him to make the older one's do funny tricks, hence 'trick or treat' . He seemed really enthusiastic about giving kids 'sweeties'! |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 13th July 2008 17:50 | Dudders and the Twins |
| hehe nice story :p |
aharkins
Friday 4th April 2008 13:49 | Dudders and the Twins |
Somehow I can really see Dudders as a practical joker and if he ever did hook up with the twins the whole world had better look out.
Thanks for writing and sharing your talent. |
jovelyn_mark
Tuesday 1st April 2008 11:17 | Dudders and the Twins |
| It's friggin funny! lol. Keep up the good work! |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 3rd February 2008 09:50 | Dudders and the Twins |
haha nice!!1
I wish that there were more stories of harry and dudley getting along :p
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majolie
Thursday 24th January 2008 19:20 | Dudders and the Twins |
| Loved it - very amusing! |
Steven Carnell
Wednesday 23rd January 2008 00:20 | Dudders and the Twins |
| Oh Yeah! So good!Well written, engaging, plotted and proof read. 8/10. |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 7th November 2007 20:14 | Dudders and the Twins |
haha i loved this
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bookish327
Wednesday 12th September 2007 21:01 | Dudders and the Twins |
I love it when Fred & George appear in H/G fan fic, since they always make me laugh, and I really liked your creative idea of getting Dudley curious about magic and Harry's world. It was cool to see a side of Dudley that wasn't completely despicable (but still a bit selfish, of course). Also, it was obviously humorous to have Fred, George, and Harry play off him in a curious, but unsure-of-his-motives way.
Thanks for a fun read! |
Delfino
Friday 17th August 2007 10:41 | Dudders and the Twins |
| Hahahahaha! The last line was perfect! This was a good, short read. Thanks for writing this. |
Reader 2
Friday 23rd February 2007 02:01 | Dudders and the Twins |
| Quite funny - most enjoyable |
lacyrachil
Thursday 16th November 2006 08:44 | Dudders and the Twins |
| I love this story. We needed to see a softer, normal side of Dudley. I hope to see some of that wit in the last book. |
No Idea Why I Smile
Sunday 1st October 2006 19:37 | Dudders and the Twins |
that was amusing...i like the ogk...ack...thing...hilarious...brilliant....
NIWIS+=forever
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Believer
Thursday 29th June 2006 17:18 | Dudders and the Twins |
That was fun
Dudley was very amusing complaining about his sweets while under attack. |
honourary_weasley
Wednesday 14th June 2006 03:14 | Dudders and the Twins |
| that was hysterical, if a little ooc. Cute read though, thanks! |
daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 17th May 2006 17:23 | Dudders and the Twins |
| that was cool. i like the nice side of Dudley better than the mean. |
Ardie Bea
Friday 12th May 2006 15:32 | Dudders and the Twins |
I remember commenting re. your "Great Scott, Potter" fic, pre-HBP, that your mature!Harry was rather unlikely - and then JKR goes and proves you to be very accurate indeed - I wonder if she'll do the same for your rehabilitation of Dudley?! I still think it unlikely but stranger things have happened!
"...his cousin standing there with his slingshot in his hand, another Ton-Tongue Toffee in the pouch, ready to interfere with any other spell pronunciation." This was a wonderful image! Dudders to the rescue, all righteous indignation and square shooting. Enjoyable. |
XXXmister-E werepony unit
Wednesday 1st February 2006 17:01 | Dudders and the Twins |
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siobh007
Wednesday 1st February 2006 12:26 | Dudders and the Twins |
| interesting ... it's a funny ending |
roberta26
Saturday 28th January 2006 18:00 | Dudders and the Twins |
| Loved it! Thanks!! |
Ishi
Wednesday 26th October 2005 23:41 | Dudders and the Twins |
"I'm not George, I'm Fred"
LOVE that line. BEST LINE IN THE WHOLE STORY!! And the perfect ending.
