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Sunday 4th February 2007 19:28 | Marriage, Medinas and Souks. | | aw it was cute!! bravo! | SillyGillie
Sunday 9th October 2005 20:41 | Marriage, Medinas and Souks. | | What an awesome story! I clicked it because of the picture that was just made of it, and I'm very glad I did. Really nice portrayl of Ron and Hermione. Brilliant! | Bring and Fly
Friday 15th July 2005 09:45 | Marriage, Medinas and Souks. | I love the tone of this --the voice that you used fits wonderfully to express both viewpoints. I can almost feel I'm wandering along with them, getting bumped by donkeys and assaulted by various smells and the beat of the sun as I read. Very strong on visual imagery and storyline, IMHO, a powerful piece of writing.
Ron and Hermione are spot-on (I loved the line about the tea!LOL) and though I doubt we'll ever see anything like this in canon, this will stick in my head as their honeymoon. A great out-take, bart! | Kelleypen
Thursday 14th July 2005 11:23 | Marriage, Medinas and Souks. | | I love how sweet Ron is under his brashness. It's very insightful of you to write him this way. |
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