gymnastgal19
Wednesday 16th January 2008 20:39 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
awww so cute! loved this story! nice way to get them all together... now i just need some of that candy :p
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pyromain
Sunday 1st July 2007 05:37 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
| this is s cute it is perfect, thanks for writing this beautifull story. |
Novera
Thursday 29th June 2006 22:36 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
sweeet very
SWEEET |
southpaw
Monday 26th June 2006 17:25 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
| I love the twins!! They have huge hearts for love and life. We should be so lucky to have friends like this. Good story |
Wooster
Monday 29th May 2006 21:31 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
*BIG HUGE GRIN*
Yeah, definitely born to write the twins. Brilliant beyond belief...sweet, yet still so FUNNY...I love the spider thing too...Heehee.
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Pug
Tuesday 2nd May 2006 16:46 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
lol, very cool.
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obsidiana
Saturday 31st December 2005 01:28 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
You know I can so see the twins as helpers of romance. That is so cute...you know I love the twins and think they are so the type to spike the chocolate strawberries. I also liked in your story Harry Potter and the Power of the Mind I like that the twins are so sauvy and level headed when business is a foot. I also can really see the havoc they will cause whilst having a store over the secret entrence to hogwarts.
Can't wait to read more of your writing.
Sid
Sorry Secrets of the Mind...anywhoo! It sure is great and I loved the Twins Scaring poor Harry so bad he blew the roof off...
Thanks for writing this and the other longer story, which I hope we will see more to before long.
Sid
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obsidiana
Saturday 31st December 2005 01:23 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
You know I can so see the twins as helpers of romance. That is so cute...you know I love the twins and think they are so the type to spike the chocolate strawberries. I also liked in your story Harry Potter and the Power of the Mind I like that the twins are so sauvy and level headed when business is a foot. I also can really see the havoc they will cause whilst having a store over the secret entrence to hogwarts.
Can't wait to read more of your writing.
Sid |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Friday 11th November 2005 13:56 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
Fluffalicious! This was so wonderful. May I have some more please... |
levotatingT
Tuesday 19th July 2005 10:31 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
AWWW that is so sweet, I'm sorry you missed the competition I pretty sure it would've won!! I loved how Fred and George put the potion on the strawberries, and then moll and Aurther watching them!!
It was perfect how you added Ron and Hermione in there
Great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
| Tuesday 19th July 2005 22:25 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate (Author Response) |
Your smily face is disappearing.
Thanks for the wonderful review. I am very bummed out that I
missed the competition...oh well. Aren't the twins great?
Don't worry, I will keep writing, check out Secrets of the Mind.
It is angsty in the beginning, but that goes away pretty fast and gets
nice and fluffy.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
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jamadagni
Friday 8th July 2005 23:55 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
I think those blokes are way more sensitive then people
give them credit for.
True true. I have this big plotline in my mind in which Harry talks with both Fred and George and they really exhibit maturity. As I read in another story, this is just their mask.
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| Saturday 9th July 2005 11:12 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate (Author Response) |
| Funnily enough that was how I got into writing myself. I had all
these plots I just loved and I so wanted to read about them.
Finally, I badgered myself into writing. I figured even if it
never gets posted online, at least I can have the satisfaction of
writing for myself and friends. So go ahead and write your ideas
I say, I for one would love to see more stories on the twins!
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jamadagni
Friday 8th July 2005 23:52 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
Wonderful! Wonderful! I usually don't review stories (but I make it a point to review images) but yours deserves it. If it were up to me, you would have won the Short and Sweet Contest. Too bad that 1. it is not up to me 2. you were not able to submit this in time.
Great going!
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| Saturday 9th July 2005 11:10 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate (Author Response) |
Wow, thanks for reading and leaving such a nice review. I find it
so flattering that people no only take the time to read what I write,
but to also take the time to leave a review. So thank you again
for doing both, reading this story and then leaving a review.