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jeanne
Friday 14th October 2005 12:47 | Dudders and the Twins |
| poor dudders! nearly gets killed and all he can think about is money.Great and hilarious too. |
XXXmister-E werepony unit
Saturday 3rd September 2005 10:51 | Dudders and the Twins |
| wonderful.brilliant.please make a sequal. |
Lady Padfoot
Sunday 7th August 2005 10:56 | Dudders and the Twins |
Cute! Beware the power of the slingshot. Personally, I'd rather be shooting other thigns at Bella though. Like large pieces of furniture. |
dophingirl79
Monday 1st August 2005 05:16 | Dudders and the Twins |
| Well that's one way to get Voldemort. send him some pranks, lol. |
DSDragon
Sunday 24th July 2005 14:51 | Dudders and the Twins |
| LMAO! This SERIOUSLY needs a sequel! Or more chapters! PLEASE continue! (Or sequel-ize) |
gypsy
Monday 4th July 2005 01:15 | Dudders and the Twins |
Cool, good job. I liked Dudley for once. Excellent idea with the slingshots.
Gypsy |
snowball
Sunday 3rd July 2005 22:17 | Dudders and the Twins |
| This was hilarous! A bit disbelieving, Dudley being on friendly terms with Harry but all the same, a good story |
Tourniquet
Sunday 3rd July 2005 20:46 | Dudders and the Twins |
| Good. Needed a bit more development of the Harry/Dudley friendship. |
levotatingT
Sunday 3rd July 2005 16:15 | Dudders and the Twins |
That was so funny!!! I loved it. It was a little strange how Dudley was all of a sudden being nice to Harry, but it worked!
great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
ebdarcy
Saturday 2nd July 2005 12:25 | Dudders and the Twins |
| Perfect summer reading...exciting but also light and fun. |
Astrid
Saturday 2nd July 2005 10:28 | Dudders and the Twins |
| How completely unrealistic and whimsical and funny! |
keshdi
Friday 1st July 2005 14:25 | Dudders and the Twins |
| The ending was a nice funny battlescene. Nice to see something not so
romance centered though the plot could do more to make the scenerio
more convincing.
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jeanne
Friday 1st July 2005 10:31 | Dudders and the Twins |
| This was hilarious. finally someone letting dudders be Different. good one shot. |
sonicdale
Friday 1st July 2005 05:29 | Dudders and the Twins |
Brilliant! Bloody Brilliant! Oh, you had me laughing like crazy. Dudley uses a toffee on Bella with a SLINGSHOT! Oh, my face hurts from trying not to laugh at work...
Love everything. This is cool -- it almost begs for a sequel, but I'm definately going to vote for it. Good luck, and Great work! |
juliet
Friday 1st July 2005 04:44 | Dudders and the Twins |
Not quite "death by chocolate" but pretty close. That was great!
Favourite line was:
“Boy, if you use that bloody pigeon tonight, I’ll fricassee it in the morning.”
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Arnel
Friday 1st July 2005 00:19 | Dudders and the Twins |
I never thought I’d say this, but “Go Dudley, Go!” I really like how you foreshadowed the bit with the slingshot earlier in the story...very JKR-like indeed.
There have been several stories in the past six months where Dudley seems to be more accepting than his parents of the magical world and I find myself actually liking what I see. You’ve done a really nice job of showing Dudley’s non-bullying side and Harry’s reaction to it. This is really well done and I enjoyed reading it. |
Kelleypen
Thursday 30th June 2005 18:06 | Dudders and the Twins |
| This was a really unexpected twist. Refreshing idea. I don't ever see it happening in canon, but it was great to read. Dudders ton-tonguing Bella with his slingshot---how cool was that? |
Melindaleo
Thursday 30th June 2005 15:27 | Dudders and the Twins |
| OMG, if there is a category for best humor, this would get my vote, lol. Bellatrix Lestrange being taken down by a Muggle slingshot, at Ton-Tongue Toffee, and Dudley Dursley is a hoot! I'm still chuckling. |
malko050987
Thursday 30th June 2005 10:05 | Dudders and the Twins |
| Great story! Unbelievable, but great. I didn't laugh until the end, though. But I can't really stop. *imagines Dudley with a slingshot taking over the wizarding world* *collapses with laughter* |