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freshwater
Friday 8th July 2005 15:15 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
| Oh, and as for the twins' axiom "What they don't know won't hurt them", the they/them must have been Ron and Hermione. But I thought you might have made their motto: "What we don't TELL won't hurt US." **snicker**snort**grin** |
| Friday 8th July 2005 15:28 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate (Author Response) |
I think I really like the way your mind works!
Gotta love the twins. Thanks for reading and leaving a
review. It's so rewarding to know on a personal level that people
like to read this story. It makes the effort worth while.
Thanks again.
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freshwater
Friday 8th July 2005 15:11 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
| I'm sorry you missed the deadline for the contest,but so happy you shared it with us anyway.....very,very nicely done. |
hewithnoname
Friday 8th July 2005 14:18 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
I liked this short and sweet. It's a well written peice of work, it also put me in a happy place LOL.
Once again well done.
Darren (Hewithnoname) |
| Friday 8th July 2005 15:29 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate (Author Response) |
Happy place? That is amusing. Thanks for reading this
little ficlet. Truth be known, I enjoy the fluff as well.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Fuzzy
Friday 8th July 2005 12:10 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
| Very sweet and fluffy! It's one of the best I've ever read. |
Fuzzy
Friday 8th July 2005 12:09 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
| Very sweet and fluffy! It's one of the best I've ever read. |
Fuzzy
Friday 8th July 2005 12:09 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
| Very sweet and fluffy! It's one of the best I've ever read. |
| Friday 8th July 2005 14:10 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate (Author Response) |
Wow, thanks for the compliment. Harry and Ginny are just the cutest little couple aren't they?
Thanks for reading this little story and leaving a review.
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Jake
Friday 8th July 2005 12:04 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
I think it would have made top five if you had managed to enter it into
the contest, I know that I really enjoyed it. Keep up the great work.
-Jake
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| Friday 8th July 2005 14:09 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate (Author Response) |
Oh don't tell me that! I was so bummed out when I realized I
missed the deadline. I really wanted to get this thing entered
because I felt it was a pretty darn good yarn. Alas, it was not
meant to be...maybe next time.
On the plus side, I am glad that you liked it, I had some fun writing
it. I cannot resist getting the twins in on some fun and
mayhem. I think those blokes are way more sensitive then people
give them credit for.
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for leaving a review.
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Rey
Friday 8th July 2005 12:03 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
| I love it! Write more like this! It is soooo cute!
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| Friday 8th July 2005 14:05 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate (Author Response) |
| I like fluff too. I tend to find myself more interested in long
convoluted plots then short fluffy stories, but there is something just
rewarding about writing them as well as reading them.
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dophingirl79
Friday 8th July 2005 10:01 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
| how sweet and Fluufy thats ok I like to read that once in a while. keep up the great work. |
| Friday 8th July 2005 14:04 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate (Author Response) |
Fluff has its place in the world...and I cannot resist its lure forever.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review, that's awesome to know that people can read these and enjoy them.
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graup_hagrid
Friday 8th July 2005 09:22 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
| Thanks for sharing this. Yes, it was fluffy and all, but also had some basis and it seemed plausible. Here's hoping we find at least some romance and good times during the dark days of HBP. |
| Friday 8th July 2005 14:03 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate (Author Response) |
Call me crazy, but I am thinking that some romance will find our Mr.
Potter in this book. I do not think that he will end up with
Ginny until book 7, but this one will be happier then five...call me
crazy but its a gut feeling.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review. When I woke up this
morning I was afraid this story would not get any reviews at all!
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DADAGinny
Friday 8th July 2005 09:05 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate |
You would have thought that they had transfigured her favorite book or something. Oh. I think they did.
That cracked me up!!!
I want to know who all was watching and what their reactions were! That was great!
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| Friday 8th July 2005 14:02 | Strawberries Dipped in Chocolate (Author Response) |
You know, I never really considered an outtake to this, but it could be a fun little ficlet to write...
I might just do it once, I get a few more chapters finished on SoM.
Thanks for the review and for reading, I really enjoyed this story and it's nice to know that other people liked it as well.
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